Reviews by AlicecullensBFF
Road trip to love by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary:

EMMETT AND BELLA ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER, BEST FRIENDS. EMMETT IS WITH ROSALIE AND BELLA WITH EDWARD BUT THEIR RELATIONSHIPS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM. TRYING TO CHEER UP EMMETT SHE DECIDES TO TAKE HIM ON A ROAD TRIP. WHILE THEY ARE LOOKING FOR HIS HAPPINESS, WILL THEY FIND MORE THAN THEY BARGINED FOR?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135493 Read Count: 21427
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I loved the last sentence lol.  I can't wait until the gummy bears are born!



Author's Response:

lol thank you!!!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awww this was a really sweet chapter.  

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love the names!  I never would've thought of Landon, and Emmalyn sounds so pretty!



Author's Response:

thank you. i've always loved those names and figured since i can't use them for kids of my own, why not give the names to Bella and Emmett's babies

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Awwww the twins sound sooooo cute!  I wonder if there's a reason why Bella's eyes are blue... I know, it's a really random thought lol



Author's Response:

there is a reason, i promise.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!  I already KNOW Leah will say yes!  What Jasper did was soooooo sweet!  I wonder when the three ass-hats will show up.



Author's Response:

of course she will say yes, what self respecting woman would say no to all of that lol... yeah we all know that the ass-hats will ruin their happiness. damn those ass-hats

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Omg, Bella's dress happens to be my favorite color AND my eye color lol.  I think Bella, Emily, and Leah should have girls day often.  It' so sweet... except for the waxing lol.  And OMG I love Bella's hair!  I would soooooo try it, but I love my blonde.  I recently added light pink highlights and they look GREAT, so I won't be changing my hair for a while.  But, when I do, I'm going to add blue highlights.  But, anyway, I think Bella connecting with Paul left Jacob out.  She doesn't really spend time with him anymore :(  



Author's Response:

yeah i know... there is a reason behind that though... all in good time.... plus, he's been building the house with everyone while Paul was Bella-sitting

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I wonder who the voice was?  Edward?  Ugh, you always leave me needing to read more!  It would really fucking suck if the three ass-hats ruin the most special day in the world for Jasper and Leah.  I really hope they don't.

And idk if I mentioned it before, but I was wondering if Emmett and Bella would share their gift with Carlisle and Esme to conceive a baby.



Author's Response:

i won't say with who they will share their gift but it will be shared

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Edward, Rosalie, and Alice were all delusional!  All Edward cared about was having sex with Bella!  I mean really, if he was trying to win her back why would he add "let me make love to you"?!  He should've stayed with Rosalie if that's all he cared about!  But no, he had to die trying to have sex with Bella.  *Sigh*

The blue light thing was soooooooo cool!  I probably sound like a little kid, but it was!  That was amazing!  

I feel really bad about Jasper and Leah's wedding being crashed :( but I'm glad nobody in the family was killed!  Awesome chapter, I loved it :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much. yeah, Edward is a wack-a-doodle for sure. with him it's seems he's wanting what he can't have. the drama queen. lol.  i was hoping you and everyone would like the blue light thing.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I'm so happy Emmett and Bella shared their gift with Carlisle and Esme :)



Author's Response:

oh i know right. they were the first ones i thought of that deserved it. i'm on the fence on Eleazar and Carmen.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I love how Landon is a momma's boy and Emmalyn is a daddy's girl.  And I wonder what's up with Kim and Claire  



Author's Response:

yep, just as it should be. imo, anyways lol... yeah those two are a trip

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

They were just rude



Author's Response:

weren't they though... they always kinda bugged me lol

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Kim and Claire got exactly what they deserved.  I can't believe that they were so rude.  They should've been ashamed of themselves.  



Author's Response:

that they should have. sadly they weren't

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Awwww Leah had a baby girl :)

And Jasper was too funny in this chapter lol

 



Author's Response:

lmfao i know right. jasper always seems really calm, cool, and collected. i thought that he would react exactly the way i had him react if he were going to be a dad

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

:) Esme had a little boy!  Whoo hoo!  And I'd just like to point out, that my name is Lillian lol

But anyway, Landon imprinting on Lillia was so cute 

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

This is the end, isn't it?  Lol well, if it is this was a awesome story :)

I'm so happy that I checked it out.  You're an amazing writer btw 



Author's Response:

it's the end.. for this one.. there will be a sequal. trust me on that!!!  i'm working on a Carlisle/Bella/Emmett/Peter story right now as well as the sequal for this one.  and thank you so much. i look forward to your reviews. you are my favorite lol

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I wonder what Bella did...I can't wait to find out.  I already like this story and I want to read more.  Update soon :)



Author's Response:

I can't you yet but its going to be really good. I worked out the entire storyline so i have lots to write. chapter 2 will be going to the Beta tonite and as soon as its back I will post it. I dont wait for a special day. I hate to make people wait. Thank you for giving it a chance!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Damn!  I soooo didn't see that one coming.  I hope Edward can duck out of the way in time.



