Reviews by twilipated
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625400
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I have to admit, I'm a little scared.  The first part of the story was hard enough to get through but I persevered...and have followed you from early on FF.  By chance have you mapped out the length of this story and can you please forewarn me how dark future chapters are?  A simple heads up would be so helpful.  Thank you. 



Author's Response:

There are only a few chapters left in the story. I promise it won't be anything like the beginning of the story. I can't say more than that without giving away the ending, just know that I'm aware what Bella has been thru and how much a person can take.

Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Gah, how about an early release for the next chapter as your long term fans have had to follow your story from one internet sight to another! How many chaps is this story anyway?  Wow, its been a rough road and I certainly cannot wait for Bella's HEA!  Thanks for continuing the story amongst all the drama to continue to provide this story to your loyal readers.  It was really hard to make it through a lot of the graphic abuse chapters but for the people who complained about the graphic abuse, I wonder do they realize that their are a lot of EVIL people out there capable of these horrendous acts.  As one person mentioned to me, people read to learn and what i've learned from your story is surviving a traumatic experience.  What's wrong with that?  Abuse is obviously not a pleasant thing to read about but learning to survive is extremely important.  Thanks for your continued dedication to the story and best wishes for productive writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

All I want to do is gush about how lovely your writing is....thank you for sharing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373505
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Ahhh, very nice!  Thanks for the Mother's Day present, as all I wanted from my boys was some time to sit and read fanfic.  Happy Mother's Day to you!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Damn, your good!  What is your secret?  Birthday's and Life in general doesn't stop you from writing or posting!  Way to go and thanks for feeding my twilight fanfiction addiction!



Author's Response:

LOL...Um...I'm a stay at home mom with no life outside of my five year old and not quite two year old.  This is what keeps me sane!  :D  Naptime and bedtime are my writing's best friends.  My kids are light sleepers, I can't get much done as far as housework, so I write instead!

Reviewer: twilipated Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Damn, you spoiled us.  How will we survive the wait?