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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255190
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm a greedy one, say 10 minutes of this and 10 minutes of that! The number sixty nine keeps popping in my mind. I could add alot more, but I'll let it go.:) I'm so confused by who is after Bella. Between the losers at the club and James  I don't know what to think. Emmett gave good advice to Edward on just being patient with Bella. The truth will come to light. Another winning chapter.



Author's Response:

Maybe when you have all the pieces to the puzzle you will be able to piece it togther..right now you only have half the pieces out of the box and no picture to look at ...I love Emmett he is the perfect big brother...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

"Now we're even."  DOM Edward shows his beloved Bella the control he has over her. She's not injured, she'll live, just another lesson learned. I think Heather, Office Hawk, and James are involved somehow. Shenanigans are running a muck at New Moon Club. They all got some type of beef with Edward. Caius, Tanya, and Mike are suspects in breaking into the house. I really hate to admit this, but I don't even trust Aro. Jane is the best, BUT wouldn't Aro want to trade Jane in on a new younger sub, say Bella?...It's a man thing! I'm just saying. Please take care of yourself, feel better and Happy New Year.



Author's Response:

Aro? (gasp) OH MY!!! You are untrusting ...lol...I'll tell you what - just because it's you - I will work the conversation at Monday's dinner around your Aro theory and let him answer that question....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Merry Christmas to you and M. Tks for posting. Great chpt, it had so many "WTF" moments in it and I love them all. Mike and Tanya both stepped, hopped, skipped, jumped over boundaries in regards to Edward. I'm glad Edward got to see how out of control Tanya really is. Alarm triggered?!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Yes yes chpt 33 here I come!! I apologize for reading so slowly, but I have to visualize scenes, and process some of this stuff. I'm excitied about this cabin getaway. Bella wanted to stay in sub mode, well nothing like having to request and obtaining permission to use the bathroom from Edward will keep her in his command. Master Edward know some tricks.:)



Author's Response:

it doesn't matter to me, how slow you read, just let me know once you finished ...talk to later ... and yes Edward has some tricks....lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My sister THATS THE WAY recommended me this fic, and she was so right.There is nothing like a red hot smoking Dom Edward. I called her by telephone the other day, she was sounded so despondent I thought there was family problems. When she told me it was your story that had her panties in a bunch like that I had to drop the story I was reading to get to yours. If my sis is despondent, I want the same. This has to be a helluva story!! You're a smooth writer.



Author's Response:

YOU ARE MY 1000TH REVIEW ...YES ...1000... CONGRATULATIONS!!!

For what you ask? Well, I have a gift for you, but if i give it to you now it will not make much sense...so when you are caught up in the story and have past Chap 33, you let me know ... and I will give you your gift ... if you wish to pass your gift on to the next person(the 1001 reviewer) that would be fine, or if you want to give it to someone else, you let me know that too... thanks ..lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That James is an evil lunatic. I hope Jake and Sam both kicked his butt for what he did to Bella. I'm happy the Cullen Clan has accepted Bella and I'm also glad to know on Eddies' behalf, that there is a whole lot of TWITCHING going on. He's hot for Bella. Emmett is sooo......Emmett. He's funny. I'm enjoying your story.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it ..lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter. Edward has his shit together. I loved the 'HAPPY ENDING' Bella received at her house. Leah and Jake had a little peep show, which was very funny. Being your 1000 reviewer, I'll be on a mission to get to chp 33...And yes I will gladly accept your gift, whatever it might be. You're a sweetheart. Thank you sooo much.:)



Author's Response:

hehehe..nothing like getting caught with your pants down...lol ....let me know when you get there (( to Chap 33)) like I said I could send it, but it won't make any sense to you until your at that point....Have a great day ..lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Exhibitionsim.......say no more. Invite me down to the old playroom. I would have no problem sitting in that chair watching Edward go to work. He's smooth.



Author's Response:

waving her hand in the air )))) .. Pick me first !!! ...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward has a great mentor in Aro. Edward will need his advice to help Bellas' transition into being a Sub.  Bellas' marriage was a living hell with James. Edward will need a master plan to pull this off.  The girl is so damaged. 



Author's Response:

yes..she is damaged but healing and has come a long way... but the journey to recover is life long when you have had that much trauma happen to you....

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Very nicely done. I had to read this chp twice. Being the kitchen is my least favorite room in my home, never had kitchen sex there.... BUT with Mr Sex On a Stick, it wouldn't matter where when and how I could get it done.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... kitchen sex is good ... thanks for commenting  ...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is wonderful how you gave such a clear insight into Dom Edward mindset. This one sentence made me think, what the hell??? "Because whenever anyone inserts or uses my property without my permission they are stealing from me.  And that includes you." Now I understood that was one of his rules, Bella couldn't pleasure herself, but DAMN his logic behind that blew me away. I can't wait to find out how kind, sweet Eddie got into the Dom lifestyle. LOVING IT. Actually I stood up and applauded that line. HOT!



