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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC
Banner by: Evilangel813
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100557
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience
I knew Gianna would be back to cause trouble. What a bitch. Bella is not going to believe it I think. Still what a mess for them! Thanks for the update.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda
What a bitch! I just knew she was gonna refuse the test now. I feel so sorry for Bella and Edward too. There is no way he is the father, is there? Not wish ill upon anybody but I hope Gianna gets what she deserves. Too bad the police can't do anything about here. I think the news about Bellas pregnancy will drive her over the edge though. I'm kind of worried that she is going to try something stupid. I hope Bella and Edward aren't going to do anything rush so they don't get in trouble.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255218
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Thanks for the chapter. Hmm who could have seen him entering the code? Maybe it really is someone from the club. Interesting what Heathers agenda is. Could she be connected to James.
I like the pace at which this story is going!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Wow, progress for Bella. Seems like Mike and Jessica are up to something.
Author's Response:
Somebody is up to something ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must.
Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story.
Doctorward is there too, just like the first story.
It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children.
Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one.
Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore
Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467467
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Thor, Loki, and the gang
Great story! Love the family dynamics and how they are not perfect but still so in love with each other. Big families can be that crazy sometimes.
Usually I don't like multiple POVs but I have to say you did I good job in giving them their individual voices.
I'm sad you are ending it here but I understand that it has to come to an end eventually.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 47: The Best Years
Ha I knew one of them would end up knocking a girl up. Poor CC and Natalie. Can't wait to read the outtakes and epi.
Thank you for writing this story. It was definitley a great ride.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue
Thank you for writing this story. It was a wonderful read. I'm sorry to hear that your're being attacked. Please don't let it keep you from writing your stories. I can't wait to read the outtakes. I would love to read about poor CC.Glad things seem to be looking up for him. Poor Alex, I hope she fares better in the future. EJ as a dad would be interesting to. I hope his firstborn is a girl. It would serve him right. I suspected that he was going to end up with Cecilia.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
Even after having reread that story more times than I can count I still adore it. I usually really dislike multiple POVs but you manage to give each character its own voice. I wish there were more outtakes to this story since I just can't get enough of your characters. Its real, its gritty at times but everybody who has grown up in a big family can identify with parts of it.
"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic.
Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard
Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.
Beta'd by aeglow
Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2674095
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Icing on the Cake
Thanks for this chapter!
Wow, Dadward how I love him. Though I think its mean of him to not get up during the night if its his turn. I hope Bella doesn't let it slide.
I loved how he reassured Bella about her looks though I felt kind of bad for him when Carlisle and Aro were commenting how hot she is looking. Poor guy. Haha, him walking up to the feds with the baby in tow was funny.
Can't wait for the Epilogue and of course the sequel!
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Diplomatic Immunity
Thank you for the chapter. Carlisle was again acting like a Dick. Poor Bella, I understand why she didn't want to tell Edward exactly what happened but still. I'm curious to find out what happened with Gail. I wonder if Esme will find out that it was Edward who beat C. up. Ed Sr. is an asshole too, defending Carlisle like that but I guess that is because he is just like him.
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Get It
Thanks for the chapter. So Edward won't ever cheat on Bella because of what happened with his mother.
Carlisle is such a bastard, I hope that Gail chick is not pregnant. Maybe she is just playing him. I still think Heidi is up to something, maybe she even encouraged Gail. I had the impression that she pushed her onto Edward first.
Poor Edward is in the middle of it, I wish he would confide in Bella.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat
Love this story. Glad Edward didn't cheat, though I really didn't think he would. I think Heidi planned to tempt him, she obviously dislikes Bella.
Carlisle really can't keep it in his pants, I don't understand how Esme can stay with him. I wonder if we have seen the last of Gail. Edward should fire her.
Interesting how he lied about Jane. I wouldn't be surprised if Bella figured out that he killed her.
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water
Wow,what a chapter. I think Bella was acting quite immature though that is not excuse for what Edward did with grabbing her. I'm glad Marcus knows about what Carlisle did to Bella. Can't believe that Ed Sr. wants to marry Lexi.
I understand that Bella is frustrated because of the pregnancy thing but I think she should take a step back. They haven't been together that long. Its understandable that Edward is annoyed now. Funny that now Edward is the one who wants to talk things out. Not to long ago it was always Bella who initiated talks.
