Reviews by twi-sessed
Summary:

Skin Deep Banner

Some secrets will damage your reputation.  Others will ruin your social life.  But then there are secrets that will change the way the world looks at you, now and forever.  What would Edward be willing to do to keep such a secret?  And who will pay the price?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3367 Read Count: 31094
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2017 Updated: 09 Mar 2020
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2019 Title: Skin Deep

My heart breaks for Edward.  I truly can’t imagine dealing with what he’s dealing with, but I agree that he’s a hero.  I look forward to him letting others in and seeing that it won’t matter to his true friends!   

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Skin Deep

Poor Edward!   I'm so proud of Bella and Emmett and Team Edward.   They did exactly what they needed to do to take care of Edward.  I know there will be fallout from the narrow minded idiots at school,  but I know that Team Edward will be there for Edward and to help deal with the idiots.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Still one of my favorite stories.  

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

These girls are so awesome!  I can see Cordie coming out of her shell more and more then I get she is around Kassie.  Kassie is so sassy that I have no choice but to love her.  My girls were just as sassy at that age and it reminds me of them.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I’m so glad they have already arrested Maggie.  I wonder what all she has to say about her actions.  More delusions, I’m sure!  I hope that Mike gets a hero’s award for his quick thinking and actions that saved Bella and the girls!  I’m so glad they are all ok.  I live this story.  Can’t wait for more. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow!  An amazing chapter.  I totally didn’t see that coming at all. I knew Maggie was off her rocker, but holy crap!  So glad Mike came to the rescue.  Wonder what happened to Maggie after Mike hit her car?   And there’s a baby on the way!!  I so love this story.  I hate the thought of this story coming to an end alrearly day!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I loved the wedding!  It was so awesome for Jake to marry them and the vows to the girls was so sweet!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved the clothes switch and that it didn't work!!  That was awesome!  I haven I doubt that the teachers at school or someone who doesn't know them well wouldn't be able to tell. It's great that Bella and Edward are reaching out to each other for thoughts and opinions.  I think it would be a great idea to let them talk to a therapist just to be on the same safe to check in on their own thoughts and feelings about all that has happened and is happening.  Can't wait for the nedt chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great!  I can't wait for the update and see how Bella starts to unravel this.  I wonder if Edward will be thinking about the Kammie or if he'll put it in the back of his mind.  I wonder what Kassie and Cordie thought about the whole thing.  Seriously looking forward to Monday!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved the girl swapping and their days. It was a brilliant idea in my opinion. I also love the teasing between Edward and Bella!!  I can't get enough of this story!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it!  They're both in a lot deeper than they realized and it's going to be interesting watching them realize this and maneuver through all of this. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was shocked at who it was for and the connections they have to the people around Bella and Edward.  Now it makes perfect sense why Charlotte was commenting about Edward’s profession.  They’re only after the money, of course.  I’m looking forward to more.  I love this story! 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

