Reviews by edwardxbellaforever
Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673872
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Re-reading. Still amazing.. :) :)

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Re-reading. It's funny to see the similarities between this and the kids. I mean.. Heidi; an older woman managing Edward's bar? And that older woman that Sonny has managing his bar? They're so alike. :P I like it.

Thanks for sharing. This is my second time through this and I still love it. I actually don't like rereading things. Once I've been through it, that's it. I have a good memory so I don't like reading things again, yet I'm rereading this...  That's how amazing it is!! :) :)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Great story, but.. Is it ever gonna be finished? I'd love to read more, please.

Please don't abandon this. It's really good!! :(

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533600
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

So.. Candace is the 16 year old girl Carlisle slept with, before Quiet Storm even began? So, 13 years later... She's what? 29 years old now? And she had Anthony at 26? Then how come [I think it was Aro who] said that she had a baby at such a young age...? That kinda confused me a bit..

Aww. Poor Bella. Carlisle really messed things up, huh? I hope he tells Esme. And soon! I remember you said in an AN or something that he isn't done messing up yet, and now I'm wondering if this is what you meant, or if he's gonna do more stupid shit. Also, I cheated and looked on your blog at things for this story. I saw the collage of pictures you put of the people, and you put one of Carlisle and a 'Alexandra' all by themselves. And Esme wasn't in the one of all the characters. Makes me sad.. Is she gonna kill herself or something? And Carlisle meets someone he actually loves?

Anyways.. Great story. Just wanted to say that really. I haven't left a review here before, but I'll try to from now on. Your stories are great and you deserve to know it!Thanks for sharing your wonderful words!!! Your Edward/Bella from this Storm series are one of my all-time favourites. They are amazing together! :) :)

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

Lol.. It seems that only Edward and Bella will be the last couple standing. What happened to these guys? They have so many kids. And it's weird that Carlisle would do this. I still think of the book Carlisle.. Where he's all loving and doting to Esme. It's weird to read about them like this. :P

Another great chapter though. I love this. Your characters are awesome! :)

Also, I saw that you wrote a third installment to this.. That sounds interesting. I can't wait to read that as well! :)

By the way.. Can you please tell me what year this takes place in? I'm thinking way into the future. (iPhone 6? :P) So.. Did the first book take place during present time, or maybe a couple years ago... then this is 12 years into the future? Is that how it is.. So almost 2020? And what, the third takes place in the 2030s?

Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

I'm sorry to have to ask this question, but it's been a while since I read Quiet Storm, and while I should have read that before I started this, I was so excited I just HAD to start this one. Therefore, I'm a little confused on some things and was hoping you could help me out. Was Bella pregnant before she met Edward, and had a miscarriage. Edward mentions that that last miscarriage they had after Damion was born was HIS second and HER third. His because they also had one before Sonny was born, in their first year of marriage.

Also, how old are they? Edward was 25 and Bella was 23 at the start of QS, so.. Two years passed in that book (right?) and then the epilogue was 9 years after that, and this is 2 years after THAT. So, what... Edward is (25+2+9+2) 38 years old? And Bella 36? Is that it. Sorry but I just like to get people's ages right, when I try to picture them and the story in my head.

Great story. I love this. Thank you so much for sharing with us! I can't wait to finish this and start the third one. Their kids, all grown up. Aww! :)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Oh gosh. This chapter.. I cried. Really hard. I had to stop reading for a minute or two. I don't exactly know where you're going with this, but I'll trust when you say that everything you write is for a reason. Considering I'm reading this SEQUEL, and still love it, that's gotta mean something good. :)

Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Holy shit! It's Esme isn't it? Who hired that guy to kill Candance and Carlisle? Wow.. When that happened, I thought about this, but it was more of a "Lol.. What if Esme were to set that up" kinda thing.. That's funny. I guess she really just wanted a son after all, huh? :P

Great story. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

Ahah. Sonny is hilarious. So much like Edward. 

Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing!! :)

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

Yeah, you can definitely tell Edward isn't interested. He's as you said, "jeolous of anyone who comes between them". In one chapter, he even mentioned that he loved Bella more than his own kids!!

He also hates it when Alex is over. I think her not talking to him and "being rude" is just an excuse he uses to reason with his not liking her.. he doesn't like "rude" people. :P

Another great chapter. I'm curious though.. What's going on with the whole Sonny/Alex thing... I mean, I'm not a boy, so I can't understand, but is this just a little crush. You've mentioned it several times, so I'm just curious as to where that's going.. She's only 12 years older than him.. :P

Thanks for sharing! I love this story. Also, you said that the third installment for this series is going to be short.. What do you mean by that exactly? I mean, these last two were over 40 chapters... And the third one is in the teens.. I haven't started it yet, but is it almost finished? How long is it going to be exactly? I'd like it to be close to finished before I start it. :)

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

Whoa.. Mama bear. I understand she's upset, but Bella's not like that.. I'm interested in seeing if he gives her those ten minutes.. Is she gonna be strong enough to torture someone?

