omg i just love the relationship that she has with esme! i know in alot of ff's that they have a good relationship but this one seems to be that much more special! sounds like bella has really been through some shit and esme has been such a rock for her! i can't wait to find out and also what mistakes edward has made.  it's great that he feels the same way the next morning as he did the night before and one of the lines i love when she spoke about how it wasn't her words they're interested in..."it's what I'M interested in"..mmmmhmmmm love that shit!! oh yeah!!!lol! and i loved the conversation between bella and alice especially this line..."what kind of details are we talking..oompa loompa?birthmark shapes and locations? a rundown on his dirty talk? a list of sexual positions used and how often? or would you prefer a fairly accurate estimate of his dick size?!!!....i frickin loved that whole statement and had to chuckle that it kinda stopped alice in her tracks to think about her enquiry..hahaha! excellent chapter i just love to bits so far!

well i have to say that i find edward to be very patient and he obviously has strong feelings for bella considering she seems to be a bit of a bitch at times and really narky but yes i guess underneath it all she is a bit selfless!!  it's like they do understand each other at this point anyway but need to get to know more of each other and if they don't have sex again soon i'm going to explode cos ima h00r like that okay..nuff said!lol! btw i did think that emmett was a real douche and bella did well to leave the room and bring her anger under control...i'll definitely give her that! and she is rather comical with her..'raw'? ways!

geez it seemed to take ages for me to read this only cos i kept getting interrupted by RL and it just pissed me off to no end! anyways i have to say that i did enjoy emmett and bellas banter about  condoms on gilligans island!!  but i have to say that smart edward certainly came up with the best idea and most practical! lol! is it for real that bella can't have children or what? mmmm liked that bit of lemony goodness in there as well!

yayyyyy woohooooo!! nice one and it was so good he is such a swoonwothy considerate unselfish fucking hot lover!! geez i thought she'd never put out lol!!

Geez emmmett and rose shared their fucking with everyone it seems. Ewwww. Lol. Love e&bs heavy make out session. And she should've told mike that hes an interfering jealous fuckwit punk loser and to mind his own business and to go fuck himself. Yeah!

he is so damn sexy it hurts!! i love that he's so horny and i can't wait for bella to get her shit together lol.  

ohhhh i'm so glad that got to talk a little about what could eventuate. and the chemistry seems to be rising. lol. even from bella no matter how cautious or hesitant she may be.

so here i start another one of your addictive stories.

omg poor bella what possessed her to marry such a fucking loser. hope she didn't sleep in their bed lol.  ewwww. 

Yayyyyyy!!!omg!finallly her head is out of her ass. Good girl bella! And a very wealthy dr mcfuckme as well . Mmmm mm. Love your work!!

I was wndering when he was going to make an appearance. Glad edward got to beat the fucker!! Woohoo!!

It was great lemony goodness. Really hot!  I still think its ridiculous that shes still holding out i mean seriously they're doing everything else so what's the damned difference. Also he's just as much at risk of being hurt as she is. Its not all about her. And risks are oart if life in general.  Just bite the bloody bullet and go for it. He's proved above and beyond how much he loves her and is committed to her short of proposing!

Great chapter

oh so sad about their little girl but otherwise the glimpse into their parenthood is very positive lol. another excellent chapter and looking forward to the sequel.

that was aaaabsolutely frickin awesome! what a wonderful wedding and of course i'm rapt cos i'm guessing that bella is pregnant!! everything was so  well done thankyou so much for giving them such a great day and life lol. thoroughly enjoyed that and love the pics too

that was an excellent chapter love lots of citrus. and you wrote the pregnancy suspicions and reveal so good. being as how edward is a dr yes he should've at least suspected. but he did eventually click so it was wonderful. don't blame them for not wanting to get back to the real world especially knowing that mike is in it.

haha dr mcfuckme?!!!! love it!

they should have both lol. love the house pics they're gorgeous. so much happening just need bella to shoot mikes ass and all will be good in the world lol. hmmm i need a husband who can buy me a house CASH!!!

well shit what are the odds of that happening twice in your life.

Omg i have to wonder if that woman really does deserve edward. Bloody hell he is a seventy times seven forgiving person.  Bout time she pulled her head out of her ass its been up there so many times. I understand she would have guilt but yeah cmon edward or mike?seriously was there any question...obviously not cos edward is alive. Deal with the choice. She has an awesome family a wealth of love n support. Oh rant over glad they can finally move on.

Hot dayum it was all good. Sex with edward in a vanquish?...mmm mm the ulti.ate fantasy  lol

What a frickin douche aro is i hope him and those bitches pay.

Love that they're gonna be making babies once her contraception wears off. 

So sad about rose but she has a strong and awesome support group.

Yayyy finally a marriage proposal. And babies coming and grandbabies for charlie lol. Felt sorry for edward when the cops arrived st his doir. He did well not to have a major meltdown. But at least all is good.

I completely understand edwards reasoning but i also understand bellas hurt. Great chapter and of course edward got to smash that little sleeze in the face.