So the Feds are on their tail. I suspect there is something going on there. I bet we haven't seen the last of Heidi or Gail. I wonder what they are up to.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It
Interesting chapter. Poor Bella is still stressed out about the baby thing. After this chapter I wouldn't be surprised if she is pregnant already. I guess she has other things to worry about now. I hope Edward doesn't stay in custody. I'm afraid that he downplayed his fears so Bella isn't worried. I hope you update fast!
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day
So somebody offed Gail. Hmm, could have been Carlisle but I guess we will find out at some point. I wonder why it took so long for Edwards father to turn up. I hope Bellas pregnancy goes well this time. Not surprised that she is pregnant after all her mood swings. I think Emmett knows more than he lets on and that is the reason why he is pissed off at Edward.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day
Interesting chapter. I bet Esme is going to be mad once she finds out about them working at the salon. Edward all overprotective, I wouldn't be surprised if Bella blows up at him.
So she is still scared of Carlisle understandable. I wonder if he and Esme will reconcile at some point.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: This is it
Seems like things are heating up. So Marcus wants to get rid of Edward. I think he will have Aro taking him out. I hope he manages to convince Bella to go somewhere save.
I don't think it was wise of her to piss of Marcus.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course
So much happening in this chapter. Marcus is such an asshole. Luckily Bella called Edward before she followed that guy. Guess the next couple of chapters are going to be full of action.
Edward probably will not have it easy with his plans. I hope all goes well. Aro should just take Marcus out while he is driving him somewhere.
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances
So he really killed Marcus. I wonder if anyone will suspect him. It was almost too easy. I'don't get why he didn't want Bella to know the truth. Maybe too protect her? I'm not surprised she figured it out though.
Guess the next chapter will be drama filled.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues
Again a lot going on in this chapter. Poor Esme, I hope she is feeling better soon.
I still don't get why Edward won't tell Bella anything, he knows she worries more if she doesn't know whats going on.
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off
Interesting too see a day of Skip at home.
So Lauren is pregnant. I understand why she is afraid to tell Aro but still, she left knowing she is pregnant. I think he has a right to know. Why should he go after her if she was the one who left in the first place?
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz
So Edward is working too much. I understand why he is concerned about Bella and Jacob but I don't think he has a reason too worry. Bella wouldn't do that to him and I don't think Jacob is stupid enough to try something. I think part of why he is so mad about their closeness is because he feels bad about not being there enough. I think the Bella Jacob relationship is bordering on being inapprobriate because she is his wife and Jake is just a low level guy. I think its difficult for Bella because Esme is not around as much and Laurens gone so she doesn't really have anybody.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day
I'm glad they finally talked. There fight was necessary in my opinion. Hope we can get back to the more humorous aspects of the story. Poor Jake just wants to please Edward but I think he is treading in dangerous waters with Caius wife. So sad to see this coming to an end.
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life
Stupid Jacob, Bella probably will be very upset about his death. She even warned him off Caius wife. So next time the baby is coming, I'm sure it will be interesting.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue
Thanks for this story. I can't wait for the sequel. You are really good at writing about family dynamics. I hope Edward manages to stay out of jail in the future. Poor Bella alone with two small kids and her husband in prison. Another baby on the way- hope it sticks.
Quiet Storm Sequel.
How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.
Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward.
Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533716
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret
Thanks for these last chapters. A lot is happening, hard to say who is trustworthy. Anybody could be on the other side, I feel like Edward can't even trust his father or brother. I think this FBI agent is trying to play him, unless she really is pregnant. Can't wait for more!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog
Thanks for the chapter! Wow I didn't think Bella would suspect Edward but well if the little boy looks like him. Maybe Edward should have told her about Carlisles involvement before.
Carlisle is such a dog. I wonder how long till Esme finds out. Wouldn't be surprised if Bella tells her though they don't seem to be all that close anymore.
This Elezar woman seems like trouble, especially because Aro has the hots for her. That can't lead to anything good.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity
Poor Bella, I understand that she wants to make friends at school, though I think she shouldn't lie about being married. Or she could just have told that Roger guy that she has a boyfriend at least.
