Reviews by Maria11
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625230
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

dumb dumb dumb ass!! sorry i am swearing i can't help it it just rubs me the wrong way i truly don't know if i can hang on much longer....



Author's Response:

I know. Sometimes you just want to smack his head against a wall to see if anything rattles inside.  I swear he's going to get there soon.  :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

you are still dumb..... sorry i keep repeating it......i am hanging on by a thread.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

again duh!  your a smart boy edward again get your head out out out of your ass!!!  what's it going to take to have carlislie rape bella and you walk in to see what a sadastic f-er he is?  hellooooooooo is there anyone home?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

bella he still is a butthole don't worry i am sure it will come out soon

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

ok still don't trust him..... he is still brainwashed... please tell me that carlisle is not going to hurt her.  i can't hangel it.



Author's Response:

I promise Carlisle never gets his hands on Bella.  Edward is just about to his turning point.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

seems all is going better but i don't trust it.... you are going to make something bad happen aren't you?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

please come here edward so i can bash you head in.... just a little closer,,,, no closer BAM!!! god that felt good!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO! I love your reviews!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

good luck won't happen he is as dumb as a box of rocks.....no wait dumber!!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

go bella it's about time you let him have it.... i just worry that she has no other place to go and if she had the choice she wouldn't stay with him.  so she has to make lemonade from the lemons... still don't like it..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

intresting... i still have doubts.  again she is stuck... it's hard not to make that choice

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

better but it is going to be bad when they get back....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

oh man i would have run run run run...... that part is alittle unrealistic.... just saying one good day wouldn't have changed my mind.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

ok again it's all good but they are not back yet.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

ok that is a start but you haven't faced carlislie yet...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

go edward go edward... i can almost take back the head slam into the wall i gave you awhile back but not yet....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

sick sick sick you promised he wouldn't get bella he better not... i am soooo worried my stomach hurts.  please make edward smart enough.  they will run to phoenix won't they.  please tell me they get away..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

ok but bella is forshadowing the trouble that is brewing please please don't let anything happen to her again....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

ok like i said all in good but i hope carlislie get his due..... he deserves to have something bad happen to him..... it's Karma!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

again i am touched and i thought he would wait... something bad is going to happen i can feel it in my bones.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

watch out watch out he is coming sick sick bastard

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

knew it!  bad bad bad bad is going to happen

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

knew it i feel like crying my stomach hurts and edward is falling for carlislie trap  she is going to hate him!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

ok give a person a heart attack!!  i am holding you to your promise.... but you didn't say anyone else was going hurt her.... you have my hair going gray. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! While you're going gray, I'm being filled with laughter at your reviews. You're almost done!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

ok we can only hope my faith is fading too bella poor esme sick sick sick people.  can something bad happen to carlislie PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

i knew it you promised me no carlislie but not anyone else.... agh!!!



Author's Response:

Trust me...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

interesting..... i am glad he let her go so she could find herself and her feelings.  i always thougth he stayed because she had no where to go.... thanks for the story.  i can't believe that i stayed with it.  thanks for killing carlislie it made me very very happy!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

thanks for the story and for your comments back it as nice to know that you read them.... it was a long ride.  thanks again!



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me all the way through.  I'm glad you liked it.  I certainly enjoyed your comments.  I hope you'll check out my other stories as well.  None are as bad as the beginning of this one.

Summary:

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Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21250
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Make It Work

bell you need to ditch the crap!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Twisted

you go girl

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: A Beautiful Lie

ok that was really slutty!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Do You Want To

bella you are a SLUT... break it off damn you get jealous but he isn't f-ing anyone else you are!! SLUT break it off

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: My Little Secret

if you love someone you don't go behind their backs a f-ing f someone else how stupid do you sound,  STUPID SLUT!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: What's A Man To Do

ok you both are sluts i am beginning to not like this story....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Emotional Rollercoaster

you are shitty and wothless.... it is BS bella what you did yeah i would bel pissed at ed too he lied but you are a liar too

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Ring The Alarm/ Don't Take Your Love Away

you shouldn't be worried about getting proof from him you should be breaking up with em you bitch!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Sweet Dreams

this is STUPID!! bell is f-ing ed and em is f-ing rose...they all are a buch of a-holes and this story has no morals what so ever!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Shameless

need i remind you you are not broken up and you are a cheater and a liar and have no right to judge em or ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Open Arms/ Realize/ On Bended Knee

oh after he buys you gifts and tells you how much money he is worth you decide to leave em.... yeah right!  i am with ya on that one  NOT

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: I Will Be

just in time to see em with rose!! because he has no idea you wiill be there!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: What Are We Gonna Do

ok after all the crap you are going to make it sooo civil huh and just keeping up that high moral standards with everyone not telling the truth and thinking it is ok... whatever... i should have stopped reading along time ago but i guess i am a glutton for punishment

Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

you tell it bells!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

someone is getting changed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

didn't see that coming.  not use to a wimpy jasper!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

not cool.. not cool at all

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

he is going to have you give it up girl what else is there.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor alice i have a feeling sean and her won't be friends too long  jasper is going to get pissed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

uncool....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yeah the feeder huh doesn't sound too great!!

