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UPDATE: JULY 25, 2012
I CHANGE MY PEN NAME. PREVIOUSLY LetRobstenLuv4ever NOW LuvRPatz4ever. Thank you.
I am 42 yr old mother of 6 and I love all things Twilight. I love to read BDSM stories and all stories with a possesive Edward.
My second favorite stories to read is Mobward.
Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.
Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59640
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This is a slow burn as well. I have so many questions as to what Edward does all day long.
Also I would loved to have the receipes for all this deliciously sounding foods that she makes for him.
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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella, is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod. Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for? AH. Rated M for a reason.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153196
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is really interesting. I cant wait to read more and see Bella melt away Edwards walls that he put up.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well it seems to me that Bella is a very hurt young lady. I would feel just like her. Abandoned and lonely.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Yes Edward is clueless and Bella is......well she is acting the only way she knows that will get attention by acting out.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ok I am getting anxious here. I am hoping for something between them soon.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh that was mean. lol Right when I thought he was going to kiss her and you end the chapter.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
LOL I love how Bella got Tanya back with the comment "No doubt, when I'm your age, I'll also have made the transition from sex kitten to house cat." LMAO You go Bella.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Well it seems now we are getting somewhere.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Sounds like Bella is moving out.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I thought you said the story was going to pick up now that Tanya was gone but it is just dragging along and they are not even close to getting togther. :(
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
God its about time something happened in their favor.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Ok now that you have them together I hope it stays that way, because that would really suck if you take them apart again. I mean really suck.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I cant believe he told her it was a mistake but Fate stepped in and now they are at it again. Yeee hawww.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Your WRONG! Edward does not have to fuck up for you to write a great story. You could have taken the story so many other ways but you chose to have him repeatedly hurt her.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
He is a fucking idiot. I am really getting pissed off.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
OMG seriously I am thinking about quiting this story. This is just pissing me off. I hate cheaters and it sounds like that is where you are going with this.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Guess you got a lot of negative attention on the cheating huh? I am so glad to hear there will be no cheating. I will miss the no babies thing though.
Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?
Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?
Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn
OMG he is agressive. I like it.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom
Wow I can definitely relate to this story. I think we all lose someone from our childhood that we loved.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds
I am really enjoying this story. I cant wait to read more.
Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806755
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Damion Part One
Jesus Damion is bat shit crazy.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I hope that doesn't mean the skip is stepping down. Because I dont think Sonny can be boss and neither can Damion. Well maybe they will just all walk away, nahhh I dont think that either.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder
wow that was really an emotional chapter but very good.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight
I just wanted to let you know I am still reading and I am still loving it. I am one of the closed minded people that stopped reading because the kids started having sex. lol. Its so funny now. You cured me of that. Thanks again sweetie.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight
Where can I find CaraNo sequel Grand Vendetta? She pulled it on FF and I dont see it on her blog.
Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three
OMG thats it? There was no lemon. :'(
Are you continuing this story?
It would be a shame if you didn't continue this it was hot damn great.
Author's Response:
lol! this was only the end of year 1. There are 3 years in total. ;)
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One
OMG Again LOL That would totally be me. Fumbling all over myself. But I could totally see myself going bat shit crazy for a guy with tatoos.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before
O.M.G. This is SOOOOOOO good. I cant believe I just found it. I wanted to let you know that whoever did your banner misspelled your name on it. At least I think they did unless you have multiple spellings out there.
I cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope this is not going to be a short story.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two
Wow I think I need to change my panties.
He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper
I like the idea of this story but I dont like that Edward is just learning the ropes. Its a complete 180 from his total control in Quiet Storm. And some of the things that Emmett and Rosalie are doing just doesn't sound right for cops. I mean like pick and chosing what call they are going to answer. I guess real cops will do that, however I cant see them racing to a scene to see who gets there first and then leaving so they dont have to do paperwork. Gosh that does not pain a pretty picture for the police force at all. lol. I guess I am just so in love with a possesive, very in control Edward. And you could still turn him into one I guess, we just haven't seen enough to know for sure.
“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135546
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved this first chapter. I Love that Edward has a dirty mouth and is already thinkng about fucking her, that is awesome.
Now as for the banner, I think you should have put Bella a little larger. I mean you describe her as a full figure girl but you put a picture of her skinny. It doesn't meake since.
Author's Response:
I may have it re edited
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I absolutely love this Edward. I would have thought him to be more insistant to have sex. lol
Author's Response:
you'll find that there is many layers when it comes to this Edward
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I have a question. I have been reading BDSM for a couple of years and it really interest me. Is this something you are into? I wonder how one would even begin to look into it. But then it scares the shit out of me too. So I probably wouldn't do it.
Author's Response:
No, I'm not personally into BDSM, but I know people who are and Tumblr is awash with blogs made my people in the community. Maybe you should check out Fetlife. It's a good place to start
The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.
