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Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Amazing... I just jump to this story whenever it updates!

I wonder what Edward will think of the few "hint" he gave?  Do you think he will work it out in his head anytime soon?  The sooner he figures it out the sooner he may be able to help her. James has every right to be worried about being found... I wonder how hard he's looking for him and her?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yes, Edward's gonna get there soon, lol!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I figured it was the cat liter that was going to completely clue in Edward to what Wisp' former life was. ... I can't wait to here is inner and verbal dialogue when he admits it to himself and others.  I hope the heck they can get more out of James or somehow can figure out where she came from.  Web searches for that kind of very kinky and depraved things.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow! So Rose was able to make a connectin with Wisp... That is wonderful.  Are we going to hear about what Edward and Emmett got upto? 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

He really did need the break... if nothing else to be able to think.  I bless Emmett for being firm but kind in making sure he was taking care of himself.  It is often the case that the caregivers health suffers from such a stressful situation.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Will Edward ever share what he believes her diet was before?  How she tried to use the litter box?  I think Jasper needs to know if he is to really evaluate her.

Another great chapter!  More ... please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope Edward has a chat with Scott, questioning before getting angry.  I loved this chapter, Rose is so good to her.   I do wish they would try harder to get her to learn some new words. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I don't know about NIMH but NIH (National Institutes of Health) only have about a 7% pay line.  In other words only 7 out of 100 applications are funded. 

I wanted to bite Dr. Lawton too... why wasn't Scott doing or saying more, if he was the one in charge of the case.

Just the idea of "Dr." Lawton wanting to use her as an experiment is sickening!

 

Welcome back... I missed you and your story!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm glad she is recovering... poor thing is so undernourished and underweight she couldn't possibly fight that infection without help. 

Great chapter, I'm glad to see her opening up as weel.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Emily managed to get quite a bit of dialogue out of little one.

I hope the younger picture of Gerandy help identify him... and I surely hope  publicizing her picture doesn't bring the bad man out of the woodwork.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324431
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

I love that they are being cheezy and romantic... but they really do need to get to know each other a little better.  As for Jasper interrupting his day off... out of the question...  he should not allow it. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

I guess there weren't going to let that interruption get in the way of there time together.  I have a feeling we know who is going to "out" them now.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

I can't understand why Edward isn't making a better effort to keep her out... Like a restraining order (if they put it on Bella... she and Edward would still be able to work together????)... any way.

I love your Charlie, even if he is a little obtuse.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

So their secret is out, I look forward to the fallout.

Have fun in Chicago!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

I hope his makes him do some sole searching service some wher to learn a little compassion.  

Well it guess that could have gone worse... I'm not sure how though.

Great chapter!  Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

Yes they need light and fluffy for a bit.  It will help keep them on track emotionally.

Summary:

A one-shot of Christian and Ana's honeymoon in Britain.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1673 Read Count: 1041
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so sweet. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57777
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I just love Taylor's inner voice.

i often wondered why Christian always treated Ana like she couldn't take it... Although I must admit it was one of her finest hours when she let him have it over his failure to treat her as his partner.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Indecent Proposal

That was a hoot!  I was giggling out loud... I just love his inner thoughts!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I couldn't find your book on amazon... I'll try again in a few days.

Wow, great chapter... I'm glad he was discusted with Christian over the hand cuff thing... I know I was.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon. Yes, Taylor really wanted to lay into Christian for that.

The new book comes out May 17. Thanks loads for your interest. jx

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am loving Taylor's POV!  He is not so stoic in his head is he? More as soon as you can please.



Author's Response:

He's a swan: all going on beneath the still waters. Yes, an update very soon.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Endgame

I guess he decided to give the guy a break... that was a very rough chapter.  Cried my eyes out when she left (just like in the book).  The different perspective was just has heart wrenching.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! That's an amazing response. And the next 5 days will be tough on everyone, too. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Well of Loneliness

That was a terrific chapter.  It showed that Taylor does care and that he is loyal and discrete.  I can't wait for the reunion... and what Taylor thinks during the drive back to Seattle.



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command ;)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man

I am really liking your Taylor, he has such a great sense of humor.  On the inside at least.  More please.  I can't wait to see how he tries to figure out how Leila gets in the apartment.



Author's Response:

That's coming soon!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - A Woman of Substance

I can't wait to get his take on the happening coming soon!  I love your story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, aabc! Yes, more coming.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Long Weekend

I laughed out loud reading this story today!  The tennis metaphor was priceless!



Author's Response:

Ah good. Glad you liked that :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25, Masquerade

Ahh... but his evening is far from over.

I do love his perspective on the party.



Author's Response:

Indeed! And he's going to be VERY angry...

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Saturday Night, Sunday Morning

I love his personality ... he is so irreverent in his head.

