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Bio:
I'm a stay at home mom. I have a very sweet husband and 2 wonderful kids. I used to love scrapbooking till I discovered fanfic now I spend all my time reading and have a room full of scrapbook stuff just sitting there waiting to be used. :0)
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Oh no, Jasper had a feeling he shouldn't have left. I hope he finds Bella soon. Did Edward really put all this together or is Victoria finally making an appearance? Gonna keep reading.... :0)
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was hard to make him ignore that feeling, but if he didn't, then where's the drama? Your questions will be answered, keep reading grasshopper!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Glad Jasper got to her before she died. Looking forward to seeing what hppened after Jasper arrived. :0)
Author's Response:
His POV is up next, and then you're caught up :( I'm working on the next one, but I'm out of town, so it's slow goings. Thanks so much for reviewing as you read!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
What was Edward thinking? He'll think twice before going after Bella again now won't he? ha ha I'm looking forward to reading more of this story when it's posted. I really love your story and will wait patiently. :0)
Author's Response:
Bella's POV is up next- more newborn firsts! I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading so far. I normally make a big effort to post once a week, but it's not happening this week! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I'm glad they were able to help Alice. Wonder what Bella has planned for Edward? ha ha
Author's Response:
Yep, it feels REALLY good not to have broken Alice hanging over my head anymore, lol! Hope you enjoy Bella's plans! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Great Chapter. I'm always happy to get these updates. :0)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
The way everything seemed to be tying up in this chapter I figured it was coming to an end. I've really enjoyed reading this story and will definitely keep an eye out for more stories that you may write.
Author's Response:
So glad you've enjoyed the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
What a suprise.... Edward and Andy. :0) Bella gets to have hrer friend. I've really enjoyed reading this story.
Author's Response:
Hope you liked the twist! I planned for Edward to end up with a guy from the beginning, but I wasn't sure he deserved Andy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Bella falls ill while at the Cullens' house. Set during New Moon after she, Edward and Alice return from Italy. One shot.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10069 Read Count: 652
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sick
this was a enjoyable read. I've always wondered what Edward would have been like if Bella ever was sick. Now I know. :0)
Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I can't even imagine how scared they must be
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I love that they kiss each others rings on. I'm worried about the bad feeling Alice has
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love that they got to be together really be together :0)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh that's terrible! Poor Bella! Poor Edward! I hope they get their chance to hurt James sometime (soon) :0)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Is there some hope??? :0) I hope they get free
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
This is getting exciting. Hope everything goes ok :0)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Here they go... I have my fingers crossed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yay their free! Wow, Rose is visious! Royce really deserved it though :0)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
They're finally free please let Bella be ok. Can't wait to see how the phone call goes
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I feel so much joy for Carlisle and Esme at the moment. It has to be wonderful for them to find out their son is alive. Hope Carlisle gets there in time to help Bella
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Wish Edward would stop thinking he's a murderer. He did what he had to do. Would he rather the guards were all still alive and they were all slaves still??? I think not. I think everyone one of them would have done what he did. :0)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
It's sweet how everyone there was pulling together in hopes that Bella will get better
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Hang on Bella. Edward crying for Bella at the end brought tears to my eyes. Not sure why but I kind of wonder if the people headed for the house might be Carlisle and Esme. :0) hoping at least.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I just have to say I love when Edward calls her "my Bella" I'm so glad Carlisle is there. Hope Bella gets better now.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Wow, Edward won and Oscaar! :0) Hope they find everyones rings and papers.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I'm going to join the masses in screaming "NOOOOOOO" he can't leave her! How would he feel if she left him???? Yeah exactly! he'd fall apart so what makes him think Bella could get over losing him??? I know I know this is just how Edward is but it's giving me a ulcer. lol There's gotta be another way.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I love Edward and Bella's sweet moments together. Yay he found the rings! Boo he's still planning on leaving Bella. How could he think Charlie would think he was a murderer??? If anything Charlie would be proud that Edward saved his little girl. I hope Bella learns of Edwards plan and gives him a good smack upside the head. lo Ugh! I do not handle angst well. ha ha
Author's Response:
Thanks for all of your reviews. Yes, I like the way he calls her 'my Bella', too, and he's just so damn sweet and protective... even to the point of being a self-sacrificing idiot about it. But sometimes that's what love does to people, especially with such an emotional creature as our dear Edward. The crying for his wife scene had me near tears, too, and I wrote the darn thing, lol! As for Charlie, well, he is a lawman, and Edward feels that he would be very disappointed, plus knowing Edward is capable of such a thing makes Edward feel that Charlie would never trust him with Bella again. Edward is a very emotional and passionate man, and he has been stressed to the breaking point (remember, he actually did snap for a while there); he is more irrational than usual.
