Reviews by lannaislusciousredd
Summary:

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Bella and Jacob have been happily married for 19 years. Then tragedy strikes, and Jacob is having difficulty coping.

Warning: Death of major characters, sensitive issues dealing with cancer.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3886 Read Count: 286
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2012 Updated: 10 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; The House That Jake Built

wow. im so happy i chose to read this when i was alone... i cried all the way through this story. well done, it is an amazing piece.



Author's Response:

I totally forgot that I had a story posted here. (I'm two yrs too late, lol.) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. BTW, I cried the whole time I wrote this--for two whole days.

I OWN YOU by ALewis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 166]
Summary:

Set a year and a half after Edward left Bella in the woods. She has moved on with her life but all hell breaks loose when Angela turns up missing. Everyone thinks it's a runaway story but Bella knows different. She was kidnapped and by both a human and a vampire. Bella plans to search for Angela with Jessica's help but finds herself in the same fate. In an underground auction house being sold as a play thing to the highest bidding vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81956 Read Count: 36487
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Lot of crazy happenings goin' on!

i really love this story but this chapter was really confusing, the way it jumped around



Author's Response: Sorry to confuse you sweetie!!! But it had to be that way to get everyone caught up on where they all are for the next chapter. Training the wolves and an update on Maria and Malice.

Summary:

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Edward returns home to find his wife working out again, and decides to show her what he thinks of her. M for teasing! All human bit of fluff. R&R please. Based off the Bruno Mars song 'Just The Way You Are' I own nothing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2326 Read Count: 1615
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aw this is cute :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

He found her broken, a hollow tortured shell of what once was. He vowed he would find the ones who did this to her and destroy them... But what happens when he finds out his brother was the cause of it all?

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25093 Read Count: 32492
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 30 Jun 2014
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hahaha garrett was amazing!!! lee pace is so good! another amazing chapter :)

Summary:

She is two years older and in love. But the one she loves loves her, but neither know the other feels the same as them.

Both do not know they are two thirds of a whole in way of mating.

Follow them on this learning experience and see who gets what and who. What really happens when Jasper and Peter go hunt?

Is newborn Bella as rational a person, emotionally, as they thought she would be?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Family, Femme Slash, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57385 Read Count: 11223
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2012 Updated: 27 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this is a really good plot, but some times i feel like you rush through the chapter and don't completely explain why things happen.

also, i am a bit confused as to why bella wouldn't want to be marked by peter. it made sense in the begininng that she was wary of another partner, but then she completely flipped and was all over him.

like i said, it's a good plot and i will keep reading, but i just feel like you should plan out the chapter a bit more, and have a clear direction where you want it to go. x



Author's Response:

I write what comes to my mind, i jot down that idea and never try to go over it too much. I find it never reads well when ido. So far i like what i have done.

As for the marking... Simply put, which Bella also said in the story in her words, Peter is mated to them, yes, but he is at the same level as Jasper. they are both submissive to him,basically. but he will not treat Peter, and Bella knows this, as if he isn't a man. There's only one dominant male in their mating andmajor is it. that marking thing shows that is how it is in her mind. the men see where she is coming from and he also does get to scent her and mark her in other ways, so he is happy enough with how it is.

Have you got any stories i could read. i am always interested in reading J/B P/B Paul/B stories.

my chapters always have lots in them. I, unfortunately, cannot please everyone. I have tried and failed many times. It takes my stories and ruins them when i try to write them how others say they should be written. so i end up just deleting the story. i lose faith in my own ability with that story they wish me to write differently so without having the want and drive to continue it and rewrite it to how i like it done, i just delete it and i feel a load better.

 

horrible, i know, but sometimes trying to please others when i have always written for myself, not others, is never an easy thing. So i do thank you for the advice very much so. I only wish i could please all of you. But it is an impossibility. You have a wonderful day/night,and god bless and merry christmas.

Wendy

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Formally named Our Christmas Tails, this will be the adventures of Kittybells and her Human Bella and Ginger-cat and his Human Edward through the Holidays of 2014. How will the 2 and 4 legged protagonists fare through the coming year as the holidays progress?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19734 Read Count: 6043
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: lannaislusciousredd Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Christmas

This was so cute!!! Please continue it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I have.  I've renamed this story to Our Holiday Tails and will write a new chapter for each holiday.  It's been kinda trickly to change the name so I hope it doesn't mess you up.  The next chapter after Christmas, was New Years Eve, then after that the holiday will be Valentine's Day, and so forth.  So stay tuned to this same cat channel, same cat time...

thanks for the support

xo

Dinia