Reviews by Haley Alice18
Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Love Rock N' Roll

awww its moments like this i consider switching back teams.....

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Where the Boys Are

saw it comin' but the banner was a big give away, too, so.........ya.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

Jake's a dickshit!!!!! Hahahahaha!!!!! WAHOOO Billie is finally here!!!!!!!!!!!!! Billie Rae Cullen is like Billy Ray Cyrus, HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! B.R.C and B.R.C!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm all jacked up on Mountian Dew!!!!! Fo shizzzzzzzzznizzzzzzzzzzz

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

In my last comment I said Billie Rae, I ment Billie Mae. I was a little fuzzy in the brain. I'm not aloud to have mountian dew for a reason..............

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Cock-blocker.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please don't let Rose be dead.....poor Emmett. If she is dead then I know he would want to be next, and I can't even image a Twilight story with out the lovable teddy bear that is our Emmett.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

YES I'm happy Rose is alive!!!! I think Carlisle plans to ask for Bella's hand in marrige and all that jazz. Edward will totally flip, of course. and I really hope not.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Intermission

TEAM CARLISLE! Charlotte and Edward probably had a thing together while they were in Volterra. I have no idea what her powers will be, I just know that it is in your power, and your power alone, to update this chapter as soon as humanly possible.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals

I don't know who's side I'm on yet, I can't decide.

Yes Edward is a hypocrite!

I think Eleazar might be worried that Bella and Carlisle won't ever have a chance to get married if the war comes and Carlisle and/or Bella dies.

Idk, to keep the newborns from leaving with their partner before their one year of super strength runs out?

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Alice

Can't wait for the next chapter =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading DS, HA18!

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

i think the fuckers cheated on Carlisle and Bella with each other.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

How do you change the color of their eyes like that? It's so cool. Can't wait for your next update! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you Haley for your reviews. I am so happy that you are enjoying my story =) I use a program called Paint.net to alter and create the banners for each chapter. Its like photoshop but the only difference is that it is FREE, lol, and you can download it off google. Thanks again for the support =)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

OH! Super excited for the next chapter, i love this story.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh my, mother of Jesus! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

poor esme. poor edward. victoria can suck it. poor jack. poor bella. victoria can suck it. poor carlisle. poor emmett. VICTORIA CAN SUCK IT! Woooooo!!!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

aw! that was adorable!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

aw!!!!!! that was so sweet!!! You deserve to win the best toothache!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

*screams* OH NO! It's Victoria!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!! Please!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

oh crap. not good. O.O Damn James, damn him staight to the fiery depths of hell, along with 'Vicky'.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

*squeal* OMG!!!!!! I love it! :D So cute! Can't wait for next week ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I almost cried when I saw this would be the last chapter before the epilogue. I absolutley love this story and you deserve to win those awards wether it's just one or all of them. Thank you so much for blessing us with this heart warming story and I wish I could be as good a writer as you. See you in two weeks for the epilogue.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Oh my goodness. I'm.....so sad to see this story go, but am proud to have been with you almost from the very start. You are an amazing author and writer. I will have to check out Rabbit Heart. As much as I want to find out about Ashley's future, I'm not going to pressure you to write a sequel if you don't want to, but it would be a wonderful treat =) Thank you so much for this story and I won't ever forget it.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

omg!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to 'see' Tania's reaction!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!!! I really am thankful for the reviews you leave for me they always make me smile and really do help me write faster

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Irina is a sluty ho bitch. Ugh I really don't like her. But I do love this chapter =) Is Marcus going back to Italy? Can't wait for your next update ^^



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHA, you crack me up!!!! I knew I would rise a few eye brows with the last line, hummm that's the big question.... is Marcus going back to Italy or not hehehehe Sorry not gonna give that little piece of info away just yet.... I know I'm such a mean cow hehehehe

I will try not to keep you wating too long

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

woooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww. Edward just took his creepy stalkerness to a whole new level.