How awful to have someone served papers at a school in front of children and parents!  Shows the true character of the individual behind it and the person who served it should be ashamed for acting like such a jerk with the grinning.  Where I live the Constable is usually the person who serves papers and they’re in uniform.  I think it’s Mr. Buckley who has served Bella. Guess we’ll find out.  Emmett is so awesome in this story. I love the talk he had with Bella!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can see the competition between these two will definitely be interesting. Love it!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They're meshing together just like a family!!!  I know there will be some bumps in the road, but I love it!!!  I'm always left wanting more!  Thanks for the wonderful story!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmmm, how did Buckley get involved in this?  Can’t wait for them to start finding dirt on all of these people!!!  I mean seriously.  Everyone knows it’s money for Maggie & Charlotte.   Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love the white wolf and her twin.  I loved what Jake told Cordie about her drawing.  I like Rose's idea that they move in together. They should move into Edward's and keep the girls together and build their friendship.  I love this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Getting hotter and hotter!  Can't wait for the continuation of this night!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I didn’t see all of that coming!  I loved it!  Buckley and Maggie are bat shit crazy!!!  I can see either one of them coming after Bella and the girls.  Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It’s so great to see the girls becoming individuals independent of each other with their own styles.  I loved Edward and Kassie at the stock exchange!  She’s gonna be a force to be reckoned with when she’s older!   Of course, Bella and Cordie at the theater was great too.  That was so scary when Bella faded out.  I’m so glad the boys are here and everything is okay with them.  I can’t wait to hear how everyone adjusts to having two babies in the house.  I’m a mother of 5 children with my middle daughter sing only 14 months older than my twins making it more like triplets a lot of the time.  It was extremely busy and difficult at times to juggle, but we all survived and my twins will be 18 in June.  Can’t wait to see what life is like for all 6 of them.  I hope you’re able to give us multiple time periods in the Epilogue to see how crazy life is for them all.  It’s sad that this story is ending, but I’m sure there will more great stories to come!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I didn’t see twins coming.  That’s awesome.  One for each of them.  I have twins and it was nice to have babies to share.  LOL. 

Summary:

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Bella is an exotic dancer, and she loves her job. Edward is a millionaire with a savior complex who needs to rescue Bella. She doesn’t want to be rescued, but she does want Edward for the things he does to her body. When she discovers his issues run deeper than she ever thought, will she accept him for what he can offer, or will she walk away? Drabble. Olderward.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25351 Read Count: 79307
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I’d love to manhandle him too!!!



Author's Response:

Good God, me too!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I really really love this story!  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I’m so glad you have outtakes planned. I’m not ready for this to be over yet!  LOL



Author's Response:

Yes! I have to get them out of my head to make some sense.

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84338
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected

Love this story so far.  Edward is beginning his training.  Looking forward to his journey   Can’t wait for more. 

Summary:

Love That Dirty Water Banner

Edward is the new pitcher for the Boston Red Sox in 2013.  He hears the voice of an angel as she sings the National Anthem.  He is immediately smitten.  He asks the manager to find out who she is so he can find out more about her.   Bella is a vocal student at Berklee.  How will she balance college and being the girlfriend of a major-league baseball player?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6484 Read Count: 2316
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2017 Updated: 06 Jul 2020
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A New Season; a New Team

Such a sweet start! 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Never Could Be a Yankee

I love this story already.  I can’t wait to see what is in store for these two.  

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Badass Bella saves the day, part of the day anyway.  And here comes a very angry Calvary with Edward in the lead!!!  Yay!  I’ll be anxiously waiting for next Thursday!  Loved it!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder why Aaron hasn’t used Bella and Carlisle as leverage or blackmail against Edward.  What is his game?   I really hope Caius helps and it isn’t a trap. 

I started the story over and re-read it just so I could read it straight through to today’s new chapter.  I love it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After dealing with a life-changing obstacle, will Edward and Bella find their HEA? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11286 Read Count: 7016
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2017 Updated: 22 Dec 2017
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thank you for sharing this story and opening up about your own feelings.  I don’t have Bilolar Disorder, but I do have Chronic Depression and ADD.  I have also gone off my meds thinking I didn’t need them anymore and by the 2nd week was functioning only as much as I had to for Work and my kids.  And with the ADD, I have been fussed at and then made fun of for my lack of organizational skills, procrastination, and punctuality.  I finally started turning it around and asking how everyone thinks I feel on this side of it and how I want it to be different.  Unfortunately I’ve passed on the ADD/ADHD on to 4 of my 5 children and they’ve all have had bouts of depression and a couple have been diagnosed with bipolar disorder and we’ve had to deal with an overdose and a suicide attempt.  Thank you again so much for sharing your story. It helped me to see things differently with regards to them and for that I can’t thank you enough!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad this story has helped others, it truly warms my heart to hear others stories of how this fic has helped open their eyes to the disease. I thank you for sharing your story with me. I'm not sure who you are on Facebook, but you're welcome to give me a holler anytime you need to talk. I know what it's like to have depression, have kids with depression, it can be overwhelming. Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