*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.
Beta'd by HollettLA
Banner by CaraNo
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
OMG I cant believe she pulled a gun on Edward. I am guessing that Jasper has figured out that Bella is pregnant.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
I love this story I just hate the short chapters. Well now he knows they are pregnant, I hope Bella doesn't get an abortion.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
That was the shortest call ever. lol. And we still dont know what they are doing on this road trip.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
I dont like this Emmett at all. Is he going to get any better or are we stuck with him? God I hope not. What is up with CJ? He gives me the creeps.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So.... I am confused. Is Edward the son of the boss that died and Carlisle took over?
Again I think this is WAY too short. lol. I am so spoiled with your long stories this just seemed like a tease.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Gosh I wish these were longer chapters. I get frustrated because I dont want to stop reading. lol.
I cant wait til Edward knocks Jake out. lol
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooohhhh Edward's definately going to break the cardinal rule. lol. I love it so far Alex. The only thing I did NOT like was when I read the summary on FF it said that it was a drabble. WTF? I LOVE, I MEAN LOVE YOUR LONG STORIES.
Cant wait for another update. Keep up the good work.
Carrie
P.S. I even gave you a 10.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Oooohhhh bring it on Jake, lets see what you got. LMAO I loved it. Another 10.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
God I cant wait til Edward knocks jakes block off. lol. And what is up with Alice? I dont like her and Edward together at all. I am proud of myself I have reviewed every chapter.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
That was a really short chapter. I still think somehow Edward should have been boss and Carlisle took over somehow.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I am glad he told Alice he would help her with Jasper. I just couldn't see E with Alice.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Hmmm I will stick with my thoughts about Edward.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
lol Bella has the hots for Edward. AND YES WE WANT ANOTHER ONE TODAY.
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Oh now we are talking. A diamond necklace for Bella, just the thing to get Jacob pissed. LMAO.
And you take care of yourself Alex.
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Uh oh I think Edward is in trouble. lol I hope he doesn't make her beg.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Great chapter. I am so glad that she is at least talking to Edward.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Damn I thought this was the chapter that Edward would pounce on Jake but I guess not. lol.
Bella sure is testing his limits. I am surprised that he didn't react yet.
I could definitely use about 10 more chapters today. lol
What happened to updating on TWCS?
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Seriously with Jessica? ggrrhhh ok I will calm down.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Again jessica and lauren? Yukkkkk. I hope Bella doesn't really think she will only be waitressing.
What happened to updating on TWCS?
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I wonder if Carlisle Sr. is a good guy or a bad guy.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
It looks like Edward is rich now. Hopefully he will be helping out Bella and Jasper.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I cant wait to meet his Aunt May May. I sure hope they are good people.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
They are so cute. I wonder what trouble Edward is going to find.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Dumn ass Riley was going to bang and girl with Edward there? Yukkk I dont go for threesomes and obviously neither does Edward.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Sounds like it was a set up to me. I hope they find out by whom.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Well she was violated so that would be why she is being weird.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
My head is all over the place with these guys. I dont know who to trust. I dont trust CJ for nothing and I am not sure I trust Riley either.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I am just more and more confused who to trust in this story. lol
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
THis is so odd reading this when I am so used to having Edward as THE SKIP and THE BOSS. lol
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
I think everyone needs to stop treating her like she is made of glass, otherwise she will break like glass.
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
I dont get it why are they treating her like that? She needs to get a back bone and tell Edward that she wants him again.
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Grrrrhhh these two just dont know how to talk to each other. I wish he acted more like the skip.
Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.
Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.
Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?
It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted
This is awesome. Literally I LOVE THIS STORY.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
That was amazing until he told her that her debt was paid. Yeh I think Bella feels like a whore now. I am curious about the pills though. What were they?
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.
Wow this chapter was much shorter then the other ones. I cant wait for Edward to divorce his wife and go get Bella.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Diavolo
Oh I did read this. Its been awhile since you updated. I love it so far.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
lol I think things are going to hit the fan. Something tells me bella is pregnant. lol That would be good.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
What a wonderful chapter. I cant wait to see what mama does to Tanya. lol. Great Chapter.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Hmmm I dont think I cared for this chapter too much. I loved the affection he showed his moma and the girls but this chapter....I think it just makes him look weak and he needs his momas orders to do his job. :(
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow that was awesome. I loved the longer chapter. However I cant wait for him and Bella to get together.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I knew Edward Sr. was a snake. He had something to hide from his family and he wanted Tanya dead.
I hope Edward takes care of his father too.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I bet Bella was scared shitless. Well at least she told Edward that she thought he treated her like a whore.
Now, how the hell did the Russians know about Isabella????