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

wow. She is really powerful. I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehe.... Thank you for pushing that button

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

mmmmmmmmmmmmm jaaaaaaasperrrrrrrr. XO



Author's Response:

hahahahahahaha...... I'm sooooo team Jasper, Thanks for pushing that button

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

okay i won't keep you beggin. awesome chapter but right now i want to click that little next button cuz i REALLY want to read B's pov. catcha later.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!!! well hurry and click next..... it sounds like you are enjoying my story and for that I am doing a happy dance.... Thanks sooooooo much for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

={D love it love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

awe.... you make me very happy

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Alright, so I was hanging out with my friend on her traponliene, and the sky was a beautiful cloudless blue. My friend laid down with her arms behind her head and said

"Imma make pictures outta the clouds." I told her have fun with that. A few minutes later, the sky was still cloudless, she squealed.

"Oh, Look! That one is shaped like the ocean!!!!!" I love this story, and I hope my friend's sillyness made you laugh like it did me. ={J



Author's Response:

hahahahahahaha....... I have to say I started laughing before I got to trampoline.... hehehehe You made me laugh very loud and now everyone at work thinks I'm strange... hehehehehe

I am posting next chap as soooooon as I get hom so keep your eyes open.....

Thanks soooo much for taking the time to push that little button

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

hotttttttttttt daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn



Author's Response:

hehehehehehe... YAY!!!!! Thanks sooooooo much MWAH I am glad you liked

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Update soon? Please? I am in love with this story, and I can't wait for Tanya's arival!!!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to pushthat little review button... I makes me sooo happy to hear that you love my little story.... I can't wait for Tania to arrive either it should be fun to see what happens between her and Bella.... don't forget to check your email for the linnk to see what Bella is wearing in this ch....

 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!* UPDATE SOON SOON SOON!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! WOW now that's what I call a review hehehehehe, Should I take it that you liked that chapter MWAH to you for pushing that button and cracking me up laughing.... You are a champion!!!!! I will update as soon as I can just putting the final touches on the next ch

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Omg!!!!! Yes, let the games begin!!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thanks a bunch for pushing that little button.... Make sure you check your email for the link to see what B & T are wearing and the engagement ring

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!! Thanks MWAH!!!! I won't keep you hanging long

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

don't worry, I still love you!!!!!!!! And this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon? Please?



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!!! MWAH.... MWAH.....MWAH!!!!!! Next ch is almost done, I won't make you wait too long, Thanks for reviewing and soooooo happy you love this story

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

"What's your last name?" "Lightfoot." "Hahahahahaha what a stupid last name!" "Oh, really? What's yours?" "......" "Well?" *sighs* "Dicknight."
"...... And you say I have a weird last name."



Author's Response:

OMG, I laughed so hard at this review, I have read it about 30 times and I have to say WTF, even though I have no idea what it means I can't help but laugh at it each time I read it.... well done little lady your review has bought me alot of pleasure over the last few days hehehehehe, now I just posted the next ch so go find out what happens with Tania

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

WAHOO!!!



Author's Response:

MWAH!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I love it! I'm so proud of Jake, and Marcus!!! Irina is a ho, she just wants Edward cuz Tania does. so correction, she is a stupid ho. Absolutley love love love Esme and Carlisle, they are my second favorite couple, after Alice and Jasper, of course. Bella is epic. It's awesome that she threw Irina across the room in her sleep!!! Next thing us readers know, she'll be floating in her sleep, too. ;) I love this story, can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

YAY*SQUEAL* Jake did good didn't he... and Marcus OMG I can't wait to see where his path leads him... Irina is a stupid ho yes but she doesn't want Edward for herself she is nasty as fuck but loves Tania and will do everything she can to make sure Tania gets him hehehehehe, I'm thrilled you loved the Esme/ Carlisle scene but you're right Ali and Jasper rock... hahahahahaha you make me giggle, thanks sooo much for thaking the time to review I'm soooo happy you love my story MWAH!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I forgive you if you forgive me for assuming about Irina in my last comment. I feel really bad about that. So, anyway, i love this chapter, and Save Me From Myself is an amazing song, one of my mom's favorites so i listen to it a lot. This chapter was well worth the wait, thank you!!!



