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I'm a stay at home mom. I have a very sweet husband and 2 wonderful kids. I used to love scrapbooking till I discovered fanfic now I spend all my time reading and have a room full of scrapbook stuff just sitting there waiting to be used. :0)
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373284
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
Well I'm so glad I went back and looked and found these 2 chapters. I knew her telling him about the baby had to be in here. I'm glad she came out and asked him if he was with Tanya rather than go on assuming he did. I want to say surely she'd know he would never do that to her but then I have to remember what her father was like. Anyway I'm glad they got that all cleared up. I'm really looking forward to the next new chapter. Great job with this story. :0)
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
I think it's wonderful to see how much faith King Carlisle has in Bella's abilities. I also love to see how proud Prince Edward is of her. Looking forward to seeing how these rumors get taken care of. :0)
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
ooh, I wonder who is behind the murder. Can't wait to see what the gals do to stop Tanya. Great job. I love this story. Congratulations on the 1000 reviews. :0)
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
Loved it! What a wonderful surprise Edward had for her. I'm glad she gets to see Jacob and her mother again. :0)
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings
I'm so glad Bella gets to see her mom and Jake again. I love them as brother and sister and how close they are. :0) Good news that they caught Tanya and at least now they know that Tanya didn't have Newton killed so there's still someone out there.Wonder who it will end up being??? Sorry to hear about the rain that cut your trip short but, I was really happy to see this update this morning. :0)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
Love this story. I'm always so happy to see these updates. :0)
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
great chapter! It's great to see things moving along so well. Edward and Bella are expecting twins, and Alice is having her baby how exciting. :0) As for names... I looked up names from the 1500's and these are some names I found: Alison, Alexander, Amie, Anthony, Katherine, Clare, Daniel, Eden, Elizabeth, Gavin, Grace, Jeffrey, Jevan, Jonathan, Jelian, Lea (haha that one make me chuckle if she's a princess), Levin, Lora, Meredith, Rachel, Stephen,
I don't know if that will help at all. You don't have to use any of them. Picking names is tough. I just went down a list and those are what kind of stood out. Good luck! Can't wait to see what you come up with. :0)
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice
What a relief! I'm so glad Alice survived. Poor Bella I can only imagine how scary it would have been to be in that room with Alice and personally see what can go wrong knowing that she herself would have to go through delivery in the very near future and for twins no less. I love the name! It just fits. :0) Hope you start feeling better soon.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs
Great chapter! I love the names and I love that they have a boy and a girl. I also loved that Edward stayed in the room with her the whole time. I'm sad that this story is coming to an end I really enjoyed reading it. :0)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties
Great chapter! I loved every bit of it. :0)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
I just cried through this entire chapter. I can't remember the last time I cried so much reading a fic..... I'm thinking it was way back when I read "The Best Man" :0) I loved your story. I am happy that Bella got to say goodbye to her children and grandchildren and that her first 2 babies were there with her in the end. The best part was Edward meeting her and saying that he never really left that he'd just been waiting for her. (There I go crying.... again.... ) :0) Great job! I'm going to add you to my fav authors. I really like your stories and your a great writer. So sad this ones over.
Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Numb
Really love Jasper / Bella stories and thought I'd give this one a try. Poor Bella seems misserable. :0)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Reunion (BPOV)
Wonder what prophecy she was talking about. Wonder if Jasper really went home. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reunion (JPOV)
I really enjoyed hearing from Jasper. I had wondered what happened with Alice and Edward. Now I know.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - I want to be sedated
Love how Bella is opening up to Jasper. I want to know more of what has happened to her. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Catching up with more tragedy
Yay she's staying a few days with them. Hope she opens up to them more. Does she really not know what clawed up her back? I also want to find out the parts she's not telling them. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Movie Night
I'm so tempted to say it again.... "Poor Bella" I'm glad the vamps are back in her life. They won't let her go this time. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - My life has gone to the wolves
looking forward to seeing what happens next. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Scared to trust you again
Too bad Garrett has to leave at least he brought the Cullen's back to Bella's life. Now I need to hurry to read the next chapter to find out whose at Bella's. :0)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The friendly neighborhood vampires
Loved the "Hypothetically" :0) That's pretty freaky about Bella.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Hope lost
ok this is seriously depressing and there's still more stuff that Bella hasn't told them? What more could there possibly be? Would it be possible for her to be changed into a vamp then she'd stop aging at least and not be breakable any more. Hope she's able to find some happiness soon.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Nightmares and Sleepwalking
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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth
ok maaybe all the sad stuff is out now? :0)
Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC
Banner by: Evilangel813
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda
Glad it olny brought them closer together.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I really liked this first chapter. The whole conversation about her babysitter liking his band made me chuckle. :0) Can't wait to see where things go from here. :0)