Thank you for writing this story.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One
So Sonny is figuring it out. Not surprising, he is a smart kid and knows how to use google. I don't trust that Roger guy, I think it would be better if he knew that Bella is married. Seems like that chick from Eclipse is still hitting on him. I wonder if one of them works for the Feds. Love your long chapters!
Thanks for writing this.
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck
Thanks for the chapter. Glad they resolved the their difference. I suspected that at some point Edward would just turn up at her college to stake his claim.
Hmm I wonder what well will do when she finds out about Candance. I don't think she will be pleased but who knows. Maybe she doesn't care at all.
Looking forward to read more.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light
Thanks for the chapter. Though I have to say I'm one of those readers who are tired of the Alex/Carisle storyline. It just can't end well for her- guys like that don't change- ever. I wouldn't buy it and this Carlisle is an especially sleezy guy. It drives me mad to see him get away with his behaviour.
I don't mind if Edward and Bella have it easier right now, they always have so much going on. It will be very interesting once Bella meets her family. Can't wait for it!
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb
Thanks for the chapter. Hmm, I don't know about Carlisle. He is a thinker but I think it was a risky move to let her leave. Who is to say she won't plan something? I wouldn't be surprised if Edward isn't having her tailed anyway.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two
Thanks for the chapter! I really wish that Carilsle doesn`t get a shot with that poor girl. He is just gonna ruin her. Totally with Bella on not trusting him and putting ideas in Edwards heart. How typical was it for Edward to check Bellas real father out? Another interesting chapter- I can`t wait for more!
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This
What a chapter....glad they are reunited (kind of). I think Bella finally got how much she hurt her husband. Edward seems to be feeling bad as well, I just hope they really talk it out this time. Both of them acted wrong- I just feel that Bella was a bit unfair. Everytime she has to face something difficult she acts like she is on her own and she never considers what her actions are doing to Edward. Even though he does mess up quite often, he at least feels remorseful after the fact. Hopefully they manage to clear the air.
As for Lou- of course he is wrong but it was also I wake up call for Aro and Bella. They crossed a line a long time ago in my opinion. Its understandable that Edward is peeved about it. Even if he trusts them, it does look back in front of Edwards men and can lead exactly to situations like this one.
The Alex and Carlisle storyline....just not my cup of tee. The pregnancy is just too much for me. As for Carlisle suddenly being all nice- guys like that don't change. It would not be believable if he now he converts into faithful good husband. Alex could to much better, I just don't know.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn
Thanks for the chapter. I knew these two would be unconventional parents. I mean Edward come on- showing your 11 year old porn. I'm not surprised Bella is trying to hide her differences with Sonny from Edward. Sonny seems to be quite the handful. Premature too- having a girlfriend at his age. Poor Aro, seems like little Katie is quite premature too.
At least Edward is still listening to his instincts jobwise, I'm sure that Debbie chick is up to no good.
I like that Ed. Sr. seems to be more of a family man now.
I trust you that this sequel will be another funny and interesting story. I love how your Bella and Edward are devoted to each other and I'm quite sure there won't be any cheating in this story.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
Thanks for the chapter. Well Edward did not make a wise decision in letting have Sonny wine. Not surprised Sonny figured out what Edward is.
I wonder what happened to Carlisle. Sems like there will be some trouble with the guys from Jersey.
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity
Thanks for the chapter. I expected Bella to feel really guilty because that is just how she is. Wonder how long till Esme finds out about the Love child? Again no surprise that Bella is avoiding her.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around
Thanks for the chapter. Wow Carlisle is getting worse again. I was always convinced that he still has the hots for Bella. She should not be alone anywhere with him. Its just right that they are telling Esme but I wouldn't be surprised if she already knows.
Sonny seems to be a handful and I think it will only get worse.
Can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company
Thanks for the chapter. A lot happened, I'm not surprised that Esme didn't leave Carisle. Hmm,interesting theory she had. I don't know whether to trust Carisle. Its really worrying that he is still so obsessed with Bella. Nanny was quite mean in saying that Bella is tearing them apart because its all Carisles fault.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest
Thanks for the chapter. The way things are developing Edward might have to choose betwenn his brother and his right hand at some point. Ijust knew that Aro called Esme because there was history.
