Reviews by Pattypattz
Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

Well so far I'm digging this first chappy. Seeing how I love Dom/Sub stories and have tinkered with the stuff...it is a very good start.

Emmett as a Sub....too friggin funny...that is really hard to picture, but I can def see Rose as a Dom!! She has that personality for sure.

Bella seems very Dominant and kick ass...the piercing request would be a little something to think about...*LOL** I love plain ole' Edward...I'd take him anyday! I'm curious to see what he is going to decide.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

So Edward actually goes and gets his dick pierced, and now seems to like it?! I love how he asked Emmett to go to the tatoo shop with him and hold his hand...LOL.

Well in this chappy your just being a tease to us, so I'll wait and see what happens in the next chapter.

See you for breakfast...okay then...we'll see how that goes for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

Edward seemed to like his first ass whipping....Hmmmm....wonder what was going through his mind as that was happening.

I liked their banter at breakfast...yes he seems a little of a smart ass, but with humor and wit.

No self play, and she know? Does she have camera's up in the house there and watch him??? Now I"m very curious about this.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

I thought the cheesecake and dining table scene was funny... especially when Maria came in.

Oh, and I so guess the cameras being there...LOL...maybe he might even like that?? Who know's except that he can't masturbate or it will piss her off.

Nice that he drove her to LAX, and that he kissed her goodbye and all...he is wearing her down.

Whoa, sounds like Edward is worming his way into her heart there. She is confessing shit to Rose, and buying lingerie...this is what woman do when they like someone, and they want to impress them. I bet this is making Edward cocky as hell.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

I'm not sure exactly where your going with the story, but it appears that Edward is unwinding Bella and she is so unnerved by it, and she doesn't know what the heck to do.

Is it possible that she is developing feelings for Edward and she just doesn't know what to do about it???

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine

Looks like Bella is starting to develope feelings for Edward and will still the Dom/Sub thing for awhile longer, or until she fiqures this out. Ditto of Edward as well.

Nice chappy.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting first chapter or prologe. Tanya sounds very uppity and then has an affair and basically a bastard child. What a twisted plot indeed.

 

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

So Bella has made her appearance in this chapter. I wonder how he is going to get to her and keep Charlie Swan off of his back or from killing him.

I think he should go to Rose's wedding. She is his sister and she wants him there. Seems like that should be reason enough. Maybe in time, he won't be so pissed at Emmett anymore.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed starstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I bet Rose is going to be difficult. Emmett I'm not sure of either way, but with Rose you can count on her to be uptight. Will Alice and Jasper be there too? I wonder about how mom is going to handle stuff?

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed starstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes Edward is a product of his environment, just like Bella is a product of hers. That is why I said it would be nice if she knew more about him as well.

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He may not understand her just yet, and maybe he hasn't lived her life, but she hasn't lived his either. Maybe they can learn alot from each other. It doesn't sound like he was ever given love by either of is parents, so he really doesn't know what to expect.

Maybe she should ask him about his life and upbringing.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm all the UST is killing me...LOL, and I sure know it is killing Edward. Masterbating and having sex with someone are so different, but she will find out about this soon enough.

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well it could have been worse. He could have demanded a whole blow job and not just the ending.

I know she is bitter and all, but alot of her bitterness happened before he even came into the picture. I'm surprised he let her talk the way she did to him.

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I have never like James...not in any ff, but I see this is true for yours too.

I think Edward means well in some ways. This is new for him too. He might just surprise her.

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Those Lemons were a good start. He isn't a total beast and he is at least tryting to teach her. I wonder what she really thinks about her first orgasm. I'd love to read it in her POV.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I figure Rose would lay into Edward. I thought correct. I don't understand his dad though???

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I would imagine she is very confused or conflicted by her actions and thought. He is also getting conflicted by what he is feeling about himself and her. I think he really cares, but he is used to be a jerk and that is how he was raised by his dad. I feel sorry for Edward too. He may break away like Emmett and Jazz did too.

I knew something would happen with Emmett and Rose. She made it clear.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He is really battling himself on everything where his family and she is concerned. I have to look at and remember the messed up house he came from.

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

His dad is a dickhead. This is why I said I feel sorry for Edward. He is really trying here. WTF is the agenda with his dad and the crap with Aro??? Something is def up with these two men.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope that Bella, Emmett and Rose can see that Edward really isn't the bad guy here. His dad is a piece of crap and Aro even worse. Hopefully, they will work with Edward to help out both of them...for Bella's sake.

Reviewer: Pattypattz Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes Edward is seeing that his so called idol...his dad is a scumbag. I'm glad he has his brother by his side for this. He will need them and is mom for support.