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I'm a stay at home mom. I have a very sweet husband and 2 wonderful kids. I used to love scrapbooking till I discovered fanfic now I spend all my time reading and have a room full of scrapbook stuff just sitting there waiting to be used. :0)
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Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
uhoh big brother is angry. :0) I'm having so much fun reading this.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
That was funny. Poor Em isn't going to deal well with Edward wanting his sister is he? ha ha I'm going to read the next chapter now.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Well Alice had to meet the Sheriff somehow didn't she? Wonder what she did to get thrown in jail. Was she the one who gave the deputy a busted lip? Loving the story. Great job!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Poor Jasper, it's going to crush him when he finds out that Alice is coming to meet Emmett.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
It'll be interesting to see how everything in this story falls in to place. Drunk Edward and Emmett were funny. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Poor Bella, my feeling were hurt when she heard Edward making fun of her too. At least she gets to keep his shirt now. :0) Love how close Alice and Bella seem to be getting. I really like all these people in the story. Great job!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Just want to keep reading :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I love Carmen! she's going to keep them all on the right track. :0) Have to say Edward naked with just his boots and hat stading in the dorrway made me laugh. ha ha
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I know I've said it before but I'll say it again. I'm really loving this story. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Thank you for making Bella know how to ride the horse. Emmett still cracks me up. I'm also glad to see that Bella is talking to Edward again. :0)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Sadly I've reached the end of the already posted chapters. I'll be looking forward to the updates when they are posted. Great story!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Have a feeling that the Volturi brothers really want the railroad to come. I think they are going to start causing some problems to help Emmett see things thier way. As for Rose I'm interested in seeing how they end up together. Maybe something will happen and she'll leave the saloon and Emmett will take her in? That way she'd be able to become friends with Alice and Bella and Alice will be able to see where Emmetts heart truly lies. Just guessing but can't wait to see what you write. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping up with the story! There really is a method to my maddness.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
And the family expands now we meet Esme. I love getting these updates. :0)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I just love getting these updates! :0)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Wonder what Edwards story is and why he didn't want to tell Bella. Just when things look up somethings gotta happen to knock em back down again. :0) Thanks for all the updates! :0)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I really like Carlisle. :0) Alice standing up to Emmett was very entertaining. Great update!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I'm so glad Edward and Bella had a little chance to talk and smooth things over just a bit. The church part had me laughing. lol
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Hate that Rose has to go through that but at least she'll be able to give Emmett a heads up on what Mallory said.
Edward and Bella are so cute. :0)
Wonder if what will finally cause Alice and Emmett to decide they don't want to marry each other. Emmett trying to get out of going to church made me chuckle. ha ha :0)
Great story!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
another great update :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I hope Edward is able to make it back for the festival. I think Alice is starting to realize that maybe she and Emmett aren't a match for marriage. Really enjoying this story. Great job!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Awww poor Jasper does want more than Emmett's biscuts. :0) Wondering if Rose will find a way to give Emmett that warning somehow while he's in town for the festival. Looking forward to reading more. :0)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Yay! Edward showed up for the dance. :0) I really wanted them to get to dance together. I'm glad Rose was able to get the warning to Emmett. As for the person in the bronze dress at the end of the alley.... I'm guessing it was Bella. She's going to be mad at Emmett isn't she because Alice is her friend or maybe somehow Bella will see that Alice has feelings for Jasper and help that work out. So many possibilities. I can't wait to read more. :0)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Always left wanting more..... :0) I knew Bella had seen Emmett. Is she going to have it out with him??? Hope Edward won the fight. ha ha
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I'm surprised she actually got to talk to Rose and now she knows the story between Emmett and Rose. Can't wait to see how things go. :0)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
and here comes Jasper to Alice's rescue! When is Emmett going to realize that he could ask Jasper to marry Alice. :0) Jasper saying he never touched his biscuts was funny :0)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I'm glad the girls are ok. I guess Alice having to stay in town will make it easy for Jasper to visit and check up on her. :0) It could be fun trying to see Edward and Emmett trying to take care of an injured Bella. :0) Love the story1