Author's Response:
ha ha! She so innocently offended him :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire
I don't know why but I really liked Edward putting the marks on her neck. Ok I do know why... it was hot. Made me wish it was my neck. :0) I also really like that Bella seems to stand up for herself. I like what she said to Rose about needing botox. lol I hope Bella stays confident in herself like that. Looking forward to reading more. I'm off to read the next chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
ha ha! I like that Edward likes to mark her too...it kinda goes with his possessive bad ass persona. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I really like them together but Edward's last thought has me a little worried... reading on.... :0)
Author's Response:
lol...he doesn't know what to do with all these new feelings! Poor Edward, she has him all turned around! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
I really like this so far. Can't wait to read more. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! New chapter up no later than Thursday :)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I really liked this chapter. It's nice to see a Bella who likes to shop. Even though I'm not a big shopper myself it's just nice to see that Bella isn't being forced into it. Rose is quite the Betch! I'm so glad Bella puts her in her place though it's kind of funny some of the things Bella says back to her. I feel so bad for Emmett. I really like your Alice so far too. She really does seem more like a best friend. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Bella has planned for Edward. :0)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
They are so good together. I'm loving this story. I still say poor Emmett. He has to put up with Rose's behavior. :0) I think Edward and Bella should do those pictures to hang in their bedroom. :0)
Author's Response:
I hope she agrees, they would be hot, yeah? Thanks as always for your reviews!
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Wonder who tampered with the dress??? There are so many women who are jealous of her it could have been anyone. Love the gifts they gave each other at the end. :0)
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Rose has got to be a misserable misserable person to be so bitter all the time. What exactly does Emmett love about her? I do love that Bella doesn't let Rose put her down but, I wish Rose would get over it already. Loved the idea of them all dressing as song names. That was really neat. :0)
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
I'm worried making home video's of themselves having sex isn't the smartest idea. Hope no one finds them. As for Edwards reaction at the end ... I know he knows this but, he totally over reacted. Hope he doesn't do anything stupid while he's out. He needs to go back and finish talking to Bella. Hope they work this out. :0)
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry
I'm so glad they made up and that Edward didn't do anything stupid with the blonde at the bar that night. It was kind of refreshing to see Rose actually talk to Bella little without being mean.
Author's Response:
Me too...I'm such a baby when they fight. lol. Let's see how she fares meeting the rest of the family, it ought to be interesting to say the least.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical
I love his parents! Heck, I love his whole family! I can't believe Bella and Edward starting having sex while everyone was in their room that morning. lol It was pretty hot though. Why was everyone in their room anyway??? Looking forward to seeing more time spent with the family. :0)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog
So now something is going to try to bring them down. Someone leaked thier video online didn't they? I love how in love Edward and Bella are and I hope that they cling to that through whatever happens. It would be great it the video leak doesn't have the desired effect they were going for. I mean Edward and Bella are kind of exabisionist anyway so maybe they can brush this off. (Just trying to stay positive here) lol As I mentioned before I love the depth of thier love, you write it so well. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always look forward to your reviews! You are right what goes up, must come down but I have confidence that they will stick together.
Thanks again,
Laila
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Feel like there's some major drama on the way. I like that they all have each others backs. I hope that continues. Edward singing that song for Bella was so sweet. He's so cool :0)
Author's Response:
Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Hope the guys in the band are feeling pretty rotten for not backing Bella and Edward. What can Bella's publicist really do? It's just a game of he said she said. It might be best to just ignore it. ha ha Now I'm wondering when the video's of Edward and Bella are going to be leaked. I like to see them standing strong together through this rough stuff. :0)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
It was so good to see that even though they were angry they talked and worked things out. Looking forward to seeing how things go when they meet back up with the band. :0)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Glad to see that Edward and the guys made up. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
I love that Edward stood his ground around Charlie. This is a really good chapter. I wish Collin would just leave them alone. :0)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Great interview. I'm glad they got to tell their side of things. Wish I could really see those pics. :0)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Ok my first thought is she needs to tell Edward about the meeting at the gas station. With the paps around there will probably be pictures of it everywhere so there's no keeping it quiet and Collin was stupid for even thinking it could be. :0) While she's at it she needs to let Edward know about the video threat also. I'm afraid to see what happens next. Hope she doesn't let whoever this is tear them apart.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You
I'm so glad Bella told Edward about all the threats. :0) Hope Charlie doesn't kill Edward. ha ha
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You
I knew they'd find a way to make their time apart interesting. :0) Wonder whats up with Bella now?