I wouldn't be surprised if Esme does something to Candance.
I hope Edward and Bella just stay out of it though I think they just about had it with Carlisle and Esme.
Can't wati for more!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two
Thanks for those last two chapters. Looks like things are getting heated. I hope Aro remembers, is it bad that I wouldn't care as much if it was Carlisles life on the line. I can't wait to read more. If I don't review its because I'm reading from my phone because I'm away for business which happens quite frequently at this time of the year.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit
Thanks for this chapter. I don't trust the truce, I think that Luke guy has something up his sleeve. Can't wait for more and I hope you don't get too discouraged!
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies
Thanks for the chapter. Looks like Esme is the culprint. Why am I not surprised?
I wonder whats going to happen next. Thank you for getting these chapters out so fast.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Weather the Storm
Thanks for the chapter. Hmm, I don't think its good that they are not talking out what happened with Aro. I believe he poses a threat to Edward since he obviously can't keep his feelings for Bella in check. I'm glad the family is together again but wow that Sonny is a handful.
Looking forward for more!
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn
Intense chapter. Reminded us of who Edward is. Looks like the Skip is back too full form. Thanks.
Esme is becoming a problem indeed and I'm not sure what Carilsle is going to do once Edward takes care of her. I'm quite sure he will take her of her because she is not only threatening him but Bella too. Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream
Thanks for the chapte. I'm glad they finally talked. I really liked that Edward for once was allowed to say his piece also regarding last chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter, and can't wait to find out what happens to Esme.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
Thanks for the chapter. I just hope that Mauros girl stays away from Cariisle. I really wish he wouldn't get away with his behaviour. Seems like Edward and Bella are still not quite happy, his reactions are so typically male...Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One
Wow, I finally have time to read again and I come to this last couple of chapters. Seems like there is trouble in paradise. I always suspected that at some point something like this would happen. As flawed as Edward is with his tendency to lose his temper, Bella is no better. She often just acts without considering Edwards feelings. I just reread both storys and so its all very fresh for me. Very early on I noticed Bellas tendency to call their children "HER" children. Maybe I`m interpreting too much but I feel like you set it up so that at some point this conflict would play out. After Edward lost his temper so badly and really started thinking I always felt that now its Bellas turn. She has been pushing him a lot and now they both were to high strung. In this situation both of them were wrong but Bella topped it of with acting all concerned for Aro after he and Edward fought. I don`t think she even realizes how much she is hurting his feelings sometimes.
Also I really dislike her hitting him, spousal abuse is never ok. I hope the next chapter will be ready soon! I just hope it gets better for them.
I wonder of Aro will bring Bella to O`Reillys, though I doubt it. She is definitly in for a rough awakening.
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Thanks for the chapter. Wow, heavy emotions. Interesting to see Bellas perspective. After rereading from the very first chapter of Quiet Storm I'm not really surprised we are were we are with the both of them. i honestly feel like Bella doesn't get where her husband is coming from, like at all. She is concerned about everybody else first, then comes her husband. Even from her point of view it feels like it. I really hope the both of them work it out soon and that you don't draw it out. Hopefully both of them will recognize what they did wrong. And i don't think Edward is ready to give up, he just wasn't in a state to talk it out right now. Its not that I don't understand were Bella is coming from, she just has a habit of avoiding certain problems and she never actually listens to her husband.
Sad to see them fighting, I always like how they stuck together for everything.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Weather the Storm
Hmm, seems like Bella finally got it. I'm totally with her regarding the fact that they have to talk it out. Its good that she is taking back a step from her relationship with Aro. Even if she doesn't see it that way I feel like they crossed a line a long time ago.
Edward has to forgive himself before he forgives Bella.
I think it will take time for both of them to get over it. Looks like Lou ist playing a dangerous game.
Really after rereading Quiet Storm and the first chapters of this story...I'm not surprised it came to this.
On a side note the only surprising thing is how Carisle is still alive and allowed around Bella. (kidding but not)
Not really enthused by the Alex/Carisle storyline, especially now. I just can't see them being happy in the long run, she ist too young for him and he is esentially a pig. Guys like him don't change. He should focus on the 3 children he already has. Alex needs a wake up call, he already cheated on his wife and had goomah.What makes her think she`s different?