that was scary there for a few moments. i am glad it was not bella it wasn't her time. emily had a boy healthy one at that. love that she and jacob are getting along well. seems there might be something there.

i am hoping bella and edward talk about tanya. seems tanya might want to spark things up. but it seems edward and bella are figuring things out as they go along. hope she is able to get a scholarship since i know she won't let edward pay for it

well i am thrilled that the judge could see that bella and edward want what is best for their baby girl. renee deserved no part and i feel sorry for michelle but at least she is getting pictures and will know about her grandaughter. maybe one day if michelle changes and they are able to come to terms she just might get a chance to have some sort of contact. well here is too the future. loving it

wow what a way to leave us hanging. i want more. i am stuck as to what mr. newton wants. will he be there jsut to talk or will he take bella so they will have acces to their grandchild, hmmm. man edward to you screw the pooch on this one big time. i can not believe you where this stupid to go out and get drunk and have some skanks perfume all over you. i hope for your sake you didn't do anything with anyone or else she should have your balls on a plate cause you deserve the beat down all those women int he house are going to do on you. love it

wow hell of a story

thumbs up to you and your family

having kids period is hard. but to be young and have them i assume would be harder. i am glad it ended well for your family

love the story thanx

wow charleigh is here yeah. man her labor seemed very easy. thank god for her. man mine was hours. i wish i was bella. i wonder if after having charleigh will they try for any other kids or are they happy they have one. their miracle baby. i am so excited for them and i cna just imagine the grandparents are estatic

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well that was surprising. i sure hope edward can keep to his promise for his father to not interfere. i am afraid he might not be able to . i feel abd for not having so much faith in edward. good luck bella

wow bella went over her limit. i am shocked by the spankings 50 my own ass hurts thinking about it. i think i would have said worse. i am shocked that an ex showed up at his doorstep and he carried on a conversation with her and sounded hurt. i was happy bella showed up an staked her claim and she has every right at being pissed at him. he did deserve to be called an asshole becuase he basically made bella fell like trash and the other girl was more important. i can not wait to see what happens next

poor edward he is truly sick. i am glad bella took care of him

i also understand why she will not marry him. she would be marrying him and not carlisle but it seems carlisle has something over his boys will he be honest and let bella in. if he does i know he will not forget it. she does love him. i think it is great that her parents are trying to come together. it seems their communication got lost a long time ago. love it

alot i was not expecting. wow to hear that renee still loves charlie and she saved the cards and not spent the money that was a shocker. i like the way charlie asked her out and let her know they had alot to talk about.i am glad bella is getting a second chance to have her parents. maybe she will make some changes in what she wants out of her life. love it

wow i am shocked that bella is calling it quits. she always said if carlisle came in there relationship she was done. so i wonder if edward will man up or let bella go. it says alot she is giving up 10 grand a month and the great sex. still strange she calls him daddy but hey. it does say alot she is trying to prove a point. will he push her into someone else's arms, time will tell

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wow did bella screw up on so many levels. no drinking no boys and she didn't tell him where she was. she does deserve to get in to trouble. i know we have all been there at some point but she is getting married and she knew what she took on when she was with edward. she does need to grow up or be a kid. she can not be both. she better be careful before she loses everything. she promised him something and she didn't keep her promise to edward. she can not hold him to his promises if she doesn't keep hers. i guess it is all part of her immaturity but i hope edward points that out to her. there can not be two rules for them their has to be one set that they follow.

well i think we all didn't have any doubts. edward your family has done one hell of a job on you. you need so counseling my dear. bella was the best thing that happened to you and you shit on her. she would never betray you. i think is what hurts the most. that you second guessed her love for you. she was loyal and was so whipped. she called you daddy for fucks sake. omg and you say the baby wasn't yours. she should make you suffer.