Author's Response:

She belongs to him that includes every orifice she has....and he will tell how this all came to be...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This chp is better than chocolate.:) Tanya is a jealous loser. I love the way Edward is so cool and in control of every situation so far. Rose being submissive to Emmett was a hoot!! Hell, I thought Rose would be the Dom and Emmett, the Sub. Thumbs up to Rose for informing Bella about all the haters she would come across at the club.  



Author's Response:

Rose and Emmett have a non-conventual relationship that you will learn more about ...later ,,, lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful Mothers Day outing with Bella and the Cullens. Gee Little Eddie is jealous of his Dad, Jasper, and even the "AIR" Bella breathe in and out of her body.....funny!



Author's Response: They had fun ...it did turn out to be a nice day ...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

lml you give ME fever. The song and dance the girls did was entertaining, but my fever came in when Seths' collar disappeared. This Psycho James needs to be stopped!!....is it James??? Speaking of assholes, Caius showed Edward no respect speaking to Bella the way he did. If he had a problem with Bells,talk to Edward. This is a great story, I really like the way you are incorprating all the TWI characters.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments... I am a Twi-girl, although my husband and children think I am way too old and they laugh at my obsession, but hey...everyone has one, this just happens to be mine...lol...keep reading ...I hope you continue to enjoy the story ...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This story is amazing. My jaws dropped when I read how Jane and Bella already had a on going relationship. I can't wait to read on about this blog of New Moon. Hell, I'm mad before I even get to the next chpt. Damn those jealous bitches!!!! I love how Edward is helping and leading Bella.



Author's Response:

oh my ...the Blog ...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

My sis told me I would be calling her one day soon and only then we could really doing some talking.....today is that day!!! OMG, in my animated mind I invision wanting  me and sis to go looking for that MF James and "DE-Ball" him.... (No such word, but it sounds good to me!) The scars Bella carry is so horrific physically and mentally, it a load full of stressfull shit. When Edward hears how James victimizated her in her own home like that, he'll be devastated. I'm still drying my tears from this chpt. Super great writing.



Author's Response:

You hit the 'I Love You' chapter and yes I understand...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella and I both really need some of the usual.:)  But Bells might get more that she bargained for. Edward can't be happy with her running off alone to save Sally and her kids. I damn near bit all my fingernails off, from your last chpt to this one. Emmett is a wise man, and Dr. Carlisle is HOT.



Author's Response:

No he is not happy

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward did what had to be done. If she left her phone on (2nd offense), eat her meals, and got enough sleep she wouldn't have gotten the mental punishment. He didn't beat her!  The writing his name on her feet (or foot) was brillant. Yes I'm a wimp, I teared up on that one.

 



Author's Response:

Poor edward got beat up by the readers for that one ... I think they would have been happier if her beat her ...lol I'm not kidding read some of the comments .. that was why I did the second interview on the OT's becasue of all the hate mail he was getting ,,,,

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Aro is a great mentor to Edward. Jane will help Bella to be a more honest and giving submissive. I believe Edwards knows the Dom game, it's just he has never been in love with a sub before which has to be very different. His compassion for Bella is overwhelming, when he needs it to be. Did I miss something, who is Mason? He was mentioned in a earlier chpt and I know he's died..



Author's Response:

you will figure out who Masen is ,,, lots of people asked that ...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I was sorry to hear of Aro/Janes' son Mason passing. Edward really took his death hard. Jane was magnificent with Bella during lunch. If Bella takes all Janes' wisdom and actually live it, obedience, earlier confessions, humble herself to Dom Edward they will be in a strong relationship together. They both will have to give all or nothing.



Author's Response:

it's a tough road and Bella has some things that she will need to get over as well as Edward will have some blocks that he will need to work on also...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella has many things she has to learn as a sub. Thankfully Edward loves her and is patient. Just the customary serving of Dom Edwards' meal had so much going on, with the kneeling, on knees, eyes down, hand signals, etc. All very interesting. The banter (about Edward )  between Bella and the girls Dana and Tammy at the center was so funny. 



Author's Response:

you know how women are, nothing is off limits....hey you are almost to 33....

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

:) Very funny.



Author's Response:

It was fun to write...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Finally made it here, chpt 33. Intriguing how Dom Edward used the c-grip for pleasure and torture on poor Bella. The get-away had turned out very good until that ride home. I had to keep repeating to myself that Edward loves Bella. I was pissed with him for the first time, but of course he'll make it up to her.



Author's Response:

Yeah !!! ...Did he really make you mad? Hmmm...well, next chapter is EPOV, maybe that will make you feel better after you hear his side of everything. I sent you the 1000 word OT for the 1000th review by personal message. I hope you like it and when I post it on the OT's it will be dedicated to the two 1000th reviews... ok emough rambling ...lml

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Tks lml, you ROCK! The 1000 wd OT is a great idea. (smiling from ear to ear) Tks again. I like that Jacob is still so protective of Bella. That dress conversation was funny. "Come here my slut", probably sounded like music to Bellas' ears, since it came from Edward. WTF is going on at New Moon? Now Stefan is in Bellas' business. LOVING IT ALL. Diamond in the Rough by Anthony Hamilton is already on my playlist. He could make the ABC's sound sexy and soulful. Great choice of music.