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Edward being there for Bella the whole time while at the docs was so sweet. I like the rugged cowboy but I also like to see him being tender and loving toward Bella. :0) I'm glad Bella told Emmett about what she saw so he won't have to wonder what's she's mad at. Poor Emmett, I wonder what he'll do? Loving the story! :0)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Poor Emmett. He's so sad right now. I hope Bella comes in and talks with him and lets him know she still loves her big brother. I think I think they both need a good cry together. I didn't realize till this chapter (or is slipped my mind) that Emmett never did show much emotion when Bella told him their parents died.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I hope Emmett comes to visit Bella and they have a nice talk. :0) Speaking of talking... wonder what Edward was going to say? Thanks for all these speedy updates.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
yay, I'm so glad that Emmett stopped in to see Bella and that they are talking. I didn't like seeing him so upset. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. :0)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
I love when I get to read about these two. I'm happy that they get this little bit of alone time on the way to town. :0) Gives them a chance to talk and be together. :0)
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I love seeing the truth finally come out. :0) Jasper handing the flowers to Carlisle was funny. :0) Great chapter!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Carlise sending Bella in to ask for lunch and the story Edward told about that was really funny. As for the little bit at the end .... I have know idea who it could be. I could guess Jacob only because he's not in the story yet and didn't I read somewhere that he'd be in the story? I read so many fics sometimes I get things like that confused. :0)
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I loved their kiss. :0) It's so sweet seeing them fall for each other.
For some reason I still can't get on the forum. I registered way back when you posted chapter 30 but It still won't let me on. I have no idea what I'm doing wrong. :0)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're having trouble with the forums. You can click on the coffee cup under the banners for this story. If you still can't access it and have registered for the forums, please send a message to jennmc75 and she'll fix it so you can gain access. Hope that helps!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Oh no! did someone shoot Emmett???
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
I'm glad Emmett is alright. I know he's hurt but at least he's alive. Wonder who shot him??? Funny how he promised he'd be more supportive of Edward and Bella and then started to think of taking that back. ha ha She's his baby sister I think that one's going to be a little tough. :0) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get to post it.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
ha ha loved Jasper's reaction :0)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Wonder what's up with Alice??
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Edward kissing Bella behind the barn door was sweet. Sorry to hear that the down is having so much trouble. Poor Jasper. Looking forward to seeing how they all pull through this. :0)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Go Rose! I hope it wasn't just a warning shot. :0) I don't think she'd kill him but she could hurt him enough that he couldn't get away so that Em could deal with him when he got back. :0) I'm so happy Jenks reached Alice, Edard and the others.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
hmmm wonder what Bella's present is???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
ha ha I just read you A/N and the part where you said "No Jacob is obviously not Bella's present" made me laugh. Guess we'll find out what the gift is in the next chapter. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Awww ya gotta love big brother Emmett getting Bella her own horse. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Oh wow wonder why the land no longer belongs to Edward???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Poor Edward. What a sad story. But now he knows that Bella loves him :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
He loves her too :0) Great chapter!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
ha ha he had to go get Carmen to talk to Bella. I'm surprised he still wanted to be in the room. :0)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Well that's pretty interesting. Never expected that she was wanted for murder. Wonder how that will work out???
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Giving her the carved rose was soooo sweet! The beginning was funny when Emmet caught Edward in the shower. (although I did feel embarrased for Edward too) ha ha
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
That was fun. :0) Wonder who this person in the shadows is.... and is it the same one that was watching Edward and Bella???
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
ha ha smooth Jasper smooth :0)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I knew if she had killed someone that there had to be a reason and I had a feeling that Jasper wouldn't care. I'm so glad she came out and just told him the truth and said yes this time when he asked her to marry him. :0)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Great chapter! I love that he asked Em for Bella's hand. I knew he would but I didn't know it would be this chapter. :0) Can't wait to see how he asks and of course she's gotta say yes.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Looks like James is up to no good.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Carlisle and Esme are so funny. :0) Is Edward going to ask Bella on their way back to the ranch???