How heartbreaking it must be to feel like that.  Two of my daughters are bipolar but they’ve never told me how they feel other than the feeling good and then being depressed.  I hope Bella and Carlisle find Edward quickly. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully this will give you a little bit of insight into the mind of a bipolar person. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Uh oh!  I’m glad to see Bella take control of the situation. I’m anxious to see how this talk will go.  Looking forward to the next chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, & thank you for taking the time to review. I truly appreciate it. 

Summary:

Mechanics and Mistletoe

Bella, an uptight, cold executive, is on her way home for Christmas. The first Christmas she’s been home since she started working for the Fortune 500 company that hired her from college, almost ten years ago. The only reason why she’s going home is to meet her brother’s new wife and her parents threatened to cut her out of the will if she didn’t make time to see her family. However, it’s snowing, a blizzard and Bella’s car wasn’t really designed for the cold. Or snow. Or anything other than sunny, perfect weather.

Edward Cullen is alone on Christmas Eve, working, as usual. His family was long gone and all he had left was his family business, Cullen Towing Service and Garage, though that wasn’t going well for him. Business was slow. His bills were piling up and he was afraid he was going to lose his livelihood if something didn’t turn around. Over the radio, he heard about a stranded driver, stuck on the back road. Edward pulled on his winter coat, gloves and started his truck, driving to the location.

A small sports car was stuck in a ditch, almost completely covered with snow. A beautiful woman, wearing heels and a fur coat was shivering outside her car. Edward immediately recognized her as the girl he once knew and had secretly crushed on for years. Her brother, Jasper, pretty told him to fuck off and said that she was too good for him, a grease-monkey, a blue-collar boy.

Can this uptown girl fall for a guy with grease on his hands?

Banner by Clo ...  thanks girlie!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44621 Read Count: 13896
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can’t wait to hear more about their history and what happened.  Thank you for the Christmas treat!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I Jasper gets what’s coming to him.  Their night together was perfect.  It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella.  She’ll just have to prove him wrong.  Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I Jasper gets what’s coming to him.  Their night together was perfect.  It’s so sad that Edward believes he’s not good enough for Bella.  She’ll just have to prove him wrong.  Now I’m gonna go take a cold shower!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I’m so sad for Bella with her mom but so happy that she now has Edward.  Jasper sure has fucked up his life with his mean, hateful, reprehensible behavior!   Well, now he’ll have to deal with the ramifications of his behavior.  Can’t wait for the next chapter!!  

Summary:

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Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2824
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

That was awesome!   I’d love to see an expanded story if you’re so inclined.  Hope you and your family have a Merry Christmas!!

Summary:

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A Scottish Christmas Tale. Four broken souls reunited at Christmas. Will they be able to overcome the ghosts of their past, future and present? - Reverse Harem -


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7999 Read Count: 10408
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So happy that you’re back.  You and your stories have been missed a great deal.  I can certainly understand how Bella feels to some extent.  It does get frustrating with all of the charities asking for money every time you go somewhere.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So happy that you’re back.  You and your stories have been missed a great deal.  I can certainly understand how Bella feels to some extent.  It does get frustrating with all of the charities asking for money every time you go somewhere.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They’ve seen each other!  Can’t wait to find out what their history is!  So happy to have you back!  I love your stories!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow!  That’s a lot to take in!  I’m can understand Bella’s head spinning.  I can’t wait for more.  As always, I love your story!!!  