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
I knew there had to be a way for Edward to stay out of jail. I hope Collin drops the charges. What can they do about Gianna? She's going to continue to cause problems. Oh and I love that they are engaged :0)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
So glad the charges were dropped and of course I love any time these two get to be together. :0)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
Love that Bella did the dance for Edward. :0) I also love that they are doing things their way and not letting people push "tradidtion" on them like spending the night apart.:0)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience
These poor guys just can't get a break. Maybe they'll be able to get her out of their lives now.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
not sure what else to say besides, I'm glad they made up. Looking forward to those tests proving all those other women were lying.
Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.
**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oooh can't wait to see what happens
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wonder how the Cullen's will find her
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
He bit her??? Surely he's not going to change her cause then she'd be stronger than he is and she'd be able to get away. :0) Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
How evil!..... poor Bella will always have that mark on her to remind her of him and what he did.
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That's gotta be hard. Alice is seeing some of the things James is doing to Bella. Edward is going to kill James if he ever gets the chance. :0)
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
going straight to the next chapter to keep reading :0)
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love that they have a plan. Hope they are able to find something out soon. :0)
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
What?!?! James loves Bella??? He obviously is delusional. haha
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
"I will never understand why some vampires become so enamored with their food. He stole her from that hospital in the middle of the night and turned her to protect her from me." James said this? Yet he himself claims to love Bella. Guess if he's being nice now she won't have to worry about being his "pet" anymore.
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Yay Bella! I'm so glad she called the Cullen's when she had the chance. I like her being stronger even if all it does is make James mad. I'm glad she's remembering all the things he's done to her. I didn't want her to all of the sudden love James. Wonder what tipped him off? Now how will the Cullen's find her??? Looking forward to reading more when it's updated again. :0)
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Well we know they didn't get there in time. Hope there's a trail they can follow.
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
So the Cullen's will never be able to sneak up on James if he's got that spidey scence thing going on. Poor Bella, she was so close to getting help. I'm on the edge of my seat just waiting to see what happens next. :0)
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
hmmm Alice's visions. I have no idea what's wrong with her visions. Unless it has someething to do with Bella's shield??? I am glad that she was able to see that they were leaving and to where. :0)
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I knew Aro would want Bella for himself. :0) James has no idea he's about to be double crossed. haha sorry that's just a little funny to me. I want to see him get what he deserves. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
GOODBYE James! Not gonna miss him a bit. lol Wonder what will happen now that the voltur have shown up????
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Can't wait to see what Aro has up his sleeve and how the Cullen's will react. I sure hope they all get out ok. :0) Great chapter.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Well that was pretty cool. Looking forward to seeing what Aro's decision is. :0)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Wow, Bella's going to be a really powerful vamp. I think she used so much power there in the throne room her human body gave out. Will the Cullen's join the Volturi also???
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Should you post tomorrow???? YES! :0) Great chapter. I love seeing them all pull together as a family. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Great Chapter. Wonder how Edward will like his "time out"
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed! Hopefully, he'll find it an improving experience, but we'll see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love Jasper / Bella stories. Really looking forward to reading this one. :0)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Really enjoying this so far :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I like that they are being so open with each other about their stories. Can't wait to see what Jasper has in mind for his "rescue mission" :0)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the revelation of their histories. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Bella's not going to let Jasper keep blaiming himself for everything is she. :0)
Author's Response:
No, they'll have a big heart to heart on that issue soon. Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
hmm Will we ever get to see what the vision Alice had was about? Guess it's not that important but I was just wondering if maybe she saw Jasper and Bella together? I like that Bella has taken care of herself all this time but it's really sweet to see Jasper want to take care of her. :0)
Author's Response:
We don't get to talk to Alice in person for quite awhile, but her condition will be explained eventually. It will be hard for Bella to accept his help, but it's inevitable, lol!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
So much to look forward to finding out... Peter has made contact. :0) Wonder who the other faces from the past are going to be??? Wonder what's up with Andy? It's good to know the cops aren't looking for her in conncection to what happened to Charlie. Going to read the next chapter now. :0) Great job! I'm enjoying your writing, it's very easy to read.
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the story- I'm having a great time sharing it. All your questions will be answered in good time, Grasshopper :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm wondering what up with Andy too Jasper. :0) Reading on....
