Reviews by culleniwish
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71762
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wondered if Bella had caught on to what Peter said. Now I know she did. I like seeing her getting to know Peter and Garette.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Enjoying this story :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww I hope Garrett finds his mate in this story too.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay they are finally clearing the air. Now she knows about the whole mate thing. It shouldn't be too hard for her to grasp. She saw the whole imprinting with the wolves. I hope she accepts poor Peter. I can totally understant him not wanting to be compaired to her other vampire. I think he'll even dislike her calling Edward "my vampire" lol I can't wait for him to find out it was the Cullen's who left her. Great story!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think I love that connection they have. I'm so glad it kept her from being able to leave him.  :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

No I don't want it to end there! ha ha I want to hear what Jasper has to say. I'm glad Bella told him what happened. The Cullen's need to know what they did when they left. Are the others going to be in this story? I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story.



Author's Response:

Can't say for sure who is going to appear... I don't like giving away the plot. You'll have to stick around to find out!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

ahhh I see I'm one of the dumb ones. I had no idea what FUBAR was. I knew it had to be abreviations for something but just didn't know what. ha ha Great chapter. Jasper knows her whole story now. I can't watit to see what happens next.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Sad that Peter wasn't able to change Bella the way they planned. But I thought it was a nice little added touch that Peter let Garrett help. :0)  Looking forward to seeing what she's like when she wakes. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow wonder what Bella and peters light show is about. I'm glad she realized she loves him though. It'll be really interesting to see Bella as a human drinker instead of a vegie vamp. I don't think I've ever read a fic like that. :0) I have a feeling that the Cullen's will find out about Bella. If Edward comes around he'll see it.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I wondered when she'd just decide to be changed. I'm dying to know who the 3 vamps that just showed up are and what they want. Hope Bella and Peter still get to do her change the way they had planned.



Author's Response:

You'll have to be patient and wait for the next chapter to find out! :)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The thought of the guys complaining about all the stops on the road trip made me chuckle. Wondering how Bella's change will go...

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

and now they are engaged :0) I'm wondering if Garrett will ever find his mate. I'm glad he's staying with them but I hope it doesn't bother him to hear them and see them together that way. Wonder how much longer Bella will stay human? looking forward to finding out. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter! New vamp Bella is really interesting. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow it looks like Bella is one powerful vamp. It was fun seeing Peter and Bella not have to hold back since she's not human any longer.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love how tender Peter is with her but also lets her "release the animal " side of her but is there for comfort when she needs it. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Jasper sure didn't know what he was getting into when he decided to "train" Bella did he? lol  Looking forward to seeing what happens now that the pack has arrived.

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26682
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Cullen and Cullen

Wow that was totally different from anything else I've ever read. I felt bad for Edward. Didn't like Bella much but have to say I kind of liked the darker Carlisle. :0)

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2674129
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

Wow what a day they had! This was fun to read

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

Wow they actually made it through that. I have to say in some parts I was crying with them. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Alice is certainly something else. ha ha I have to say I liked that she wasn't the 'typical' Alice in this story. Carlisle too 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

The fact that he calls her Bebella makes me smile. This was great and I gotta tell ya it hooked me right in. I've already read the whole thing but I'm coming back to try and add my reviews. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz

I think Edwards going a bit crazy. How could he possibly think Bella would do that.

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

Love your Edward and Bella. They can be so stink'n cute sometimes. 

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

...aaannnndddd Marcus is gone

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Way to go Bella! 

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

Wow Marcus is a dead man. Surely he knows he can't threaten Bella and get away with it. I felt so bad for Carlisle even though he does some really dumb things I really want to like him. ha ha

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

Great chapter! Love how cool Edward was with the FBI guys. Wonder who killed Gale???

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

:0) I didn't mention in the other chapter but I'm so glad they got pregnant since they both wanted it so bad. :0)

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Great job! Love the story

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

Great job! I'm glad Bella cooled down and came back home. I couldn't believe she'd leave him anyway. :0)

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Diplomatic Immunity

I have to admit I loved that Edward lost control when he found Carlisle and Bella. He was scary but that sex in the Ally was so hot! :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

Carlisle's sure gotten himself into a mess. 

