Reviews by Kirb
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Hi Louise... * waves hello! * 

First and foremost, here's hoping you are well. So... I know this is your story, and have no doubt preparations and work for it/about it/around it take up lots of your time. And perhaps you've lost interest. Or perhaps life has just gotten in the way. But by golly, I MISS YOUR STORY...  :(    

Its not a stretch to imagine there are zillions of us out there feeling the same. Virtual strangers that we are, we have no right to moan or beg for anything. But we hope. And send good vibes your way. And cross our fingers that we'll see you, Bella and Edward here again soon. Cause we remain on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!  You've blessed us with an amazing story and it would be so sad to never see the end.   Thank you...

 

Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy smokes- I found a new chapter on your blog!  WOOHOO!!!!  I didn't even know you updated.  (I come here every once in a while, thinking perhaps I've missed something along the way, and I saw a reviewer mention  the new chapter 111 update.)  Thank you, thank for not giving up on this story.  Perhaps you dont think it true, but I'm certain you have a great following, and huge masses of people have not only not forgotten, but crave this story's completion.  You surely have made many happy with your continuation. This is hands down one of my favorites - ever.  It's so nice to see the pieces starting to come together.  Thanks again... - K

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532958
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

Jeez - I soooo didn't see that one coming!  What a great scene with Bella, but poor Bella.  I couldn't figure out what was going on at first.  I wanted to cry myself after the fact.  (I found your story - stories- nearly two weeks ago and have been reading, reading, reading - sucking all the goodness in.  I'm loving it!! Thank you!

Reviewer: Kirb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

I need to tell you I've just read this story for perhaps the 10th time, if not more (yeah, probably more).  Every so often, I come back and read the Storm series.  They satisfy every craving: drama, romance, comedy, action, romance... They are just magnificent and never get old, thanks to your talent.  I'm so grateful you still have them here for us to read. Thank you!

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806479
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

Man, poor Dame... he just can't catch a break.  Do you hate the poor kid, or what?!  That point aside, can't tell you how much I love, love, love this story.  Thank you for sharing!!!!

Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

The entire exchange with Kylie and the Skip was best!  I was laughing and smiling through the first half of the chapter.  Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOOHOO!!! You're back!  I love this couple and am so excited to learn about their lives and see where the future takes them.

BOOHOO - it isn't starting off on the best note and I'm so anxious about this mystery envelope. Your author's note proves it's going to be a bumpy ride, too.  BUT  your promise of a HEA is soothing.  Thank you for bringing these two (and their new brood) back to us!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Kirb Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So much going on here, not even sure where to start.  Perhaps I'm just naive but until you actually spelled out what Bella was doing to herself, I couldn't figure out what her 'training' consisted of.  I don't know what I was expecting, but I was stupid enough not to expect that.  Wow.  Thats a drastic measure but considering their life, I understand it.  And when she said she broke her vows?  Gah!  That killed me.  I can't wait for them to reunite and TALK.  Having E and B so close to each other and not together - not since we started - is driving me crazy!  I feel so bad for them, though I want to kick them both, too, for not talking to each other, not voicing their thoughts.  Him, I want to kick him harder.  Or maybe twice.  He should know better!  And I'm not sure what to think about Garrett.  I'm torn with him allowing/helping Bella to bolster herself once more vs. making her speak with Edward.  Yes, it's her responsibility to voice her thoughts to Edward, but it does feel like Garrett is going behind his back, too.

In case it hasn't been voiced, I love that you include photos.  (That one of Kristen from OTR - LOVE IT!!  What a beautiful girl!)    Thanks for a great chapter!