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
ha ha I think thats one of the best engagements I've ever read! Great chapter! Now something bad is going to happen isn't it??? :0)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
I knew it. I knew something bad was going to happen. Can't wait till they catch James. :0)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Oh wow when it rains it pours! Poor Emmett!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Oh wow I didn't see any of that happening at all! How's Bella going to get out of this? Hope Elezar gunshot wound isn't as bad as it sounds and that he'll live. I kind of felt something like that was going to happen though when he and Carmen were having their loving moment. So sad.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
yes yes I'm anxious for more! :0)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
That's gotta be torture to want to go after the men that took Bella but not be able to.
Is it at all possible that Rose found out what James is up to or that she'll hear he has Bella and that she'll be able to get to Emmett and let him know??? ha ha I'm just looking for a way they can get Bella back and also get Rose involved. or maybe Bella can escape somehow your Bella seems pretty tough. :0) Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Ha ha ya gotta love Alice. :0) I wondered if Rose would get more involved in this story and now it looks like she will. Great job. I hope they find Bella and get her away from James soon. :0)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Carmen's not happy. Doesn't she know about how Emmett feels for Rose?
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
How frustrating it must be for them to have to stop for the night. I hope they get to Bella before anything bad happens. :0)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Rose is really stepping in and helping out. :0)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Gotta hurry and see wha the scream was for...
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
Good for Bella. I'm glad she protected herself. :0)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
ha ha I wondered if he'd ever find out that Bella saw him in only his hat and boots that time. :0) This was funny with Emmett. It was so nice for Rose to cover for Bella like that. It shows they the girls have become pretty close.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
It brought tears to my eyes when Em told Edward he gave them the land that had his parents tree. Bella was pretty smart to buy Bar none. I like that they'll all get to stay close.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
Wonder what Alice thinks of "her vision" for the wedding now. ha ha The baby is coming! How exciting. :0)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
I can just imagine seeing the fear in all the men's faces when they heard Esme screaming in pain. :0) Happy news, They have a son.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
definately worth the wait! I love these guys they are so cute together. :0)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue
such a happy family. Love their son Charlie ha ha I just love a happy ending :0) I've really enjoyed reading this story.
Bella is the newest nurse working at the MASH 8076 during the Korean War. While there she meets Cpt. Edward Masen, who sees in her an angel in the hell they are living through. Will they find a way to be together in a place where life can change in an interest. Entry for the 2010 Age of Edward Contest.
Another amazing banner made for me by Rosalynn.
Beautiful banner made as part of the AoE Banner Contest by Becksishere.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96660 Read Count: 16329
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: An Angel in Hell
I really liked this. I like seeing Edward and Bella and the gang in this setting. It's different from anything I've read before.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Bug Out
The whole time they were relocating I just kept thinking ... that's so much stuff they have to pack up and move and then they have to just do it again to go back. Maybe that just shows that I'm feeling lazy. Well I wondered how long it would take before Edward and Bella stopped being "careful" As much as I'd like to see a baby Masen I don't like the thought of them having to seperate for what could be a long long time. Just look at how long Carlisle has had to be away from his wife. Don't think their really thinking clearly....
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Aid Station
Wow that was pretty lucky. They get sent tot he front but only for one day and now they get to take a trip together. Hope they get to see Peter again.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: A Miracle of Eastern Medicine
That was worriesome for a moment. Glad he's getting better
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Baby It's Cold Outside
Guess I never really thought of the cold and the tents. Really enjoyed this
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Christmas Angel
I wondered if she'd see any of the boys from home while over there. That was fun
Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C
Banner By: Rachel MS
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I feel so bad for Charlie. Babies change so much in those first few years and he's going to miss out on so much. You described Renee perfectly - selfish.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 16 (BPOV)
Ten Long Days
He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.
Hugs~Izzy
In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I'm always so happy to get these updates. :0) Wonder what's up with Maria?
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me hun.
Now go read the next update! lol
t
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very good chapter. It has me wanting to read more to find out what happens next. The Volturi won't let them go.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I've been wanting to read this story for a while now. I had thought of waiting till it was complete because sometimes I'm impatient and just want to keep reading to find out what happens. Well anyway. I'm glad I didn't wiat. I really like this so far. :0)
Author's Response:
Glad that you decided to take the plunge and start reading.