Author's Response:

Exactly! But actually says very little.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

As I've said before I love Taylor's side of the story and watching his relationship with Gail grow.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hope you like the latest development in his relationship with Gail :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Fight Club

Great chapter!  I can't wait for the discussion about what is on the computer etc.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30, Near Dark

Wow Taylor and his ex sure have a volatile relationship.  It was almost funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I thought it was awful-funny. They know they shouldn't but they can't help themselves! jx

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Bride of Frankenstein

Poor Taylor he missed all the action... His ex wife really is a B...  Taylor should have been the one to tell her.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36, Running on Empty

Never a dull moment in the Grey household, poor Taylor never catches a break.



Author's Response:

Nah! He definitely needs a pay rise! jx

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Fatal Attraction

Amazing what goes on behind the scene.  His POV is so interesting.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Yikes!  I like to think that he would have stepped in had Christian been to drunk to use good judgement... I'm glad he didn't have to.  This next chapter should be a doozy...



Author's Response:

Sorry I'm only replying to this now! Hope you've enjoyed the ride : ) jx

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40, Mr and Mrs Jones, um, Smith, um, Taylor

Thank you!  You've made me laugh, cry and be shocked!  Well done.

My favorite line this chapter... "every potential problem from Ana feeling unwell, to some sort of apocalyptic future where Seattle is plunged into darkness, hospitals are without power, and flesh-eating zombies stalk the streets. ". I was giggling mindlessly before my first cup of coffee this morning. 

Summary:

 

 

This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC

Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring.  Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

This outtake just shows how far Bella and Edward have come.  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I hope things go ok... yes get her away from the problem but will she stay away from it?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I'm glad Mia and the baby are doing better.  

I wonder what is going to happen with the bully?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Excellent! No drama while he was away.  Fun and lovely chapter!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I hope that Christian has seen Flynn, I also hope that Christian stops being an ass and remembers what he put Ana through over the years and forgives her as her heart was in the right place.  

I hope the talk in the next chapter.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

That was adorable!  

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

That was amazingly cute!  Loved it.  More when you can, please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Very cute!  

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

It's so hard Stephen a child gets hurt.. They don't understand and are terribly afraid.  Poor Teddy!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Well that wasn't too dramatic.... Thank goodness.  I'm glad she was ok with it and won't cause problems... At least for now.

i hope the judge agrees.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I wonder if little Tommy saw anything interesting?  That was a great chapter, fun and HOT.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

That was lovely!  The kids were so cute!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

I expected the decision about Mouse... I kind of agree.  I hope they can help find a lovely family and home for her.  I'm sure they will see fit that she never goes without and gets a terrific education.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Somehow there are 2 copies of the chapter here?

Great chapter, I've often wondered what happened with Christian mother and father.  I'm glad it was ok. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know about the chapters. This site and I have been having major issues tonight. I hope it is corrected.

Thanks for the review.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Hmm seems she has plans for him... I wonder what he will say and do with her "stopping from the bottom"?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

They didn't really do a full "date night" did they?  LOL

I like how their relationship has grown... but I do wonder what the email that made him scowl was all about. 

Thanks for the update and happy holiday's (which ever you celebrate).

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Oh no!  What's happened now?!  I'm glad Ana didn't put up with him not telling her what's going on... He really had no excuse to not givin a brief idea if what's happening.  Will he never learn that it's better she knows than not?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Silly, not wairing sunscreen, he usually so precise.  I'm sure he learned a lesson.  But I guess tying her up was a pleasant consequence.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was cool... I'm glad Christian told her off etc!  

Of course I followed you to this story, I can't get enough.



Author's Response:

Thanks for following me. It got off to a rough start, but hope all the bugs are worked out.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder what you have in mind for that letter from his "grandmother"... should prove interesting.

I love them playing in the rain, it really is underutilized.



Author's Response:

Letter coming up. I've always liked the rain. It's just wet, that's all.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Happy times for Ana and little Grace, very sweet.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The talk with his "grandmother" is a mine field.  Its not going to go over very well when 50 finds out.  I wish she had told him, it really should be up to him shouldn't it?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hmmm... what is Paul doing there?  More importantly what will Christian think?  I hope this doesn't derail their enjoyment of the trip.

Wait... Is that the same Paul from the hardware store?  Or a different Paul?  Wasn't Paul a "Clayton"?



Author's Response:

Different Paul. From Book I. You'll find out today.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Now I remember who he is!  Sorry about that.

I'm glad Christian is supporting her in this endeavor... she needs a life too.  I enjoyed their trip so far.



Author's Response:

Everybody forgot about poor Paul. Christian will support her until he decides not to. You know how he is.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can see the writing on the walls... another huge misunderstanding is looming.  I can feel it.



Author's Response:

They'll work it out. At some point. Christian will eventually buy a clue.

thanks.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am so sorry that Ana ... sort of tricked him into the bondage, especially the first time they "switched", I'm glad they talked after the latest, what I would say... revenge.  Hopefully they learned something and won't make the same mistake again.



Author's Response:

I think they learn well. Goodness knows they have to to stay together.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I know that his intentions were good but he really should have spoken to her about it.  I hope that she can make him understand that he didn't do her any favors.



Author's Response:

She will. Poor Christian, he tries so hard and always messes up.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

They both have a long way to go before they can move on from the loss of Sam but they need to continue to talk to each other.  I like that Ana is the strong one and makes him talk.



