Pretty good start, though there are some confusing parts... I'm glad that Jacob is not there with them, I always felt that the imprinting business made them kind of trapped w/Jacob--unable to go anywhere without him. So, are you saying that Bella remembers nothing but nightmares--not her wedding, not her honeymoon, not the pregnancy or birth of her daughter.... I don't think I like that, so hopefully that is not how this will be.