Author's Response:

You liked the OT? I'm glad it was just a little something extra...M, really liked it too...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It's amazing how Bella has existed so many years with all the emontional baggage she is carrying. She has been a superwoman with working at the center with the abused girls and not breaking her own self. She has to come clean with Edward so he can help her heal. That James was an animal!



Author's Response:

She does have alot of emotional baggage, and perhaps she does so much and stays so busy so that she doesn't have to thik about it,,,,it's just a thought...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

The first Bella meltdown over money was unexpected. Anything was going to set her off, she just reached her breaking point. It was good she finally told Edward about her past, it wasn't pretty. 



Author's Response:

No it wasn't pretty....but necessary

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wonderful chpt. E/B has grown closer together. Secrets of her past has been acknowledged. Edward has his confidence back. It's good to know he hasn't gotten all pussywhipped and won't be manipulated by Isabella any time soon. He's in control, but like you said 'they made it throught the storm', TOGETHER.



Author's Response:

They really have .... and with a little bit of luck they eill make it through the next one becaise something tells me it is hurricane season...

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Once again Edward takes care of business. Their usual seem to be slow and easy, but oh sooo powerful. Edward knows Bellas' body like the back of his hand, and he works the hell out of it....but in a good way. Whew....amazing! 



Author's Response:

there usual was differant and intense ...and Edward is learning her body ((that is agood thing )) ...Thanks for reading here is your Thursday teaser...lml

 

 

 

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

TOO MUCH SMUT.....never too much smut!!  Your smut is *smart smut*, at least it is to me with all the gadets and sex toys. You absolutely told us you would take this story and build the relationships between E/B and it's a brillant story. It's YOUR story to tell. Thank you for giving us all your time for we have been truly entertained. Take your time......James was dating a girl named Vicki (Vicky) could this girl be Heather. Everything about Heather is a lie, that's probably not her real name. I have a theory every other day. lol



Author's Response:

Hey girl...yes too much smut! can you believe it and by the way you are older then me...so you should be the one teaching me about ...smart smut ...lol...I love that phrase...lol.....thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Very insightful chapter. Edwards POV was on point. Bella absolutely had to be taught obedience. I'm sure Edward wasn't  happy about stopping the kissing of the old peen, it hurt the both of them, but a lesson learned by Bella. I have a gut feeling that Irena was telling the truth. Only time will tell. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Of course he didn't want her to stop ..what guy would turn down a hot mouth on his peen? That was probably the hardest thing he ever did..lol....

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I enjoyed this chapter so much. Edward has to be proud of Bella, she was the perfect submissive and folllowed his EVERY COMMAND at the club. Edwards' many haters at New Moon Club had witness an outstanding erotic hot scene from Bella which make them even more jealous of him and want to dominate her. I couldn't believe Mike winked at Bella. Does that loser have a death wish on him? Caius and Jess are up to no good. Edward is a smart man, I liked the way he handled Caius, by letting him know that Bella was NOT to talk to him without his permission. I'll be waiting for EPOV.     



Author's Response:

You'll see in a few chapters that Bella was the only one who saw Mike wink at her....EPOV is coming up next, he will fill in some of the details ... Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

 

Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

No corn pie for me. Louise, since I'm *EATING CROW* just serve me a slice of *HUMBLE PIE* too!:D  Thank you for letting Aro explain his patonic relationship with Bella. I'm happy I was wrong and even happier to know I wasn't the only one who thought there was a little something, going on with Aro. I had heartfelt feelings for the conversation between Bella, Rose and Jane saying any marriage or relationship could be complicated enough without adding in what we choose to add. Those on the outside who don't approve are going to ostracize you, and make snide comments that can be hurtful...tear...sniff. I love the entire chapter. Emmett with that little flashlight was priceless. And OMG Edward WAS JEALOUS of Aro! Jane had her issues with her Master some years earlier becasue of Bella. My family thought I was being attacked in my room when I first read this with my loud screaming.:D Good lemon too!! Who can ask for anything more?



Author's Response:

LOL ....what were you screaming about ?...lol....Well at least now you know the whole story, and you can wipe Aro off your list of suspects ...lol.....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. i have this weeks teaser for you...lml...

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 1000th review OT

*Smiling from ear to ear*......Damn Damn Damn THAT WAS SOO FUCKING HOT!!!!!  What a juicy lemon! I went back and re-read chpt 33 and it was even funnier the second. Emmett and Rose really got a ear full of E/B passionate love making. Could Em have been a little jealous? lol......Tks to you and M for putting together this 1000 word OT for your 1000 reviewer. It was a real thrill to recieve the honor. It's like I won the lottery! You are an excellent writer. 



Author's Response:

Em & Rose were getting their own funk on ...lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533639
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

HAPPY HAPY DAY!!! Thank you so much for giving us more of this wonderful story.  I'll  never get enough of these characters. 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717533
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: itsgrowin Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Hell, I'll sleep good tonight knowing Edward got to kill that scumbag Jake Black.  Love this story.