M for Murder by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Running from the Devil is never easy. #AU #Human #Angst #Suspense


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27305 Read Count: 13079
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2018 Updated: 16 Dec 2022
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wow!  How heartbreaking!  I can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Can’t wait for the next chapter!  I’m dying or curiosity!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I have so many questions, but I know they’ll get answered as the story goes.  I’ve loved all of your stories.  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

AMDFT

Crown Prince Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is the heir to the throne in the small independent country, Gevalia. His life is all about duty, honor and pride for his country. However, he’s lonely, focused on his career. When his younger brother makes some poor choices, Edward is forced to fly to the United States to smooth out diplomatic relations and spend six months looking for a bride, with some pretty stiff stipulations by his mother, the Queen of Gevalia.

Isabella Swan is the oldest daughter and now owner of the Swan Family Bakery, Inc. 1897. She went to college to be a teacher but was forced to forego her dreams when her father was diagnosed with Parkinson’s disease. On a chance evening, a handsome stranger slips during a summer rain storm into her bakery and awakens something inside.

Who is he?

Where did he come from?

Why is she drawn to him?

All that is known is that Prince Charming is a real person and Bella is about to live A Modern-Day Fairy Tale. But will it end in a happily ever after?

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you, girlie!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194069 Read Count: 129901
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2018 Updated: 02 Jul 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I’m so glad they’re going to be ok.  I’m very much looking forward to the next chapter.  he paparazzi don’t stand a chance once Esme, Carlisle, and the Calvary arrive. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

My heart is breaking for both of them!  I’m proud of Edward for standing up to his mother.  She needs a serious swift kick in her royal ass!!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

How exciting!!!   I can’t wait to hear from Edward and his take on the event.  I have to say I loved when Bella waved at Alice and grinned at her!  I’m proud of Bella for that.  Although I am wondering what Alice will do this time to get back at her.  The trip shopping was great.  Bella deserves to be pampered and spoiled and definitely deserves some fun and laughter.   

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I loved this chapter.  The visit with Bella and Esme was great.  It was great to see Bella relax and open up with Esme.  But what I really loved was Bella with Angèlique, so sad and yet so sweet.  I can’t wait for more of the story!  So wonderful!!!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

My heart breaks for Bella and Charlie.  I can’t imagine how difficult it is to live with such a debilitating disease or to watch someone you love living with it.  I wonder who spread those terrible lies about Bella.  Sounds like crap that Lady Kathryn and Irina would say.  I love this story and am looking forward to more.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Author's Note

You have to take care of you, before you can do anything else.  I’ve been following you and reading your stories for years.  I’ll certainly be waiting for you when you come back!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Im so glad Alice is detained, but she’ll find a way to talk herself out of it, at least temporarily I’m sure.  I’m so glad you’re writing again.  You’ve been missed.  I love this story and all of your other stories.  Until next time. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Alice needs to be brought way down off her high horse.  If she’s gonna make everyone miserable, then they should do the same in return.  I think they should take all of her stuff away like her phone and credit cards, if she has any, and all access to money.  Hit her where it hurts the most.  She’s already mean and hateful so it couldn’t hurt.  LOL. 

Poor Charlie and especially Bella!  Her Prince Charming is coming to her rescue.  I can’t wait for more.  I love this story.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 May 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love that Charlie is on Masen’s side!  I love this story so much!  I can’t wait for more!! 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I’m with Masen.   I wonder if Alice is trying to pull a fast one.  Guess we’ll find out.  Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 05 May 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love Angela and that she just jumps in to help.  I’m so glad she’s helping Bella.   Any wait for the next chapter and their date!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 12 May 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Their date was perfect!  Definitely my kind of date.  I hope Bella agrees fo go with Edward to the charity event.  I can’t believe Alice cut up Bella’s clothes.  Charlie should make her take the homecoming dress back and not let her go. She’s a spoiled little bitch who needs to be brought way down off her high horse!!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope Emmett can get himself straightened up!  I can’t wait for the next chapter and Bella/Masen time.  She needs her Prince Charming!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay!  They’re going to have a date!  Can’t wait for them to get to know each other better and spend time together.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alice is beyond unlikable.  I look forward to seeing her brought down a notch or two!  It was so sweet of Edward to help Bella.  I can’t wait for the next chapter.  Loving it!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Alice needs a major ass beating, like the spoiled little girl she is acting like!  I love this story already.  Can’t wait for more...  😊😊