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i love it that bella is taking responsiblity for what she can and accepting she may need help. that is great. edward and her dad love her so much and want whats best for her and the baby. wow, carlisle called bella. hell that is great. i love that he is reaching out to her. he wants to be apart of her life and charleigh. 1st grandchild. he knows he messed up and wants to make amends. big step in him coming forward. i am glad that bella is not going to keep the baby that she knows family is important. she may have started out a big princess int he begining but i am sure that bella has grown in alot of ways and she is learning what is important. loving it

oh bella always pushing. well you got your daddy back. i hope you are happy. i bet edward didn't see that coming. they are too funny together. i am surprised jasper didn't call edward. i truly expected edward to spank her and while he did her water would break. love it

at first i wasn't so sure about her calling him daddy but i have to say i have loved this story so much

i am glad things went the way they did. it all came together

love it thanx for writing

wow so it seems they have come to a crossroads in life and are wondering is it worth it anymore. now it seems they will be in a situation that will make them relax yes they love each other and they things we have been fighting about lately are minimal. or it is time we go our separate ways. so it should be interesting to see what happens

wow what a dad. poor bella. it kills me that parents who are suppose to protect their children treat them like trash. he obivously has issues if he can kill her pet. and he is a cop, man i fear for the town. someone has to know he isn't 100% there. you can get drunk and kill animals and beat your daughter and not have any signs for anyone to pick up on. man oh man the way people get away with shit. poor bella. why did her mom send her away. if he does it to bella he proabbly did it to renee and if she knows she is no better than him

wow i am a little shocked by jacob reaction. he knows her father is beating her but yet he stands by the sidelines. the cullens are trying to get to the bottom of what is going on but again seems bella hasn't had anyone in her corner nor anyone she can trust and the person who she is suppose to trust and love her hurts her who would she turn too. man rough road for bella. where do you turn to. charlie needs help and i am hoping someone comes forward. but hey going on for years and noone has suspected or said anything. seems that would make them all liable and foolish. so of course noone would want to say what they see or have concerns about. they should feel just as guilty for not standing up for a child who has noone to have a voice for her.jacob should be happy finally his friend has someone finally to take a stand for her

all in good time. she is finally safe for the moment. she is learning that others out there have been through what she has and they truly have compassion and want to help. they are not afraid of charlie and can't understand why noone has stopped him before this. renee you truly can not call yourself a mother. some people should not be allowed to raise children that is fer sure. parents are suppose to love and nuture not harm and scare. I am glad bella is engaging with the cullens and letting them show her compassion. love it

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bella has got herself in a tangled web. good luck bella. edward thought it would be easy to overpower bella but once again she has proven him wrong. good luck edward. looking forward to the story.starting off with a bang

well bella i am thinking edward has found out you dupped him and is pissed. now your shit in your life is thrown in your face how sad. i guess you guys have a lot to deal with and having the parentals around oh getting godd. love it

oh edward what are you playing at. hmmmmmmmmm wonder how bella will react now to him with getting the best O of her life. so love it

beautiful. happy ending. they all found peace in some way and brought new life and add to their family.

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my first thought is themeadow with edward and bella showing the love.

i feel bad that this has ripped their family apart. poor carlisle having to deal with the turmoil tearing him apart. maybe if esme explained why she was so upset maybe they could come to a compromise to make her feel loved and wanted. 

i am glad that they worked things out with carlisle.

i am kinda scared to see what happens with esme. mama bear look out

got to love esme. bella is so strong. her dad did the best he could with her. he was smart instead of dying inside or curling him within himself he was still there for her. taught her self defense taught, told her to keep painting her mom would have wanted that, they fixed a car up together. he was great for her and she is better for all of it. she has along ways to go as well. i love that bella put make in his place. she is not a push over. i am so loving the story. can't wait for the next chapter. thanx

ahhh you got to wonder how much heartbreak a person can take. she has been through hell and back and left to gain some normalcy and to paint again a week later she loses her dad and her life is once again turned upside down.oh my heart goes out to her. she is so strong but i have to wonder when she will snap. i am glad edward came down for her but i was kind of hoping they all would be there for her. so loving it all and can't wait for the next chapter. loving it thank you

ahhhh well that went better than i thought. she isn't shutting him out. seems she just might let him love her. she wants to. i am glad she is leaning on him. love it

i so want to know what billy said to bella. i feel for her. so shocked that the community didn't come to either bella's or charlie's sid efor comfort or anything. i do not blame her for wanting to sell the house and not look back. her parents where everything to her and they are gone.so i am hoping she learns to live in a world where she exists and learn to love herself. i feel if she does that then she could let edward and his family in and learn to love them and know she is alos worthy of their love. she has had it tough i hope she puts all of it in her art and live through her painitngs and get an education and make her parents proud of her for moving and living on. they where already proud of her. i so love it. thanx

wow expecting the parents to act better. they where so nice and supporting and now that they don't like their children's choices they are acting foolish and non supporting. they may not like what their kids do but they should still show some support and love. shame on all of them. i am hoping they all stick to their guns and finish school and maybe get a big place together to share expenses. i can see it working. love it

i am hoping that the relationship between bella and the group can become better. i have to believe that she misunderstood went em was saying. but then again it has been so long for bella to have friends it is all new. takes time. garrett you did a good thing and it seems isabella may be showing her art soon. she just needed a little reassurance and it seems the class has given that her. love it

oh mike i have a feeling and i hope it is correctt hat you will regret getting in bella's way.

bella's bday-how sweet her dad had it already arranged for her to get flowers. too sweet he really loved her. i am glad she has friends to be there for her now. hopefully ben, angela and bella have a show and show their art.