I am so glad you are enjoying the story, and I hope you like how it all plays out.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
"I want a Edward too" lol Yes I know Edward is a good guy. It still hurts my heart to think of what he's planning to do though. :0)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Hope that one drug Carlisle had to give her didn't cause any problems with the baby. :0) I'm so nervous about what he's going to do..... he can't leave her, he can't leave her, he can't leave her. haha
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Oh poor poor Edward. This really did him in didn't it? I'm still going to hope the baby will be ok. Carlisle said 80 to 90% not 100 so there's still some hope. Miracles do happen and Bella -n- Edward deserve a miracle. :0)
Oh, and now I'm wondering who's the mystery person???
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Looking forward to reading this story.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Poor little Jack. I wonder what Charlie will tell her to do.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
I'm really liking this so far. I cried for little Jack when he said he missed his daddy. He seems like such a cute little boy. Going to go read more now.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this story. Love Jack and Bella. I wonder if there is something going on between Jake and Leah. I guess it's a good thing that Bella doesn't really have those strong feelings for Jake. Going to read the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I'm so glad Leah got there and helped Bella out of that situation. Kind of wish we could have seen Charlie deal with Jake. :0)
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
It's so sweet that Jack wants to call Bella mommy again it brought tears to my eyes. I think it's great that Bella's stories are going to be published. :0) I really love all your characters so far except Jake but I don't think we were supposed to like Jake. lol Great job!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
What a shock to see Renee! Again Jack was as cute as ever.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Great chapter! Really there are so many good things I could say about this story and each chapter but everytime I get down to this box to write the review I can't find the words. I'm loving the story!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Oh what a tough choice to make. I think Bella's right though if my son was taken I'd want to know where he was.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
please for the better, please be for the better :0) I'm so nervous for them
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
This was so good. I want to hury and read the next chapter.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Great chapter I saw the pictures of the house. It's gorgous! I would have chosen to stay there too if I was Jack. It'll be interesting to see how things go with Edward from here on out.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
It was good to get to hear Edwards story. I'm not looking forward to Bella having to leave. That won't go over well at all I'm afraid. what are the chances of Edward moving to Washington??? :0)
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
It's so hard to stop and review when all I want to do is just hit next and keep reading. :0) Love the story. Great job!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I just knew Edward was going to think Jasper was Bella's boyfriend. ha ha Well I'm glad they got that settled now.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I thought about this story all day. :0) I started to worry about Victoria finding out Jack has been found. I would not want to have to let my son see her. I can see Vic causing some strife. Oh and is Jake going to come back again? Just a feeling I had. Love the story!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Poor Edward busted up his face but I have to say that was funny. Well with the help of everyone there Edward and Bella shouldn't have any doubts that they are falling for each other. I'm just glad it doesn't seem to be scaring either one of them away. What in the world could Marcus want from Bella. Wonder how he knows who she is.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Just had a thought. Edward is telling people he works with that his son is back. News travels. Marcus is bound to find out that his grandson has been found. Looking forward to seeing how all this works out.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Oh that was so mean of Carlisle and Esme to set up that date the way they did. ha ha but it sure pushed Edward into action. :0)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
What a perfect date. I was hoping they'd kiss and they did. yay! :0)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
Great chapter! It's so good to see Emmett like Bella. I hope Bella doesn't let the worries of the what ifs ruin what's happening between herself and Edward. So far she seems to be handling things pretty well.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
Wonder what Marcus will think when he hears just what rule his daughter played in losiing Jack.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
I wondered if she'd make an appearance.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
How exciting. I hope they find out all the dirt on Vic and James .
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
I hoped he would want to go with them. :0)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
He surprised her. That's so sweet!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
Are you tired of seeing the words "Great Chapter" yet? lol I'm sorry I'm not more creative with words but this really was a great chapter. :0)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
feeling a little worried. gotta go see what's going to happen.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
Well I'm surprised she'd trust anything James said in the first place. She had a bad feeling about him ever since she met him. I'm glad Jenks found out what he did. Now hopefully she'll be able to tell Edward.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
As much as I disliked Victoria it was nice to see her try to help Bella. Now she knows that Jacks mom wasn't totally evil and might be able to tell him that some day. I'm so glad Edward and Bella are safe. :0)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
What a great birthday surprise! :0)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
I'm glad he's there to stay. I knew he couldn't stay away. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
Esme pulling out and leaving Bella behind made me laugh. I just love a happy ending they make a beautiful family. This is such a great story. I really enjoyed reading the whole thing and will definitely check out your new story. Your a great writer.
Author's Response:
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42789
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness
Very interesting so far. I like how close Bella and Emmett seem to be. They've really been through a lot of terrible stuff. Emmetts threat to Edward at the end mad me laugh a little. :0) Am I right in guessing that James is still out there?
Author's Response:
yes, james is still lurking. i wanted to make bella and emmett close b/c i love emmett and if i would want him to be my brother. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Home
Only the second chapter and I already really like this story. I really want to see Bella and Emmett find a loving home with the Cullen's. It about broke my heart when Emmett was worried about meeting Carlisle because he just wanted him to like him. Love the instant connection that Edward and Bella seem to have. :0) I also think Alice and Esme will be good for Bella. Great story!
