Membership status: Member
Bio:
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club
Good story so far. My pesonal taste is not to continually rotate POVs but to stick with one (Bella woudl be my choice for this story) and communicate the others through it in 3rd person. But I can see how, as a writing exercise, changing POVs can be useful .
Very intense story. I have never been in a BDSM club, but you have certainly helped paint that picture. Thanks and keep going.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I realise the different POVs can be a bit confusing, but I think it's important to my story that the main characters get their time to speak.
I really don't think my club is very realistic, so don't be dissapointed if reality isn't like that :-)