Great chapter. Love the lemon. 

ohhh damn another frickin hot lemony chapter. love your work. 

i can't understand how she could risk throwing away what she has with edward just because of what mike is doing. she should be getting closer to edward not distancing herself. geez it's not mike so much ruining everything...but edward was right she's giving him that control. glad they talked and she's pulled her head out of her ass again because yes edward has more to lose than she has.

this was an excellent story yet again. thankyou so much for sharing your amazing talent. it had it's moments for me but overall i loved it and the deep love you had portrayed by these two and their whole family. love your work you should be proud :)

well i hope bella puts her in her place doesn't take her shit stands up to her and tells her to fuck off and never come back right from the get go i know i would. just like how she rejected to talk to her on the phone. i wouldn't even let her anywhere near my home husband or children!!!

about frickin time she was dead!! i think e&b will be fine. traumatic experiences like that bring you much closer together and cause you to value life each other and your time together. i mean too much therapy crap keeps bringing it all up. like they said they just need to put it behind them and move on!! just hope marie will be ok.

oh for fucks sake surely the fucking cops should be onto them they're two-bit criminals and i hope his brother becomes someones bitch in jail fucking dick!!

well fuck!! this sucks and it's almost 1am and i have to be up at 6 but i can't stop reading!!that fucking fbi dude is a fucking crook i bet!!

oh for fucks sake when are they gonna catch the bitch. geez i hope edward keeps it together. i hope they both do and i hope you've got an awesome demise for that bitch!!

wow that was such a good christmasy chapter. the snow globes are really lovely. but i am looking forward to their fun sexy time. edward is so frickin hot!

Omg didnt renee basically incerminate herself lol stupid bitch. As if anyone is gonna believee accusations when she's written it all in that letter. Dumb STD ass bitch.

I hope bella stands up to that bitch again and doesn't even give her an inch of thinking she is destroying her life.

They're all a bunch of fuxking losers...that kid his parents that xop renee!!!. And that dixk from the school? .hope edward sues his ass! And that fucking renee grrrr! Glad it all got sorted rho for bella. Now just catch that fuckwit renee.

Wow they are such wonderful loving parents. Yes as for that kate hmmmm. 

omg wtf does she want. spose she heard bella married a rich man and wants a piece of it and her man lol!! so wonderful that marie is progressing. kids are always pretty different tho when they have some good quality alone time with their parents rather than having to share with their siblings.

Wow you struggled with this chapter?!! I thought it was great. Love the way you wrore them handling their naughty kids. I really enjoyed the whole chapter. Excellent writing. 

Glad they sorted things and that edward doesn't want renee anywhere near their kids

her loser mom lol!! marie is so cute and of course edward is so frickin hot with his wife and kids!!! love this.

Excellent chapter and especially that hot lemon lol. And i have never heard of epcot. Defs on my list  WHEN i visit there lol. 

wow i can completely understand her enjoying his company and attention. her mother is such a loser!

awwww that was so beautiful. what a wonderful love story. so glad she got closure with charlie after he died. everthing about this chapter was just magnificent. thankyou so much for this amazing story even tho there were times bella pissed me off so much the HEA kept me going lol. only cos i'm a wuss. your pics and pervy pics are all fantastic. i thoroughly enjoyed it. now it's gonna take me some time to get through all of your stories especially when i get interrupted reading by RL shit. lol. i'm praying that i find myself a yummy APFL edward. 

ohhhh the IT is here!!! but i have to say that i love edward and the wonderful gifts he gets for his girl. mmm mm an audi. and  that birthday sex yummy yummy, you alsways have me panting salivating and libido somersaulting with your edwards hotness and those lemons!! love your work. 

huge sigh of relief. so glad that they got to talk it out. it was great that edward called garrett and gave her the space she needed. and yes she was being ungrateful but at least she realised it. did her asshat fucktard douchebag father get killed!! i fucking hope so...or at least he can get severely punished in every way in prison for what he did to bella and everyone else. it's great that her and edwards family have rallied to help her back to recovery. btw i love how garrett and emmett ambushed edward to get him to rest.

ohhhhh man their sex is through the fucking roof!!! so frickin hot it just makes you squirm or turns your bones to liquid especially when edward talks dirty. mmm mm. such a yummy chapter. wouldn't hawaii have been the most ideal place to propose? oh well absolutely loved the chapter!

yayyyy finally they're back to where they were before. i loved this chapter i have to say anj is such a crack up. they're engaged and have set the date so that's great. i do hope they can have children. love that they're smexin again...very niiiice

Oh i love sexy pervy horny doctor.lol. bellas not complaining though i wouldn't either. It's great that they're away alone together and enjoying each other without work or friends n family around. Loved the whole chapter 

hope charlie gets thrown in prison and gets abused in there. he's a dick and i'm so glad bella stood up to him. he can't get away with it. some fucking cop he must've been. her gifts sound great i'll have to go check out the pics. i had a feeling something would happen to her while she was out getting coffee but i thought she might run into james.

I love that bellas so happy and mmm yes that kiss and that she's going to give them a chance.  And emmett sparking rosalie lol nice

Edward is such a frickun awesome bf. I need someone like him to love my cellulite and rolls lol

hmmm yes she was rather silly not to at least let him explain. and i'm glad that angela ripped into her about it all. edward is so fucking sexy it hurts lol. i just love your stories i actually started another one before i realised i was reading this one..omg trying to read too many at once plus the updates i get. so i thought i'd finish this one first lol. then continue the other one then read more. love all the pics too.