Glad that you like it so far!
T
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I'm wondering, Does Bella feel the pull toward Jasper also? Would she have been able to leave him behind even if her parents weren't being threatened? Maybe I'll find out as I read more of the story. Very good story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I gotta say I've really gotten used to seeing Alice be the best friend I kind of like how Bella stands up to her. I laughed when she called her a hobbit. lol I Jasper seems mean at times but I really like when he's "taking charge" I'm really having fun reading this fic. Great job!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh Jasper ha ha Ok when he told Bella their encounter in the woods was a mistake I felt a knot in my stomach. I really feel so bad for her but I just want to laugh because I just know Jasper is going to be hating himself. I really hope Bella makes him suffer a bit even if it's unintentional. ha ha Love the story! Great job!
Author's Response:
I've read all of your reviews. Thanks so much for reading and then coming back to tell me how much you liked it. I really appreciate the support, it makes writing that much easier!
T
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Esme saying she was slaving away looking over the take-out menu's cracked me up. lol Great chapter. As much as I like when the major takes over I also like when he's sweet. Like when he picked her out up out of the mud and let her cry and actually talked to her. Looking forward to reading more. Great job!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I knew he wouldn't be able to handle Bella dancing with another guy. I'm glad he and Bella got a chance to dance together even if they were interupted by that Brian guy. Emmett drinking all that beer is funny. He's not going to have much fun when the night is over is he? :0) Wonder what will happen with Jasper and Brian. Jasper can't bite the guy 1. they're in public 2. that would totally freak Bella out. Going to go read the next chapter to find out what happens.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Wow Bella got some super cool powers. I love this!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
“But, I don’t want to hurt anybody,” she said.
“You don’t have to worry about that, ‘cause ain’t nobody out here gonna even let you get close enough for you to touch them,” I said.
I was laughing out loud with this! Poor Jasper is just clueless. This was great!
“That was really low Jasper,” Emmett said. “You’re a fuckin’ empath. Aren’t you supposed to be all like, I-feel-your-pain, and not let-me-kick-you-when-you’re-down?”
Ya gotta love Emmett! ha ha
This was such a great chapter! I didn't want it to end. I hope you are having as much writing this story as I'm having reading it. Do you laugh while you write thes funny lines?
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
What is up with Edward??? He's a real jerk isn't he? Please tell me Jasper rips his head off. Yes I know it's super late but I can't quit reading. At least It's now Saturday morning. I can sleep in. That's if I ever go to bed..... :0)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I love that he has pictures on his phone. He likes her more than he even realizes :0)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
ok I cheated and just read the rest of the story that's posted. Now I'm coming back and posting rieviews because your story definitely deserves more reviews! This was another great chapter. I really like how Bella cooled down and realized on her own what she had with the Cullen's. At this point when I read this last night I just wanted to hurry to the next chapter. :0)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
So Jane's not totally evil. I actually feel a little sorry for her. I'm so glad Bella's back with the family and I'm so so glad that she and Jasper had their talk. I really wanted them all to find out just how rotten Edward really is. :0)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Go Bella! She can take down a vamp as a human just imagine what she'll be able to do when she's a vamp herself. I love that she went after Alice. ha ha Oh and I loved the declorations of "your mine" at the end. That put a big happy smile on my face. Acutally I loved the whole thing but I can't put it all into words.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Bye Bye Alice! She's C . R . A . Z . Y! :0)
Enjoyed the girl talk and the mud fight and especially the fact that Carlisle couldn't stay mad at them when he was giving his lecture. ha ha
I'm sad now. I've reached the end of the posted chapters. Now I have to wait for updates along with everyone else. :0) I can't wait to read more of this story. You've done a really great job.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
They were having such a great time till Edward showed up. I hope they are able to find Bella before anything bad happens. I hope she's able to finish doing her list before they have to change her. I know it wasn't important to her anymore but it was important to Rose, Em, Char and Peter. :0) Great chapter can't wait to read the next.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
The Major is coming to the rescue!
T