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Alice deserves everything that she gets.  She’s not quite so high and mighty once the Queen spelled everything out for her.  I’m looking forward to their trip to Europe.  I’ll be keeping an eye out for my own prince while waiting for the next chapter!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I love this story and Prince Edward more and more with each chapter.  Hopefully our American Princess in the making will be able to get used to the attention and spotlight.  She’s so sincere and deserving of all of this.  It’s unfortunate that petty jealousy and entitlement can affect how Bella sees herself.  I hope Felix and Esme are able to do something about Kathryn and Irina, although I know they will create issues for our royal couple at some point along with Alice!  Looking forward to next time!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

We should’ve known Esme would find Bella.  I don’t blame Bella for being upset.  I hate that she doesn’t think she’s good enough.  But I know she’ll get back on track. I do hope that Bella and Esme can rebuild things between them.  Bella needs a mother figure in her life.  I hope she goes back to Masen soon.  I wonder how Esme will deal with the accommodations in Forks!  LOL

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 04 May 2019 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I’m so glad Bella went back to NY.  They do have things to work through, but together they can do it.  I would love to hear some of the interactions between Esme and Carlisle.  I’m sure they have some doozy of fights.  I’m looking forward to the reunion between Bella, Edward, and Jake.  They all have healing to do. And I hope we get to hear some of the backlash that the paparazzi gets to feel because of what they’ve done to Bella and Jake. See you next time...

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 May 2019 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I’m so glad they’re working on their relationship and spending the time in the summer home will be just what they need, I think.  Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52

I have enjoyed this story so much.  I can’t believe it’s almost over.  I know it will be one of my go to stories to reread over and over!

Choices by mama4dukes Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

choices

When Bella Swan abruptly breaks up with Edward for suppressing her ability to make choices, it forces Emmett to take a good, hard look at his life within the conformist household of the Cullens. Is he happy with his life? Or does his destiny lie elsewhere? What choice will he make.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10902 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2018 Updated: 26 Mar 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this Bella and Emmett!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this Bella and Emmett!  

My Own Life by Alyscia Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

My-Own-Life-by-Alyscia

Banner by Mariecarro Vanadessë

 

 

Bella has never been allowed to make a decision for herself. Edward is The Boss; the most powerful man in America. Can he pull her out of her own personal hell and make her the most powerful woman in America?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2741 Read Count: 2134
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2018 Updated: 17 Apr 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 10 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it!  I hope you expand it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

1500

One summer between high school and college changed Edward's ideas about his life's plans. Could he really build a life with a much older woman two thousand miles away? My entry for the TwiFandom News Forbidden Fruit Contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59156 Read Count: 13000
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2018 Updated: 04 Oct 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am completely caught up in this story.  I can’t wait for more.  Love it!



Author's Response:

That's so nice to hear, thank you!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter.   It’s so awesome to see Esme being open and in awe of the ranch and what all goes into it.   I really loved when Bella stood up to Carlisle just as Esme did.  I can’t wait for the next chapter.  

This story is so heartwarming and awesome.  Thank you so much for sharing your stories. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Esem is great, and she's going to have to work on Carlisle.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I’m so glad he’s home!  Can’t wait for all the adventures that await them!!  



Author's Response:

They have to have at least a few before the end!

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39670
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is so heartbreaking for them, but great for Bella.  I hope that this will be the start for Edward and Carlisle to work on rebuilding their relationship.   Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

They’ve met!!  Yay!  I’m looking forward to the next chapter and their

interactions. 

