Reviews by parkesy23
Teacher's Pet by Missile-proof_glass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 300]
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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

love it

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

poor bella

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

oh no

love it

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Allegations & Transgressions

great chapter

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens

great chapter

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

wow poor bella

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conciousness

great

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

loving it

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

loving it

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

love it

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Investigations

excellent

love it

thanks

International Relations by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Written for the For The Sport Of Love Challenge.  Love begins to grow at the 2006 Olympics in Torino Italy between American figure skater, Rose Hathaway, and the Russian Golden Child, Demitri Belikov.  Four years later they are looking forward to reconnecting in Vancouver.  Will they be ready to ignore the rules and give in to the feelings that have grown between them?

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Categories: Vampire Academy, All Human
Characters: Dimitri Belikov/Rose Hathaway
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Twilight
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8637 Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2010
Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: International Relations

loved this one shot

all your stories are so fantastic.

love vampire acadamey - so this was great

thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I love it too.  I can't wait for the last book to come out this December!!!

The Pool Boy by Lady Blue Knight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Bella lusts after the hunky man who takes care of her pool. Perhaps if she's lucky, she can persuade him to perform a bit more than just pool maintenance; AH JazzyBells.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4288 Read Count: 523
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great one shot

thanks

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

love that bella and edward stood up to them.

cant wait for the next chapter and his reward

have a great time away

thanks

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

fantastic chapter

love how she teases him with the outfit

cant wait for more

thanks

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Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

thanks - absoultely loving this story

Glad to see them finally happy - very sweet chapter = so perfect

thanks

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

excellent chapter

typical guys - cant get their heads! out of the gutter

loved it

thhanks heaps

The slave who wouldn't obey. by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

great first chapter

thanks

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Pleasing Bella.

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The lords of Volterra

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The good doctor and the bad masters.

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Edward and the slave Tanya.

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The journey to Volterra

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Edward meets Bella

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The training room

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's punishment

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Jacob Black's escape

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

good on bella

love it

thanks

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Another kind of punishment

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle

great chapter

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

love it

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: A slave trainer's obligations

great chapter
thanks

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and helping me reach over 300 reviews. 

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro

great chapter

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

hopefully jasper wakes up with amnesia and is all nice as pie now LOL

loving your story

thanks



Author's Response:

He he, what else could possibly happen to Jasper I wonder...

Thank you for boosting my reviewership. It's far from The Volturi's Order, but we're getting somewhere, lol 

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Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

great to get the understanding behind jasper

thanks

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Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac

great chapter

glad that jasper has regained himself and will change things

loving it

thanks

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: There's something about Rosalie

another great chapter

thanks

Witness Protection by twicrack83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42792
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Protector

james must be there

loving it

thanks



Author's Response:

glad you're still liking it!  the suspense is just getting started.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Premonitions

great chapter

loved it

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

wow

sounds like a excellent story

thanks

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Home

great chapter

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor

great chapter

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Misunderstanding

great thanks

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Unstable

great chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

hello, and welcome to the story!!  i'm so glad you're enjoying it so far.  i hope you continue to like all the twists and turns.  and thank you so much for reading and for all the wonderful reviews!  ;)

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Intruder

great chapter

love it thanks

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Victims

great chapter

maybe jake - that will stir things up

loving it

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

great chapter

nice twist



Author's Response:

glad you like the addition of jake.  lots of readers were thinking it would be jasper, but it fit much better to have jake be the body guard.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers

loved the story - how hillarious to walk in on that LOL

great chapter



Author's Response:

haha!  yeah, that was a very interesting day at work.  something i will never forget, but it makes my job fun at times, so i embrace the weirdness.  glad you're still enjoying the story!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Help

great chapter

loving it

thanks

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255138
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

great chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review...lml

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

excellent chapter

thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

love it

go alice

thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

love it

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

great chapter

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

love it
thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

excellent chapter

glad she stuck up to tanya

loving it

thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you ...lml

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great first chapter

sounds great

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loving it

thanks

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for teading

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great chapter

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love it

thanks



Author's Response:

Great...

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love it

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thanks...

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading ,,,,

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

loved it

great chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ...lml

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter

love it

thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

loved it

thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

perfect  chapter

thanks



Author's Response:

Perfect??? Thanks..lml

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

loved the speech

great chapter

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

love it

thanks

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter

poor bella

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

great chapter

james is so sick

love this story

thanks



Author's Response:

Yes ... I agree..lml

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

love it - nice way to put a scare in there

thanks

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

love it

thanks

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

love it

thanks

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

love it

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

loving it

thanks



Author's Response:

You are almost all caugt up... that means that you can get a teaser soon ...

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Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

great chapter

glad she got it out

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

great chapter

loving it

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

excellent

love it

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

loving it

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

excellent

love it

thanks

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

LOVING IT

THANKS

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

wonder if heather is Victoria

loving it

very interesting

thanks



Author's Response:

Bella would know Victoria,,, but that was a good guest ....lml