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

Banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15692
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Idiot

that plan sucks poor ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Return of the Native

you are going to be surprised ed!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Resurrection

oh boy james is on the loose i don't feel good about that

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Concerning Human Understanding

oh ed you are in deep... it will work out have faith in her!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Dead Souls

i hope james does't fit anywhere in the story but in know that won't happen!  bella is a doll..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Tramp Abroad

oh ed.. you dog!!!  alice might be right i hope not

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Awakening

oh and so it begins... you did have to throw tanya in didn't you!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Prophet

oh bella you are falling hard too.. give him a chance

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: 3 Lives

oh james i do not trust you.. bella don't fall for it please!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Way We Live Now

ed you are going to dinner..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Ambitious Guest

oh he did show up... she still has figured out that he is alice's and em brother?  interesting...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Pride and Prejudice

okay thought he would get an invite i guess not

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: One Hundred Years of Solitude

i want to cry for her... to feel so bad about yourself..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Great Expectations

oh boy ed.. you can't scare her like that.  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Much Ado About Nothing

Thanks for the update..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Praise of Folly

bella bella bella....thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Divine Comedy

ed is so sweet...love him!!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh boy love your bella  "boring" bella! haha knew it was em you were talking about before you named him.. i always love him!!  Can't wait to see where it all is going to go!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

did edward not get his human gene when born?  what up with that?  you will do this... doesn't he know if he asks nicely you might get a better result... he sounds really crazy!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

what a f-ing weirdo!! wtf- now he  has no social gene!  gee ed do you think that the girls were right that maybe you should have talked to her a dated her.... damn... you could talked to her hello send her someone to watch over her so she doesn't get hurt not kidnap her!! WACKO!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

CRAZY!!! CRAZY!! wow that is all i have to say right now i hope you make him better because right now he is just wacko and crazy!!!  you can't even feel the love he has for her by the way he is treating her.... CRAZY!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

okay still yuk!!  he is sooo yuky!!! yuk!!!  throw up how about that... yeah he is yuky and he makes me want to throw up!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh bella this is not going to be good... ed you are still wacko!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh boy....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

thank you for the wake up jasper. wow i can't believe she told them everything  i don't know if i would be so trusting but who else does she have.  i think it is going to come tumbling down when carlisle finds out.  i am secretly in love with jasper by the way.  can't he give up alice and go get bella?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

okay you are smoothing him out alittle but not too much like DUH!?! edward you were wrong?!?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

okay less creepy i guess....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

looks like you are going to know what a real kidnapping is bella!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

knew it bella you thought you had it bad before....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

okay now you have forced me to like ed and hate everyone else.... good way to turn him around in quick amount of time.  James better hold on he isn't going to be alive for long!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

go bella run!!! but i am sure they are going to get you back... no story if you escape!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

you are bagged he is going to get you... not going to be happy either. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow you saved her cool!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

cool back to together!  what now?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hey, way to set her up to get pregers!  made sure  you told us that carlisle gave her an antibiotic and now you are taking the time to tell us she is on birth control!!  opps and no other form used for the first time... well can't wait to hear the baby news!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ed you are one hot guy!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

okay i am confused by the beginning.. what is all that and i guess they are wrong james and aro are around and things are going down now!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

thanks for the update can't wait to see what is going to happen!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

thanks for the update!  can't wait to see what james is going to do

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

hum looks like it is going to be interesting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

cool dream come true.  as always bella is a lucky girl!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Daddy

how terrible!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Okhotnichya

poor abby that is gotta suck!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Threshold

complete bitch.. wow to do that with your child in tow!  wow just wow!!  i got an idea take bella on the tour to watch abby.. she is out from school!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

that was evil very evil of you and f-ing Hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Superstar

cool glad they are getting their crap together but you are lulling us something BIG is going to happen in know it!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

finally and it was HWOT!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

thanks for the story!