Reviews by kova_aly
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Heave help them!

When I read this I wanted to cry.

Please I want to know what happens next!

Make Edward a demon, have something happen to rose and her baby, and Have Alice finally stand up to carlisle!

best of luck and god speed

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

oh thank god, I've been waiting to hear what was in esme's garden.

I do have a question though.

do you already have the story line all writer out or are you coming up with it as you go?

I need to know so bad

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

still no story

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

i don't get it

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

dude, i wanted to cry.

I mean really break down and cry.

Bella has been through so much and now this happens?!

I'm soooo proud of you!

you have made the Best story on this god dame wed-site!

love you

~kova_aly (lovethenlost)

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

oh my god

you should do a "four years later" chapter where edward comes back into Bella's life as Carlisle Edward.

my gos that would be so scary and fucking awsome 

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

oh wow, that was...sometime.

It was good but it could have been better.

waiting for the next chapter

love kova_aly

Summary:

Hate is a passionate emotion.  It can drive people to do things they never thought would do.  Hermione and Draco's hatred collides and explodes into hot, steamy passion.  Our entry for the Birds & Bees Writing Challenge.

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Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2769 Read Count: 2198
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

.........its too short

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well its time for the next chapter

Summary:

1st place

Summary: Six Friends sit in a room and pass around a gun, who will make it out alive?

Submitted for the ‘To Kill a Cullen' Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3051 Read Count: 322
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Russian Roulette.

i laughted so hard

who knew carlisle gets the bullet

i thought it was going to be edward

lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is tortured by Mike Newton's thoughts about Valentine's Day. He decides to mess with him a little by inviting him and Jessica on a date with himself and Bella. Hilarity ensues. Set after Breaking Dawn. Human Mike and Jessica and Vamp Edward and Bella.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3493 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

simplly lovely deary

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I finding that Bella is overly emotional

does she some kind of abandoning problem?



Author's Response:

yes because she raised in a house for those with latent abilities and lives in a world where when you get old you disapear...both her parents have been cast out already. i am slowly adding info onto each chapter so the first wouldn't be boring 

Snow White Queen by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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He straddled her, pinning her struggling form to the mattress. "Shh... my love. You will give into your feelings. I will show you how." Song fic to the song Snow White Queen by Evanescence. Extremely dark, with vague mentions of non-con.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6194 Read Count: 2291
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

could have been darker but mmh

Summary:

moon

"Grrraaannngggeeerrrrr...." his voice called tauntingly. He was close. Too close. I ran faster, looking for somewhere to hide. I threw myself behind the first object I came across. "You can run, but you can not hide.."


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 2544
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww, sounds so sad

tips:

draco should have a darker past

hermione should have put up more of a fight

and draco's wolf from person should be more agressive and demanding 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

AU set in the New Moon time frame.

Edward has his reasons for leaving after the birthday incident.

He expects the family to start packing, but Alice stands up to him and says: NO.

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15555 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: kova_aly Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Author's Response:

I hope that's good?

Thanks for reading, kova_aly...

Kathie