Author's Response:
wow, thanks! emmett is a big teddy bear and i wanted to show that side of him, too. ExB do have a fast connection, maybe too fast, but what's written is written. but i'm a canon shipper so that should tell you where this story will end up. thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor
Still loving the story. You may have heard this already but I think Bella's totally over reacting. :0) Of course the foster family would get to see files on the kids they are bringing in to their homes. Surely she'd know that and just because they read them doesn't mean they believe everything. I mean they still opened their home to them didn't they??? Oh well, hopefully she'll give Edward a chance to explain. :0)
Author's Response:
i completely agree. bella is totally over reacting. we just have to remember she is a teenager and drama reigns during those years. she is also very overwhelmed b/c she's never had such a wonderful family. thanks so much for the reviews!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Misunderstanding
So glad Bella has calmed down and let Edward explain everything. Looking forward to seeing where things go from here. :0)
Author's Response:
thank you, babes!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Unstable
Poor Poor Bella. I'm surprised she seems so well adjusted (except for the nightmares) considering all she and Emmett went through. Wonder what will happen on this trip. Does Alice know something is going to happen??? Really liking the story. :0)
Author's Response:
yeah those nightmares will get worse, unfortunately. she's bottling too much stuff up. thanks for the reviews!!!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Premonitions
Edward felt like someone was watching them??? The guys competition in the gym was funny. :0)
Author's Response:
they all kinda felt on edge. and i thought some macho time for the boys would be a good bonding experience. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Protector
I love the time they are speniding and having fun together. Truth or dare ha ha Can't wait to see who's at the door that made Bella react the way she did.
Author's Response:
i loved playing truth or dare, so i wanted them to have some fun. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Intruder
I can't believe it wasn't James. But when the server guy acted scared I figured he was the wrong guy. James is crazy like Bella said Emmett wouldn't have been able to just hold him down like that. Wonder why the detective wants to talk to them? Loving the story :0)
Author's Response:
nope, not james... but caius is important ::wink:: thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Victims
I'm so happy that Carlisle and Esme want to keep Bella and Emmett. They deserve to have a family who will love them and take care of them. Pretty scary news about the killings though. I would think the cops would be wondering if they had a leak or something because it seems James is killing people in the areas where the B & E are. How is he finding them? Also why didn't they change their names? :0) I also have a funny feeling that the detective assigned to protect them is going to be Jacob. I could be totally wrong but I guess I'll see in the next chapter. ha ha Great story!
Author's Response:
wow, what an awesome review!!! the cullen's are awesome. i love them so much. james is one crafty guy. he slips right through the cracks, but we'll figure out why eventually. thanks for R&R!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J
I knew it would be Jake. lol
Author's Response:
i had to bring him into the story somehow! thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers
I'm glad that you are getting a bunch of reviews on the other sites. I tried to up the count here and when there are more chapters I'll be able to review them too. :0) Hope the number keeps you ispired to keep writing this story. To bad Bella had to freak out at the end, but now I'm wondering did James call her "my Bella?" Guess I could go back and read the parts with him and see if it was mentioned but I'm too lazy to go look. ha ha Great story and I'm really looking forward to reading more. :0)
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i'm floored by the response this is getting. any reviews are appreciated. i have some of the best readers in the fandom!!! i will definitely keep writing. all of your questions will be answered in time. thank you soooo much for all of your reviews, babes!!! ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help
I'm glad Bella realizes she needs help and that she actually spoke to Carlisle about it. I hope she's able to heal. As for the nightmare I think Emmett's about to show up with the chain saw. The noise she heard was probably him.
Author's Response:
bella has a long road to recovery, but she'll get there. and i'm glad you picked up on the noise. it is very important in the progression of the nightmares. ;) thanks so much for the reivew, babes!
New banner by Julie C.
Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Yay Jenks is going to help lead the search party to Bella. Wish he would have gotten Bella and just brought her along with him. :0) Glad James and Laurentt passed out.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
yay the rescue has begun!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
So glad she's ok. I was a little worried when I was reading Edwards dream at the beginning. Sad to see that the story is ending, but I know it can't go on forever. I've really enjoyed reading it. :0)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Oh no! .... she's gotta be ok. They finally found her she can't die now.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Really loving this story
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Maybe Jenks can help her? He seems to feel sorry for her. Maybe James will have a few drinks while downstairs and pass out giving Bella the chance to sneak out?? :0) Hoping Edward and the others arn't far behind. :0)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Carmen isn't going to even give Rose a chance is she? I feel bad for Rose. What Paul said about his mama made me chuckle. :0) Sad they lost Tyler but glad Elezar is still dong ok.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story. In fact I'm goin to go do just that.... :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really like this story so far. I love the different setting and like the characters. Great job!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Emmett and his language slip ups was funny. I just love him as a big brother. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bet Rose is feeling like fool. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great chapter, I'm really enjoying getting to know these guys. Your a/n at the end made me laugh "coward" ha ha Glad you didn't go with that. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Alice is the mail order bride. Wonder if Jasper will be the one to help her find the ranch also. :0) Looking forward to meeting Edward.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Yay Edward! :0) I love the image of him you've created. Hope we see more soon.