Reviews by Maria11
To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

this is getting scary!!1

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

jasper again your f-ing HOT!!  i know i said it more than once but bella you may have someone trying to kill you, you are one lucky B!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

okay jasper don't go too wild!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

okay... poor jasper i wonder who the lady is?  i am leaning toward tanya!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

okay girl you twisted it way way way!!! didn't see that coming!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

this isn't going to turn out well.......

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

awhh you are redeeming Ed.  how sweet!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

girl.... you are giving me a heart attack!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

thanks for the story i really ejoyed it!! i have thirteen on my alerts on ff and just waiting for you to finish.. i have soo many on the hook i can't read anymore!!!  thanks it was a great story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, I'm glad you liked it!

 

 

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

okay thanks for the story!  i really enjoyed it i can't wait to see what happened.  now the lucky bella is going to get to have sex with jasper.... she is always so lucky.. is ed dead?  alice dead?  i can't wait.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

hummmmm bella you trashy woman!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Cameron

edward?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Alex

edward is watching you F everyone bella!!!  what a perv!



Author's Response:

Lol.  He's not actually watching; he's just aware of Bella's...hobby. 

 

Thanks for r & r.  Hope you enjoy!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

oh ed the forever romantic!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what we thought too!  *huge grin*  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

oh ed you are being stupid!!!



Author's Response:

No matter how magnificent, just can't seem to avoid it.  Silly boy.  But he will be redeemed!  :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

love alice so funny that she knew ed too... love em of course!



Author's Response:

*huge pleased grins*  Delighted to hear it!  Thanks so for reading and responding!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

so funny sooo funny love Em.. it may be a fiesta but it's no party to ride in!!!! hahah classic love it!!!! :)



Author's Response:

You rock!  Got me laughing along with you that you're mentioning some of our favorite funnies to have included in the story!  :D  Deeelighted to hear it, bb!!  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake

thanks for the great story!  loved it made me smile! :)



Author's Response:

Thank-YOU for reading and sharing!!!  You absolutely returned the favor on the smiles!!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

oh yeah you better stay bella.. ed you are sooo f-ing HOT



Author's Response:

LOL  Yup.  Thanks!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

oh yeah i have seen all the parts and tested the water.. do you want to go out! haha funny



Author's Response:

Tee heee hee  *enormous grin*  You know, the foibles of youth!  ;P  You know, since he's always making sure and all, before taking it all the way.  lol  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

oh boy.. here we go...



Author's Response:

I can tell you had your belt tightened and the seat in the fully upright position!  Hope it was a good ride!  :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

oh she is always beautiful when she comes there hasn't been a story where she hasn't  oh bella you are always so perfect and Ed's penis is always beautiful.. ha!



Author's Response:

Why thank-you very much for the high praise!  Agree, how could they not be beautiful after all the cockblocking S.M. put us through, right!?  ;D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

ewww gross quivering aro.. yuk!!!



Author's Response:

Bahahahaa!  Yeeeeah!  *revulsion face*  We thought that might help with the whole "PLEASE let E win!!" thing.  LOL  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

oh boy... drama nothing like drama 



Author's Response:

Drama Llama in full effect! :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

cool can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :D

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I want to know what brought all this on?  and where is everyone?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

thanks for the chaotic story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, Maria!  I hope you enjoyed and will check out some of my other stories. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

jasper!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

jasper you are the man!! love ya!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ed go save her...... please...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

go save jasper!!!  who is the fake jasper?!?!?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i am way too confused,... i don't know anything at this point.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WTF!  is alice in on this?  she wants edward... so she and jasper set this up so he could have bella and she could have edward.  they killed rose because she figured it out!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok then who is with bella?!?! WTF i am totally confused!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

no who is this?!?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

something wicked this way comes and thy name is jasper!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A one night stand she can't remember is the perfect kind of one night stand in the eyes of 23 old cleaning lady Bella Swan, but when she falls pregnant she will begin a life journey she never expected to take. But hold on, what does her boss Mr. Sex on Legs Cullen have to do with all of this????????