Author's Response:

I hope so too...Hope u enjoy the rest,.....xoxo

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Well, now that I read Bella's pov I kind of feel bad fro my last review.  I think Bella should just cut the crap and tell Edward that she really wants him, and then Edward can tell her he was just lying to Angela.  

But I think Bella should've known better.  If he was just going crazy trying to get her to talk to him yesterday, why all of a sudden would he want Angela the next day?  I would've fought that... but maybe that's just me.  Because I sure as hell wouldn't have believed that.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

I am soooo addicted to this story!  I am up at five in the morning reading because it's that good :)

Please please please update soon or I'll go freaking crazy.  

And I'm sorry, but Angela is so dense.  She should know that something's up.  



Author's Response:

hahah I love ur enthusiasm to the story. We will be updating sometime this week, whenever we get it back from the beta.  xoxox thanks for reading and hope u enjoy the rest..and Ang lol.....hmmm not sure what she knows hahah

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way

So I watched that commercial just now, and it was fucking weird!  Those blue puppet things were scary as hell.

But anyway, I loved this chapter, even the cliffe.  The cliffe is what makes the story even more interesting.  I wonder if Angela and Bella will get in a fight.  That would be awesome if Bella beat Angela's ass lol.

 Happy New Year :D

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Loved it!  I wish Angela would just stop already.  She is really started to get on my last nerves.  Where is Ben?  Shouldn't she be with him?  Ugh she's so annoying!

But anyway, I hope Laurent and Eric leave Edward and Bella alone.  I don't want anything bad to happen to the two of them anymore.

 



Author's Response:

Ang is a bit....okay a whole lot of crazy mixed with whole lot of insane. Where is Ben? Good question...DLIR where is Ben? *DLIR looks at Ari shrugs her shoulders.* I'm not sure Ari maybe we should find him and have a lil chat with him. ya know like where were you on Dec 21st 2010! :)

Thank you so much for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

I love Emmett, he's my favorite character.  And your right... Aricullen does write the best Emmett :)

But anyway, I loved this chapter.  Can't wait for part two :D



Author's Response:

Ari always blows my mind with what she writes with Emmett....i attempt to keep his character right when I have him in BPOV but she is hilarious.....Part two has  a lot sooooo i hope you like it :)

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Throne

Lol it is kinda weird that Edward always goes for the guys, but he did have a reason this time.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Birthday Chapter

What the hell lol. I'm totally confused. Can't wait for the next chapter, though.

Author's Response:

lol kk doll

Summerboy by Little Miss Mionie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Every summer vacation, Edward was Bella’s annual secret escape. At school, Bella can’t hide from the whispers that she deserved what happened during “the incident”. Her summery and wintry worlds collide. AH, E/B. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44754 Read Count: 5418
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2011 Updated: 02 Jan 2012
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Blue Skies

I'm glad Bella is almost ready to let Edward in.  I understand that what happened to her was very traumatic, but she should know that she can trust Edward.  I would've trusted him a long time ago.  It would really hurt my feelings if I was him and she still didn't trust me... after all the things that they've been through.

And this is a really good story, in case no one's told you.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy to hear that you've really connected to this story. Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you continue to enjoy it now in it's completed form!

Summary:

AH, OOC, femslash/slash Rosalie hears some upsetting news and goes home to confront her lover and submissive Bella. What happens when her ire is too much to administer punishment? She calls in reinforcements of course. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon pic prompt. A collab between luvrofink and Chartwilightmom. BDSM themes and graphic lemons.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Rose
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4212 Read Count: 4994
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2011 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Delicate Thin Lace

WOW!  This was sooooooo good!  I love reading your lemons :)

I feel bad for Edward though.  I would have broke down and started bawling my eyes out when I saw the tear streaming down his cheek.