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It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-To Spank or Not To Spank

Ooh! The nipple ring charm! Branded!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Ooh, intriguing start!

Well written and not the usual woe is me Edward!



Author's Response:

Mouse: Thank you so much. I thought 4 years would be too long for a pity party for Edward.

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....

Oh, so, who's mystery man?

Read on McDuff!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

Ooh, jealousward rears his pretty little head!

 

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

Never saw that one coming! Pissed of Bella to come!!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

I'm sorry, I know I should laugh at Edward, but hahahaha!



Author's Response:

Please, please laugh.  I think we all did.  Thanks for continuing to give this story a chance. I love hearing your reviews.

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

Leave it Emmett to see right to the hert of the matter lol

Am loving this so far xx

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

Wow! Emmett being the one to talk sense. Whod'd a thunk it?

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Uh oh. Pissed off Bella to reappear methinks

x

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Gotta love Jasper (and I do) and his logic.

xx



Author's Response:

Mouse:  It's a good thing Edward has the Cullens!  Thanks again for reading and thanks for being my 300th reviewer here. 

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-The Plan

Oh my! I cn just imagine Edward's embarrasment at the books Emmett bought for him, if only he could blush!

x

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

Can he keep his promise? Hmmm....

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

OH!! Not a happy Edward!

Methinks I'm not a fan of Julian!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body

So, the penny has finally droppe, Bella isn't as fragile as he thought! Good old Emmett!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

Oh Lord! Bite her already Edward! It's what she wants!!!

(I am loving this in case you didn't get that from previous reviews)

x



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  I am enjoying your reviews so much!  Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys

Bless Esme! I love that closing line!

And fair play, Edward playing Bella at her own game!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research

Oh dear, I can see the offices now! Bless Emmett!

And I really don't like Julian!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Fall

I haven't laughed at a fic in soooo long!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

I can totally understand Bella's argument, lets just hope Edward comes to his senses, and soon!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-Wicked Games

What a minx that girl has turned into!

and the outfit, lovely!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

I really like Tanya in this fic, it makes a change her not being portrayed as an out and out bitch constantly after Edward

x

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

OMG!!! I was howling!!!!

 

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

I wish I could ride the J train!

What a lesson, I wish the boys I grew up with had them! lol



Author's Response:

Don't we all, sister, don't we all....

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

All serious and heartwarming until that last line just made me LOL!!!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24-Testing Boundaries

The bathroom incident may just haunt him for all his eternity!

Esme is Wonderful!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-Place Your Bets

Ooh, inuendo Bella, me likey!!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances

I agree with you both tbh. loved the fact that edward is being all lovey and sexual, but agree with the cockblock, as much as I want them to get it on, I get that he is just being him!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27-Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!

Go Edward!!!! Thank god he didn't take the Emmett route of asking!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last

W...O...W!!!!!

That was HAWT!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

LMAO Bella really is testing him.  Poor Edward!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Bella's Real Fantasy

Oh, Bella hits the nail on the head. He can't understand why someone would love him when he doesn't love himself!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights

Ohhh spanky spanky! In a car no less!!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33-Fear No More

If only everyone's first time was like this!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-The Morning After

So the parents hate him.  I am not surprised, but I'm sure Edward will find a way around that!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35-Time

ooh, loves me an Aston MArtin!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando

Oh the shame!!!

And having to admit what they had done!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

As much as I want to call you names for Bella's dismissal of Edward from the hospital, I can't!! I totally understand why she is doing it!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38-Hanging On

Jealousward rears his pretty little head!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39-Harlot

gotta love make up sex!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

SO, are things truly wonderful for the hppy couple?

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

Naughty Bella!! Loved it!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

Oh it can only go wrong can't it!

Reviewer: mouse555 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

I have to admit, I kinda saw that coming! But very well written!!!



Author's Response:

M:  You've had a busy day. THANK YOU SO MUCH for reviewing so many chapters!  I loved reading each and every one. Don't forget about the outtakes which are posted under a separate story entitled HOW TO WIN BACK OUTTAKES.  The next outtake should be up by Friday.