Author's Response:
Jasper will uncover it all, no worries!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Yay, They kissed! It made me laugh a little when she described what she wanted it all to mean when she said they'd still be friends and keep kissing. :0) I'm glad she's not going to fight what she's feeling any longer, at least it doesn't seem like she is. Great job!
Author's Response:
Yeah- I couldn't draw it out much more! I know other people do it really well, but I just kept feeling like realistically you would get to the point where you put up or shut up. Although, never having been through a friendship to dating transition, maybe I'm wrong, lol! Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Another great chapter! :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thanks for reviewing as you read! I really appreciate hearing your thoughts on the chapters!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I wondered when Emmett would show up. ha ha Now Peter just needs to stop in too. :0) I'm glad Bella stood up to Rose. It also made me happy that Bella let Jasper feel that she loved him. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Part of the reason I didn't make Rose and Bella bffs was because I needed her as an instigator for a few conversations! Glad you liked!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how they get Andy out of the mess he's in. I liked seeing them all go to the club and of course what happened back at the appartment that night. Jasper and Bella are so great together. :0)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the club and "aftermath" lol! That was a fun one to write!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
How perfect. I want to go away to the cabin with Jasper too. :0)
Author's Response:
You and me both, baby! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Loved it! I really really just love these guys together. Wonder if Bella will ever let Carlisle and Esme see her??? I know, I know I'll keep reading and find out :0) Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you found it worth the wait :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
so exciting! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad it was exciting- I don't think I'm too good at suspense/action, lol!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
another great chapter. I really felt Jasper's struggle to not give in to his blood lust. Great job! Again I just love Jasper and Bella togher and the connection they have. I'm glad Bella let Carlisle and Esme know excactly what she felt about not being part of their family anymore. I like how tough Bella is and that's it's not over the top. Looking forward to getting to know Peter more. :0)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked- this chapter is near and dear to my heart because it's really how this whole story got started for me. I'm glad you're enjoying my Bella- I wanted her to be strong but not bitchy (unless it's necessary, lol!) Hope you enjoy Peter!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
In one of the other chapters when Alex took Bella, I loved when she told him he was a dead man. Now I can't wait to see when Jasper and Peter actually get him. :0) I'm really loving your story.
Author's Response:
Glad you're still enjoying- hope you like the vengeance scene when it gets here! Thanks so much for all your reviews!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Peter and Bella make me giggle :0) I had wondered when Jasper and Bella would talk about "forever" and now they have. They make me happy. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked the "forever" discussion!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I love that Jasper reminded Alex about Bella telling him he was a dead man and that in the end Alex was begging for his life. It cracked me up when Bella came out of the room after comforting Jasper and told Emmett she "gave good head" lol so funny :0)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the end of Alex and "direct" Bella! Giving good head is something to be proud of, lol!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Maybe Bella should have asked Mama Josi where this Malcom dude is. :0)
Author's Response:
Never thought of that- it would have been too easy, lol!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I was crying so hard when she was saying goodbye to Charlie. Can't wait to see how this little visit from the Quileutes will go. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks- I've been told I should put a tissue warning at the top! I'm glad you felt connected with her experience. Thanks so much for all of your reviews!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Great chapter! It was really fun to read. From the beginning to the end. :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I got some grief for beating Peter up, but I liked seeing him vulnerable, and it helped Bella realize that she's a real member of their family. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I wanna see Emmett line dance. ha ha I like what Bella had to say to Rose about not focusing on the "what could have beens" Great job!
Author's Response:
I really hated it in Eclipse when Rose said she would give Emmett up to regain her humanity. Glad you liked the chapter and the line dancing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I knew they'd have a good time going out. The whole bear statue deal made me laugh. :0)
Author's Response:
I felt like they needed a good laugh! Glad you liked!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
How lucky is it that Malcolm showed up now? Edward seems a bit crazy at the moment, maybe Malcolm will be able to get him under control??? Another exciting chapter. :0)
Author's Response:
Lol, in my head, I visualize Malcolm as being a little hesitant of the situation he has just walked into! You know, like he's tempted to just back up slowly and go to the next house or something!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
oooh I can't wait to see what Bella has to say to Edward. Let him have it girl! ha ha
Author's Response:
Lol, hope I meet your expectations with her rant nex chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Gotta keep reading. I want to see what's going to happen next. :0) Thanks for all the rec's I've put a bunch on my to read list.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the recs! You're lucky, it's not a cliffy to you since you're catching up! People wanted my head after that one, lol!