Reviews by aabc
Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32511
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm... Why is he doing that?  I thought he was against the match.  This should prove interesting.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmmm me thinks Caroline... Well I think I'll keep my theory quiet for now.

hmm, what up with the price being all patient?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aha!  I knew there was more to this than what we learned so far!

i can't wait for this revelation.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward can't be all bad if he has a nice friendly dog... Can he?

i can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ah... My question too.

Well at least she knows what going on... But how is it going to continue?  I look forward to more?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, a lot more answers!  Thanks for another update.  

I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my, still not many answers, just more questions.  I hope we get at a few more next time!  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hmmm... A not perfectly toned Edward, what a novelty.

Tanya should be kicked to the curb, with a promise of keeping her mouth shut, of course.

The surprise should prove interesting.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I had a feeling it would them as a surprise!  I think we are getting closer to the truth...

More please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just where does Edward go when he disappears?  Will Bella get to talk to the king?  I can't wait for more.

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth

That was fun!  I look forward to more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache

That should prove a fun talk... I bet she is sexting and she cheating on Edward.  She just wants his trust fund.  She's a bitch and very shallow.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

I would have enjoyed him putting her down more... But I guess I'm just being mean.  She did NOT get the hint... I see her causing problem down the road.

I can't wait to see how the story plays out... Background on all the key players.

Enjoy your new computer!

 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts

No you aren't going to make us wait!  Ahhh.

Regardless I look forward to more... This is a very fun story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen meets Bella Swan. She's the young veterinary nurse who still believes in true love. He's the tattooed architect who finds himself very taken with the special girl. "There's something about you... Somehow you've got to me, Little Swan." This is their story of a fairytale romance in a modern world.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101028 Read Count: 39737
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Jan 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

They had a fun night... But this thing with Carlisle and Esme... It needs to come out sooner than later!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Fun evening so far... I hope they dance together at the club.  He is so into her and her to him...

When is is he going to ask her out?



Author's Response:

Hi,

Big thanks for the review.

They are both very much into each other and more will be revealed as the chapter's go on.

There may be a little dancing at the club... You'll find out more!

J x

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: A Gentleman and His Lady

Slow boil... He doesn't even have her phone number yet!  She probably doesn't even think he's interested.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Hmmm... The cousin... What's that all about?

Carlisle has something going on... He's sick or in some other kind of trouble.  

I look forward to more!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ok, I'm hooked.  More please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I can't help but think that his dad is being weird, because something is wrong with his mom.  She is sick or something, and she has decided not to tell Edward.  I look forward to the mystery being revealed.

What easy times Bella and Edward have together, I hope whatever is going on with his folks doesn't derail their budding relationship, but helps it grow stronger.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

What the heck!  How darn someone hurt her!  I'm not sure I wouldn't have called the cops... That's assault and battery, cousin or not.

i hope this doesn't effect their relationship.  More when you can please.



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reviewing!

The incident will affect their relationship but only in the good ways! I thought I'd take this opportunity to help Little Swan see how safe and comforted Edward can make her feel.

Everything with her cousin will be sorted in time...

Next chapter is soon, in a few hours! 

J x 

 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Well they had fun getting to now each other a bit more.

I'm waiting for Edward to lose patience with his dad and find out what's eating him.

 



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for reviewing! 

Edward and his Dad will have their conversation and get everything out on the table... At some point. You'll need to wait and see!

The next chapter will be uploaded in a couple of hours, so keep an eye out and let me know what you think!

J x 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Awwwww..... I'm sorry her cousin hit her, but it pushed these 2 together.  So I'm happy.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi,

It's a shame that the cousin interaction happened but you're completely right - it pushed them together and allowed Little Swan to see just how much Edward cared for her.

The next chapter will be up soon.

Thanka for reviewing! 

j x

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Well... That was intense!  I hope he can get to the bottom of what's going on!  Keep pushing.... He'll crack and admit what's going on.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Ideal first date, light and uncomplicated.  They have a wonderful connection, I look forward to "seeing" it grow.

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47980
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So many swirling dramas... I can wait for more!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmm...  I'm am surprised Bella was left alone so long, as sick as she was,  but I am glad it was Edward they came to check on her.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes she has more manners then all of them put  together it seems.  Why would Carlisle or Esme say something?  

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh dear!  I hope it's nothing serious.  

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So much happening!  Why is Tanya still there?  I hope she doesn't take advantage.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I keep waiting for something sinister to happen... I'm sure you have something planned, can't wait!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I expected Tanya to do something nasty.  I just hope someone does try something while Edward is gone.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, not what I was expecting!  

Great chapter!

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think she should have voiced her concern before jumping to conclusions.

Big family by graetdream Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Bella is a loving mother of two beautiful children, but also a very famous, beautifull busness woman. She has a dark past but not dark enough to prevent her from living her life fully.Edward is the head of one of the major hospital in Seattle and also a pediatrician.

They have many things in common but the most important is how they live their sexuality.

Very kinky story but full of love and family aspects! NO Cheating.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission, Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1009 Read Count: 4480
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2016 Updated: 02 Jun 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Presentations

Interesting so far.

You should try to find a beta to help with the grammar and punctuation.  I have to give you a lot of credit for trying to write a story, not in your own language.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, I'm going to find a beta, but I'm new in this site so I don't know how start the research. I hope to improve my writting ability and be able to make less mistakes. 

Hope to read your reviews also for the nexr chapters! Bye!

Summary:

It's been a long five years for my sister and I. Hello I'm Isabella Swan but I prefer Bella. My sister Rosalie and I are headed to Los Angela's California. Well us and our little girl's. Clara Jane Swan age 3 and Lillian Rose Swan age 3. Yeah our girls are the same age born on the same day it was weird how it all went down, but that's not the story I'm about to share with you. Anyways, we are now just boarded our flight in Seattle to head to Cali, we are leaving our home of Forks, Washington. A place we have called home all our lives. We have no family here anymore so it's for the best. Our ex-husbands were ass holes. We should have known with those two thick as thieves, they grew up together, so it was only right for them to cheat on their wives together. I bet your wondering who our ex-husbands are well I'll tell you. Royce King and Jacob Black, If you're wondering why our kids don't have their father's last name well the thing is they never wanted the girls so when we were divorced they signed over their rights and we made damn sure that there was no way they could renig on that deal. So we are now going to live with our dad in Cali. He is going to help us get on our feet and get a place. Let me tell you. Daddy wasn't to please to hear that his little girls were miss treated. So when we are finally in the air those two were going to get a visit from one of dad's old police buddy's from Seattle. Now dad isn't in the line of duty anymore.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 788 Read Count: 244
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2016 Updated: 08 Jul 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: California

Interesting so far.  I look forward to more.  FYI Formatting didn't work.

Tagged by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

By nature, all male species want to mark their territories. It’s in their nature to try to keep their female safe and tag them as theirs. I wasn’t an exception … until her. She drove me crazy. She tagged me as hers. And in return, I gave her my heart. All human. Rated for adult themes.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11334 Read Count: 15899
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Nov 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass

Ok so we know what broke them up, but he spark is still very strong.  What were they doing for the time apart?  I look forward to that coming to light as the story unfolds.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter-4: Messy Business

I look forward to their story coming to light.

Summary:

 

The Prince

In the hot, dry desert, can the Prince find true love or will an arranged marriage dry his heart into sand, or it will she be an oasis to his heart? E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1756 Read Count: 4893
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2016 Updated: 09 Oct 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Sounds interesting, but will your"Bella" put up with other wives?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting story, I look forward to more.  Please continue.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmmm... trouble coming.  I look forward to more.