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29385
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story.  The chemistry between Edward and Bella is undeniable.  I'm quite positive their citrusy times will be sizzling!   I am afraid of how Bella will react to the news about that night!  I see some bumps in the road for these two unfortunately!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My heart broke for Edward and Charlie.  I’m sure Bella will be devastated when she finds out if she doesn’t already feel it.  I can’t wait for more.  🌹 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Author's Note

My thoughts and prayers are with you and your your husband, Clo!  Thank you for the update, Josie!  Family always comes first.  Take care of yourselves and your families.  See you when things are better!

Twi-sessed aka Virginia

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner done by Britt Lexington

Bella Cullen was about to have everything she had worked toward until she lost the two most important things in her life. Vice president of the legal department in her family's business, she tries to bury her pain in work. All of that changes the day she meets a man that has obviously suffered from a serious trauma. Edward Swan is more than shy; he's scared of everything. Bella doesn't know what happened to the endearing man, but she vows to help him and his young daughter in any way she can, starting with hiring him as her personal assistant. Little does she know they'll soon become the driving force in her life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36710 Read Count: 31627
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2018 Updated: 21 Mar 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I wonder how Bella will handle the situation with Jake.  Leah is bat shit crazy.  I can see BELLA the lawyer helping Jake, regardless of what he did to her.  I can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Summary:

MOTMFFF

Edward "The Boss" Cullen and his wife, Bella, survived hell and back. They are looking toward the future, which included a new path for the Cullen Consortium and impending parenthood. Edward and Bella are very excited for their new roles in their lives as Mommy and Daddy. 

 

In the wings, there's a new enemy waiting. A man determined to bring down the Consortium and specifically, Edward Cullen. He was going to stop at nothing to put "The Boss" behind bars for the rest of his life. He partners with an unlikely ally, a woman who wants what she deserved. What she is owed, by her only family. 

 

Will Edward, Bella and the family be able to move past this latest threat? One thing is for certain, they are Married to the Mob: Fighting for Freedom. 

 

Banner by Clo Rodeffer


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194528 Read Count: 41089
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2018 Updated: 07 Jul 2020
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Jimmy and Sue's wedding was so seeet.  It was perfect for them.  I think Bella is right about Emmett and Lauren eloping.  

 

I love Mobward and his Dolce so much.  I went back and started over at the beginning and read all the way to now.  It was awesome to go through their journey again. 

It's A Twin Thing by Jadiona Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

It's A Twin Thing

Set in an Alternate Universe, Bella and Beau are twins of the mind. They both move to Ithaca to go to college and start their lives together, even as they look for that third person who will fulfill their every need and desire. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Charlie/Sue, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice, Other Misc Char or Pairings, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19589 Read Count: 702
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2018 Updated: 15 Dec 2018
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - September 13th

I came back to reread what you have written so far.  I’m so intrigued and I really really hope you continue this story!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude

I’m very intrigued and hooked on this story already.  Does Alice know about their twin thing or that they want Edward?   It should definitely be interesting.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Another Shade of Trust

My daughter would wear Chucks with her dresses for homecoming and other dances.  Definitely made it her thing.  I loved it. 

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65901
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Mafiaward and can’t wait to see him become the man to exact his revenge and take his place as the rightful leader!  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

This story is already so intriguing.  I can’t wait for more!

Summary:

Banner

Struggling through tragedy and betrayal, Edward believes he’s living in a cold and loveless world with no choice but to harden his heart. He’s only living a numb half-life as his sole focus becomes revenge. If he forgets his true reason for living, is there anyone who can get through to him?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21 Read Count: 19536
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 03 Jan 2021
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2021 Title: Heart of Stone

I just finished rereading this story again and I still loved it so much.  Thank you for giving the opportunity to reread it before you pull it!  