Great Chapter. I REALLY wish it was longer.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
HmmmYou told us that Ed Sr. was not involved with him being put in jail but here it says he was, unless....... lol
And how could you leave it here?????? lol That is just cruel.
This was a great chapter. Thank you
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
What a wonderful chapter. I loved that Edward was able to show her that he really cares for her. I LOVED THE PICTURES INSIDE THE CHAPTER. JUST WONDERFUL. THANK YOU.
Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.
Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334740
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I am just STUNNED. Damn Bella's mother and father are both pieces of shit. I cant believe that she doesn't stand up for herself. And I cant believe that Edward hasn't told her to go fuck herself. I mean he is supposed to be a Dom, all about respect well he sure is not enforcing the respect for his girl.
Author's Response:
Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother. With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise. Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should. Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well. Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself. Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths. I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance.
A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing. Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood. Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them. I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents. This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know.
As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update. Thanks for reading and reviewing. (Nikky) & Kasi~
Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.
“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.
“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.
Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this. Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”
I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”
“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.
“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.
“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.
“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One
I am really loving this story just with this chapter alone. lol. I did take a peak at your other stories and I see you guys dont make them very long. Is this one going to be longer, I hope? lol. I loved how long HCV was that was a great story too. Well off to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
This story will be around 25 chapters in the end. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & NIkky
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two
Wow that was very disturbing to read about Bella's parents. Kind of sounds like mine.
I am glad she has Edward now. Or soon anyway. lol
Author's Response:
The outcome will be a HEA and all justice will be served. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Nikky
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Hmmm well I am SO disappointed in Charlie, I dont care what his excuse it.
Author's Response:
Charlie is a putz. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Nikky
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four
Wow I am so shocked at the way she is treated. I hope this story isn't all about how abusive her life is. I mean the summary says its a Dom story so.... yeah I was not anticipating reading so much abuse.
Author's Response:
I am sorry you are having issues witht he past abuse in her life and the struggles she has witht he bullying and abuse from her parents and other students. I assure you that this story will have quite a bit of BDSM in it, but it is not all sex and smut it will have a decent and full storyline. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi & Nikky
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
OMG I think Renee needs a mental hospital. Seriously how can she not know her child is allergic to peanuts and she puts them in anyway? I say Renee is the one trying to kill Bella.
Again I say that Edward as her Dom should have stepped in a long time ago and thrown Renee out of his house. Its upsetting that he has allowed this to go on for so long. I know you said he wanted Bella to grow and to tell Renee off herself but Bella obviously is not strong enough for that yet and she NEEDS her Dom to do it.
Author's Response:
Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee. Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this. To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know.
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story. I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should. Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it. Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so. All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished.
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did. Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative. Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon. Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation.
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written. Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted. Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~
Teaser:
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.
I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.
“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.”
I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.
“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live. He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.
“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl.
I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”
“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”
Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”
I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.
One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man. How did I get here and why don't I want to leave?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281133
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
WOW I absolutely love this story. I love how possesive Edward is and I love his dirty mouth. LOL
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Another great chapter. Wow I haven't read something so hot in a long time.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Well shit. I dont like how Bela has changed at all. I mean yeah she thought she had to leave to save him BUT.... that is not the case now.
I dont get why she is acting like they cant be together now since he is divorced so there is nothing holding them back.
So yeah this was disappointing that Bella is acting like this. :(
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Ummm Anal sex can be completely wonderful BUT I dont see how she can do that without any lubricant oil. I mean that is just too dam painful otherwise. That takes away the pleasure when its all pain.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I wondered when he was going to let into his family about not helping Bella.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
OMG I love it. "How do you breathe?" LOL Yeah daddy will answer that. LOL
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Ahhh his doggie died? That is so sad. It is amazing how well Levi can play the piano though.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
OMG I cant believe Tanya planned his death. What a bitch. Well she was hurt and ..... No I think it was all about the money with Tanya.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh damn I thought I had more chapters to read. *sighs* now I just have to wait like everyone else.
This was a great chapter. Levi got to meet his family and Bella got to tell them off for not helping her in the hospital.
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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I cant wait to read more.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One
Wow she met Edward already. Thats great. I hate when authors drag it out.
The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.
Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41563
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I am really enjoying this so far. I wish the chapters were longer though.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it, this is probably going to be as long as each chapter gets.
The man in Bella's bed was second in command of the largest Italian Mafia family in Chicago, and she was the cop that had sworn to take them down. Follow her as she puts her life and her heart on the line.
Completely uploaded today.
Almost at 1,000 reviews!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100675 Read Count: 38879
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I am loving this story. I beleive I read this on another site awhile back but I haven't seen an update in awhile.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Well I am waiting for all this foreplay to be over with already.
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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185512
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
Good the prick need his dick to deflate. LOL
Author's Response:
LOL loving your reviews! x x