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love the update. a boy i am thrilled all went well. lilly is such a happy sister.

they are very lucky to have such a supportive family

ahh life is too perfect

wonderful family and a thriving practice. great family and friends

what more can anyone want

so loved the talk they all had. it so explained so much. i am so looking forward to bella uncovering her parentage and how it all effects her. poor katherine and william. seems as if the bad vampires got their parents and left them orphans. i can see why they harbor ill feelings. their lives where changed and there is no going back. it will be intersting to find out how they came to be a witch and a wizard. vampires i can see because you are changed. but maybe in bella's case where her mom was human and dad was vampire i am a little worried maybe the vampires my not be keen on a hybrid in their mist. i wonder how they will react to bella. will she become full vampire or will she remain half and half. gettign good. so love it

looking forward to bella piecing things together. it is slowly come and when it does wow

very interesting. it is cool that she is finding out more about herself. i am glad it seems that they are all trying to get along.

ahhhhh i am so happy bella came clean to rose and emmett. that was the best thing ever. so now edward doesn't have to hide and they will know how to deal with him and look out for him at the same time. now they can also help teach him. oh it is so great. i love that em is taking on the role and helping. edward is so proud of himself. he needed to belong. we all need a purpose

intresting. i am glad she listen to her instincts. he is not good enough for her. it is all about him not them. looking forward to the next chapter

so sad don't know why i thought they would welcome edward back with open arms. i guess with jake he still felt something but sam had to look out for the pack and was unsure of edward. my heart broke there. seems edward keeps losing his family. i hope nothing happens to bells. maybe when they have kids they will know what it feels like to protect. love it

ahhhhh i so love that bella told renee the truth and she couldn't stop asking him questions. off course edward answers.

the girls how precious.i knew edward would make a great dad

they both are great together and thrilled they have friends like rose and emmett who accepted them both fully. what a great family

i had so much fun reading the story and loved how it ended thank you

OMG i am devasted. OMG i can't believe Jane is gone. that is what i am guessing of the way you put they found her body. i am so sad that she was finally going to be happy and found people who love her and she would be safe and it was taken from her in a flash. dam i ma not sure bella will be able to handle this blow. man oh man also when their lives are coming together they are thrown this shit. i am looking forward to as where we go from here. thank you for writing

ahhhhh that poor girl been to hell and back

she is finally home with a family that loves her and wants her

i am glad she has people to care for her. tough road but with all the love she will make it through

wow edward seems different. he seems as if he has some deomns he needs to deal with or an anger issue. i hope bella knows what she is doing by staying with him

oh Alice you are a ball of fire. I am surprised they didn't see each other on the plane or land. man i can't wait for them to meet. wooohoo

wow that was awkward. very awkward . i can't wait to see what bella's reasoning is for not wanting to converse with edward. love it

man they have alot of talking. he was cruel. i would almost go to say he raped her. but he didn't force himself on her he took what he wanted brutally and got off without a care to her. but yet she still said she loved him. man messed up. she needs to be a little more honest in the relationship or it is not going to work. i do not know what dream land she is in. what the fuck edward where did all your anger come from and why take it out on bella. man you have some explaining to do.

i am blown away. iwas expecting some sort of retaliation but wow was not expecting what happen to edward and bella. i am sorry for bella for what happened to her and i am hoping she presses charges and her and edward move on. i feel so bad. now it seems there may be a little problem in their relationship as to what happens and i hope not. wow just when i thought they where heading off to a happy relationship a big wrench was thrown into it. good luck guys. looking forward to how things work out from here

well seems they are working things out

him irina or tanya it seems you are here to reck havoic. look out bella

oh my irina what have you done now. man he doesn't want you. you are delusional and need help. get over it. anthony needs a better home and really you do not want a kid. give him up and go live your life somewhere else.