The Loser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 243]
Summary:

loser

 

Bella struggled with her weight throughout her life. Her problems are enhanced by the pressures society and her family place on her. How could someone like her ever find a decent husband? Her childhood best friend might have the answer to all her problems. A fake marriage. A rise in station for Bella and with the marriage, Edward stands to gain his full inheritance. How can anyone believe that a Cullen would ever want someone like Bella? Who is the real loser here? AU. Cannon. HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94730 Read Count: 19542
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2019 Updated: 30 Jul 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Bella. I’m proud of the way she stood up for herself.  It’s a shame Carlisle told Bella about the twinkle in Edwatd’s eye.  I think it’s real and not just an act.  I’m sure in time they will figure out how the other truly feels.  Love this story. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella and Edward having ridiculous communication issues!!!  I’m quite positive Edward is going to go ballistic on Bella. I hope Sam doesn’t get in trouble.  Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story and completely understand how Bella feels.  I hope that she now begins to see herself as Edward sees her, beautiful and lovable and deserving of that love. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story and completely understand how Bella feels.  I hope that she now begins to see herself as Edward sees her, beautiful and lovable and deserving of that love. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This just reinforces how horrible a person Jessica is!!  I wonder what she will do next.  Edward and Bella are awesome together and made a great team.  Hopefully they’ll remember this as new obstacles come up.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG!!  I didn’t see that coming.  I feel for both of them.  If they had the maturity to communicate I think things would be so very different.  How different this would have went if Edward had stood up for Bella.  I can’t wait to see what’s next!!

Summary:

perfect

Charlie Swan is an unassuming single dad, raising his only daughter in the small town of Forks, Washington. When a disagreement between the president of the high school PTA and him spirals out of control, will Charlie step up to the plate and become the perfect candidate?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Charlie/OC
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10459 Read Count: 552
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2019 Updated: 19 Jul 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Esme was a real piece of work.  I truly loved her getting her ass handed to her!  Good riddance.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Esme was a real piece of work.  I truly loved her getting her ass handed to her!  Good riddance.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Esme was a real piece of work.  I truly loved her getting her ass handed to her!  Good riddance.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Esme was a real piece of work.  I truly loved her getting her ass handed to her!  Good riddance.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Esme was a real piece of work.  I truly loved her getting her ass handed to her!  Good riddance.  

The Lesser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 209]
Summary:

lesser

PART TWO. PLEASE READ PART ONE THE LOSER FIRST

Edward's been taken. Bella is about to have her baby. With the lessers revolting and holding the power in the North, Bella realizes that no one is going to save her. When she learns of Edward's whereabouts, she decides that she can no longer wait around. It will be up to Bella to save Edward. All those years she was called a loser are about to pay off when she has to blend in and become a lesser. Set in an alternate futuristic reality. HEA. AH.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94052 Read Count: 14584
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2019 Updated: 14 Nov 2019
Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Someone I Once Knew

Bella is so stubborn and hardheaded!  I agree that she needs to stop and think.  Maybe her father can get her to see reason. I can’t see her being able to save him as well. I LOVE this story.  I’m always so excited when I get an alert for a new chapter.  I’m so looking forward to Saturday evening!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision

I’m like Bella.  I would keep seeing Emmett  over and over if I didn’t do something to try to save him.  It’’s been quite a while since I had to learn to turn off my emotions to take care of my job.  It wasn’t anything like this but I did transcription for police department and the child abuse stuff was quite difficult, especially in the beginning. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Emmett

Wow!  This chapter had me sitting on the edge of my seat and laughing.  This was great.  I love this series and have gone back to reread a couple times.  I can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sanctuary

OMG!!  They finally told each other how they feel!!!  I loved this chapter so much.  I can’t wait for the next chapter!  

I hope you had a wonderful birthday!  I’m a fellow Virgo ♍️. My birthday isSeptember 4.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Enlightenment

I was actually afraid that Boyce's son was going to turn out to be Sam.  I'm proud of Bella for sticking to what she believes is the right thing to do.  Boyce has shown them kindness and generosity, so it's only right to show him the same thing.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  

I'll be here waiting regardless of how long it takes.  I hope work doesn't run you down too much.