Sad chapter. Made me cry.. :(

Thanks for sharing. I love this story. The ups and downs, and everything inbetween.. :)

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Aww. What a cute ending.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. And I can't wait to get to read the third installment!! Excited to read about the kids. How many chapters are there going to be in total for that one? Same length as these two?

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806708
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Another great chapter. Please update soon!! Hopefully with Damion. :) I'm liking this Jordan plotline! I think they're very good together.

Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Oh, my God! I never, ever thought of Maggie that way. And that would also explain why he could also never explain, or even understand himself, why he was so attracted himself. And Bella's right--it had nothing to do with love or physical attraction. He was hooked to her because she's basically a female version of him all those years ago. It also explains why he was so against Sonny (someone he knows that plays around with girls) dating her.. because he was worried Sonny would just use and abuse her (like Lauren did him). How sad.. :(

Ok, well I guess I don't hate anyone right now! And you ma'am are a wonderful writer! I did not really see this all the way through. Maybe because I liked Damion so much--I was clouded. I've liked him from the beginning--the second story in this series, when he was first introduced, he was such a wonderful character! And reminded me so much of Edward.

You're a great writer, and this is a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing!! :)

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

Really hope it works out with Damion and Amelia. She's good for him!

Sonny needs to end it with Katie though. She's so freaking annoying. I get it; they were best friends since they were little, but that doesn't mean they have to be together forever. He's stopped looking for 'the one' because of her, thinking SHE'S the one... but she isn't. He needs to move on!! :(

Great story. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Kylie

Aww.. Little Kylie's all grown up. I aways knew you'd pair these two together. During Weather the Storm, they'd always be placed together. :P

Another great chapter. Thank you so much for sharing with us!! :)

Also, this Julie. Damion's girlfriend. Is she the same Julie in his (kindergarden?) class who fell and flashed the class her panties?? :P

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Damion Part One

Whoa... He's weird. Does he actually love her, or is he just a little messed up? Got his wires crossed.. I guess there's only one way to find out.. Read!! :)

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I love it!! Also, is that girl (the redhead?) that helped him on the street Amelia? The one Bella wanted him to meet? Luke's daughter? :)

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

Lol. So much of this last scene reminded me of Edward and Bella (at the very beginning-- their first time). :P

Another great chapter. Other than E&B, I think he's my favourite. He's the best!!! :)

Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

You're awesome. It's your birthday yet you give US a treat? Thank you!!

And happy, happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. :)

Is something going on with Layla and Sonny. I remember once you said that you always have a reason for writing everything you write... She's been in quite a few scenes. And it's obviously not working out with Katie, so... He's going to meet someone soon? His soulmate? I doubt you would leave Sonny out.

And I really, really, really hope it works out with Damion and Amelia. I mean.. it seems to be working. He even told her what happened with Lauren-- and he's never told ANYONE that before. He trusts her.. He deserves this! I hope he doesn't get his heart broken! :(

Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story with us! I'm so in love with all these characters! Ahhh! Can't get enough! :) :)

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

Poor Damion. He's been through so much. I love him, but sometimes, reading his POV makes me so sad..

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I absolutely love this!!

Once again, though, I'm curious where you're gonna take this Maggie storyline.. I'm not sure what you're gonna do with her, why she's still here.. 

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

Sonny is making me mad. Seriously. And I really don't like Maggie either. Poor Damion! Sonny should just move away with the "love of his life" and never call or return again.

Ugh. Good story though. Again, poor Damion. I feel so bad for him, with every scene he's in. And Amelia... What is up with Maggie? Why is she so great? Why are they fighting for her like this?

Well.. Thanks for sharing. I need more Edward and Bella scenes, less Sonny/Maggie and definitely a happy ending for Damion.. Poor Damion.. :(

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

I actually do kind of want to blame Maggie. :P And I don't hate Damion. He's just not in the right place. And with the Lauren thing... well she messed him up, too, at such a young age! I kind of feel like he's not in the right state if mind.

Also, I really don't like Sonny and Maggie--especially together. If they could stay out of the whole story altogether, I'd be all the more happier. 

Thanks for sharing. :)

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

I was so excited to see that you had updated. And I wasn't disappointed! This was a great chapter. I hope nothing bad happens.. He's had enough, woman! Let him be happy!! :P

Great chapter. Thanks for sharing!! :)

Please update soon. You don't know how often I kept checking this. I'm sure you had a couple dozen more hits.. just from me. Sometimes this site doesn't send out alerts, so I had to check myself.. :P

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

This hasn't been updated in quite a while.. Hopefully we'll get a new chapter soon? Please? :(

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

Perhaps it's because I just like Damion more, but.. this Sonny story arc is really making me mad. I just don't want to hear from him at all! And especially Maggie. She annoys me.

More Damion, please!

Update soon...? :)