Author's Response:

She has always had to pull everything out of him. He's not exactly an open book.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think little Grace has mommys ring in that little purse... I hope it's Christian getting home late... For a good reason.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope there are no repercutions later... but it was funny just the same. I am surprised that he let Elliott tell him what to do.

Author's Response:

I think poor Christian was trying to fit in? Maybe. He probably could care less about fitting in though. Oh, well. Elliott will explain in Chapter 16.

Thanks for leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Teddy is having a much better start in life... I hope he stays sweet and doesn't get too cocky when he grows up.  I love how happy they are.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It may be up to them to work it out... but Christian doesn't have to be involved.  He should at least reassure Ana if it's not a bad thing he's doing. 

I'm glad Ana didn't fight him too much about it. 

I'm also glad that Christian had a chat with little Grace and it ended on a positive note.  It was soooo sweet.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, they had a lovely evening.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was sexy and profound.  I hope he understands how completely she loves... him. 

 



Author's Response:

I think he does, because he feels the same way about her.

Thnaks.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just a normal day for the Greys... now lovely.  I do forsee drama in Scramento.



Author's Response:

Drama may not be in Sacramento, but I'm sure  when she gets home it will hit.

Thanks

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Things never get boring with 50... I look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks. More on the way.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Dogs... you have to love them.  I have 3 and they are not always a pleasure, but they are worth the inconvenience.



Author's Response:

I do love 'em. I have two right now. In fact Grace is modeled after my Papillon Grace. Same personality.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh that was evil!  I must admit he seems a bit too young for a heart attack but it could happen.  Please update soon I don't know if I can stand the suspense.

It just so happens I'm in the waiting room of our local hospital, as my husband did have a heart attack.  He is going to be ok it was not a serious one (thank god) but a warning of things to come if he doesn't take care of himself better... 



Author's Response:

Oh, my God. I'm sorry. I hope your husband is okay. What an awful chapter for you. 

I've had several very young patients that have had heart attacks and strokes, It can happen at any age. The body is a miraculous thing.

Get back to your husband.

e.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope they continue to have further discussions about his stress... we would hate to lose Christian.



Author's Response:

You won't lose him as long as I am writing.

thanks for reading and leaving the nice comment.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I hoped you were ok, you are always so prompt posting.

Great chapter, I like seeing personality in Taylor.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love very strong willed Ana... I can't wait to hear the rest of their discussion.

Will Christian ever learn to stop keeping stuff from Ana?!?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Another terrific chapter ... That went better than expected.  I thought there would be a argument.  This was better.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was so cute!

Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

I'm sure she will, but hopefully not before she has his promise not to interfere unless she asks him to.

I'm sure Sawyer will stay close.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Why didn't we see that coming?!

I'm sure Ray won't be too happy about her loosing her job... I hope the fallout from that isn't too bad.



Author's Response:

She hasn't lost her job yet. Ana isn't the task master Christian is.

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Hmmm fun times with the grey's... More please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow a stone cold Christian... Not sure I have any advice for Ana.  I not sure where you are heading with this but it's scaring me.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank god!  I was worried for a while... Tears are purging down my face.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That was a amazing homecoming!  I loved every word, especially that he went to see his grandmother.



Author's Response:

Me too.

Thanks

E.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

For some reason there are 2 chapter 152's here.

Great chapter, I wonder why he wants to know?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I love how honest and open Ana was with Teddy!  So cute.  I just know that Christian will say its ok to cut Grace's hair now that he know how hard it is to get her to wash it... So funny.

What a lovely peaceful day they had together... Goes a long way towards making up for his long absence.

I look forward to them getting together with his GM, I hope it will be heartwarming.

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Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Ana knows how to take care of her man... And he loved every minute!

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I'm worried about what is happening with Tommy and especially with his Mom... she is trouble (or in trouble), I can feel it.

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I hope Lorna isn't going to grab Tommy and run!  I look forward to more info on her back story.

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Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I hope shopping goes well... The beginning was very HOT!!!

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Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

I wonder if she will run into thotell gossiping women at the event... Should prove interesting.

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Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

She handled that bitch with class.  Great chapter.

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

 Oh she is being a naughty girl... How can she still be needy after the goings on of the morning?  Why would you e

want to be alone when Christian would be more Han willing to take care of things?  I'm perplexed.

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Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I hate getting a cold!  I can image Christian not being a very good patient...LOL

 

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I hate colds!  I hope all goes well with Tommy... He appears tot be adjusting well.

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I wondered why he was being such a petulant ass.  If the tides were turned I wonder how he would react to Ana being bitchy to him for not getting answers?

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

He knows everything, get reports continuously all day... Of course he knows.  I do give him kuttos for not being boorishly mad.

To solve the problem, have her CP with her... 

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Thank goodness, it was just stress relief ala Claude.  Terrific chapter!

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Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Aw Tommy, I feel bad for him.  I hope she never shows up again.

i like the idea of them creating a new playroom... I hope they make it fun.

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Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Well, that was a fairly vanilla fest!  And they both loved it.