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159830 Read Count: 58916
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Key to Conversation

wow fast fast fast... and the i love yous are out so that means something bad is going to happen!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Like Living in Disneyland

bells i am right behind you... klutz through and through!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Father, the Farther Away the Better

oh ed... charlie you are a dick!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Recreating

ookay but wow this is really fast and seems really easy

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Definite Answer

cat is out of the bad now!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Realisation

okay that was fast and hurried.... i f-ed you but didn't tell you ... i tell you , you run out .. i go get you ... i love you?  WTF?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Apartment Approving

ed is so sweet and charlie is still a dick!!  go ed go ed!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Rock It, Don't Tip It

oh ed... knew something would happen...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Talk About Unexpected

oaky that was quick... cool for charlie

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Repurcussions

ed you big emo!!! em you are mad but it's your sister....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Progress

poor em but maybe he will be happier...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Sadly Even More Repurcussions

poor bells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Angels in All Shapes and Sizes

wow intersting... didn't know you could do that.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Happiness in the Eye of the Beholder

oh sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Secret Baby Shower

yeah she gets to go home!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Not So Yummy Mummy

sweet little family..

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

ok that was easy?  Hot and easy.. what is left?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months

damn bells is beyond smart and fucking HOT!!! damn 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break

damn HOT i need a panty change!!  thanks for showing the love in the story and showing that the bella does have a say and edward takes her seriously!  i enjoy that.  i hate when it is just f-ing..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

again i love bella... she is more mature than ed!!!!  wow..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

wow what is up with tanya yes she is definately up to something.  rose and alice are complete bitches!!! i can't believe they are treating bella like that she supported them everything and they are being such nasty bitches to her.  that really sucks when your friends turn out to disappoint you so much!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

wow she really messed up and i can't believe she wouldn't tell the truth from the start!!  I would definately be very hurt too!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

again love the story and 6 kids!  wowo!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

love it was going to wait till it was completed and couldn't resist reading... so i am on the hook!!!  love the babies and can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing.  I have never like the way Bella was portrayed - to me she seemed like a pushover and I am raising my girls not to that crap from anyone - especially a guy so I write a strong Bella but hopefully not a cruel one.

Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

thanks for the update!! again i loved this story and i love your bella thanks for a great story without the unecessary drama between ed and bella.. they love each other and dont doubt each other.  the drama happens around them!!  i really like that!!  again thanks ;0p



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

that was HOT!! i can't believe that the story is almost over.  I makes me want to cry!  I lvoe this story it has been great!!!  ed is even hotter older!  HAHA crap he would be hot anytime i don't know what i am talking about!!!  thanks for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

thanks for the story i really enjoyed it!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22176
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

go boys go boys getcha a baby mama!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Making Our Future

natural baby that is the way you should go and bella wants to too!!1

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

Interesting...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Pleasing Bella.

Opportunity lost...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

WTF jasper!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: The lords of Volterra

Ewww if the girls are going to be used by them I might have to pass on the story



Author's Response:

No, the girls are not going to be used by the Volturi, but you will never get to find out now that you dropped this story.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The good doctor and the bad masters.

Okay sorry I am out

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

knew it and those guys are still after him!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

there is going to be trouble i can feel it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

well that is progressing... i still feel something bad is going to happen

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

ed is soo sweet!  love him!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

oh the drama is going to rev up again!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

how sweet i am glad they got a break from the drama!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

again i love ed he is a sweet guy!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

oh boy not cool i think charlie is going to be a piece of work! stay cool ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

oh boy the drama is thick!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

agin ed is sweet and i like him a lot!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

poor ed he makes me soo sad!!  at least one thing he did turned out well. her and bella!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

i so hope they get out of there before Roy finds them...



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the love on this story! I'm glad you like it :) 

 

Katie 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

wow ed that really sucks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

two lost souls... so sad

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

this is so sad i hope you let them find some happiness

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

again i hope things improve.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

oh boy... what a rotten life.  again i hope happiness find them

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

jacob is really messed up!!  glad things seemed to improve for ed and bell

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

yeah it's about time!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

poor bella!  how terrible.  i love your ed by the way!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

ed is sooo sweet.. poor bells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

oh boy can't wait to see how it is going to go.  I am sure they are going to run into the cullens!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

it's carlisle!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

oh ed get your crap together!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

yeah ed way to go!!!1

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

i hope they are on the road to happiness... ed is going to go through a lot though.. he is so insecure

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

poor ed... i know bella has been through a lot but ed doesn't feel good enough...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

oh boy here goes!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

yeah!!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

i knew it was going to be him... alice man you are a looser magnet!!!