Author's Response:

hehehehe of course your forgiven, it was an easy assumption to make, you were right though she is a stupid ho... YAY you liked the song that make me very happy SQUEAL!!! Thanks for waiting, it killed me taking that long to update I was dying to write but my hubby finally crack it over my obsession hehehehehe, but I think he has gotton over it now, boys !!!! fuck they just don't get it.... Thanks for reviewing MWAH

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wow. This chapter was amazing. I loved the Irina part even if I can't stand her, it was kinda intertaining. Hehe, can't wait to see her reaction to when she tries to kill our dear Bella and then can't....:D I am so looking forward to your next update. ^^



Author's Response:

sQuEaL!!!! WOW MWAH to you, hehehehe I'm thrilled you liked the IPOV and it will be interesting to see what happens from here, thanks soooo much for reviewing you make me smile!!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

*giggle* Love it!!!!!!!! Um, my birthday is coming up(monday the 13th) and I was wondering if you could update on or really close to that day for me(I'm turning 19 ^^) it would mean sooo much to read an update of my favorite story from my favorite author on/near my birthday, because in all truth, you are my favorite author and this story is fucking fantastic, and I'm not just saying that. <3 Haley Alice18 =)



Author's Response:

SqUeAl........... MWAH!!!!! Oh do I have a suprise for you in my next chapt.... I have almost finished it and it will be posted by your birthday!!!! I promise!!!!! WOW I am speachless.... OMG seriously me your fav author FUCK thats just WOW AWESOME!!!! You have made me a very happy girl hehehehehehe, hopefully I can return the favor with my next chapter MWAH to you!!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!! I almost choked on my breakfast when i read that Bella 'called' me. thank you!!!!!! So far, the best birthday present this year! I love it!!!!!!!!! A Taste is probably one of my favorite songs, so a plus! You rock my multi-colored toe socks!!!!!! And it is true, Jasper does have a delicous ass ^^ You are absolutly amazing, MWAH! Thank you!



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, I hope you had a great day and that you ended up getting a bunch of cool gifts.... I didn't mean to make you choke LMAO but I thought you may like that little suprise MWAH!!!!! You make me smile and I love your multi colored sock comment,,, MWAH!!!! check your email for the link and I'm glad you liked my song choice!!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

OMG! I missed you. I honestly was afraid you died or something. You have made my day by updating. And you are a cruel genuis for this cliffie. So please, please, update soon!!!!!!!! *on hands and knees begging*



Author's Response:

YAY SQUEAL!!!!!!!!! OMG NOOOOOOO I'm still very much alive and kicking!!!!! hehehehehe, I'm sooooo glad I made your day and I'm loving your reactiojn to the cliffie..... I promise I won't keep you hanging too long... MWAH

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Revelations

Love it, as always :) I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

:)) Thanks hun, I love that you're still reading my story and enjoying

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Author Note

Oh my goodness! I'm sorry to hear about you and your hubby :( but I am ever so glad to hear that you've found your passion for life again!! And I absolutely want you to start this story back up, for I love it dearly. I'm so glad to know you are alive and well. 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings

I love it <3 You've done a beautiful job rewriting it, as I knew you would. 

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Enigmas

Love love love!



Author's Response:

thanks soooo much for the kind words, I'm glad you liked the rewrite. After so long not writing I figured it was a great way to get back into it and those first chapters sucked badly hehehe

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Awakening

<3 Oh how I love this story! It's amazing :) I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

I liked Edward's point of view best, but I could identify with Bella's more. I really like this story, please update soon!



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Letter : EPOV

victoria is a bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV

Awwwww

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Continue!!!!!



Author's Response:

OKAY!!!! LOL, seriously, I am going to continue. Since everyone is so excited, how can I say no. Thank you for reading it!

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104695
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

omg that was AMAZING!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The end was really sweet.... Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon, please!!!!!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awwww......Alice is a genius even if her plan didn't work completley..........