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

This was exciting! Glad the gals are ok

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Wow, can't believe Edward went to prison. Glad it wasn't for life or anything but still I can't imagine him away from Bella that long. Looks like they've got their hands full with little Sonny there. I'm so glad that there is a sequel to this story. I've grown to love your characters and so I'm glad that I can keep reading about them. Great job. I really love your Edward. He may not always do things I aprove of but there's no doubting his love for his Bebella and I love that. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Icing on the Cake

Love seeing them as a family 

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

Awww Sonny's here

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

The girls showing up at the bar was a hoot. I was worried it would cause a fight between Edward and Bella. Poor Esme. Just when I start to like Carlisle....

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire

Love it!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Decision/Draw

Love it!

 

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

Love it!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

This was fun

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E

I'm so glad he didn't kill Aro. I really liked him in this fic

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

Jane and Alec are going down

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

Phew I was worried she was really going to leave there for a moment. So glad they worked it out.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Edward having Carlisle make those coupons cracked me up. ha ha I was sad that Jake died. Why'd he have to go and hook up with Caius' wife? Bella told him it would get him killed.

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hot

Man they really know how to fight. So glad they know how to make up too

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Stages

Great story

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Getting married for Nanny ha ha Nanny sure is a sly one

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

Go Bella! ha ha I love that she punched Jane. Sad that Charlie died even though he wasn't very likeable. I would have liked to know why he treated Bella the way he did. Guess maybe there wasn't really a reason he just wasn't a good guy. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

It's so neat to see a Carlisle like this. He was a jerk a lot in this story but ya know I still liked him. Great job!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

I'm so glad he went with her. He doesn't know it but he loves her already :0)

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

"Oh shit, Your not Esme!" lol That made me laugh

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma

So sad they lost the baby but I do love seeing Edward taking care of his Bebella. He's so sweet in moments like that.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

Love this story

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

Great story!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

ha ha I can just imagine the shock of Edward and Bella barging in on Carlisle. 

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

I love how intense Edward is with anything that has to do with Bella. 

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

They're going to see each other again :0) 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Coming Home An Edward Outtake

Loved it! It was great to see their reunion and then him getting reaquainted with the boys. As I've said many times before I love these guys

Summary:

 

 

This is a story of two guys and a girl, a Zombie Apocalypse and a moment in time that will change everything. Jasper/Edward/Bella Written for JIMP/MrsDuckyFuzzles who likesJasper any way she can get him for FanFicAnon FAGE2

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4167 Read Count: 2049
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2011 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute. I like the idea of them being best friends and that the night they had together didn't ruin their friendship. I like that they are both going to be with her through having the baby. I would really like to read more about them but I Iknow this was a oneshot. :0)

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mr cullen

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67318
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this so far. What a neat idea, making Edward her teacher. I like the idea of an atraction to each other that they just can't deny. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow he's actually accepting that she's his mate? It's nice to see he's not fighting it. At least it sounds like she's got a birthday coming up soon so it won't be long till she's 18

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin

Love seeing them grow closer 

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf

I wondered when or if the wolves would be around. This sounds like it could be a different "Jake" though. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well that meeting between Jake and Edward was kind of weird. Glad they didn't rip each other apart though. Wonder what the bbq will be like. ha ha 

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Pretty lucky Edward has that super hearing and the gift of reading minds. Makes it a bit easier to sneak around. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well that was different. :0)

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

nice to see them all actually like each other

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella really needs to watch what she does at school. I get that she wants to get reactions from him but I don't think she realizes how risky it is. Glad James got caught. Did it stop him or just make him mad???

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533724
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

As always I loved the family time in the beginning. You really have created the cutest kids ever! Poor Bella she's going to hate herself. I hope Edward remains not angry about it because she's going to beat herself up enough for the both of them. It's kind of funny that no matter how much they say they trust each other they're both so quick to acuse the other of cheating. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

I hope Edward really was ok with Bella going with Aro. I miss their friendship as much as they do I think. ha ha I just don't want Edward holding that against Bella. Wonder if they'll look up her dad or not...

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

So now I'm wondering if the guy that shot sonny is Bella's new step brother. I'm so glad Sonny is doing well and Bella and Edward seem to be doing better. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

ugh why is it these two can't go out without some kind of drama? ha ha To be fair Bella's "he's cute" was way more innocent than Edward describing what Alex was wearing and how it looked on her. I'm glad he realized that and apoligized. Wonder what will happen during the rest of the evening. Aro and Carlisle going after Alex this should be fun. I hope Edward and Bella get to enjoy the rest of the night too. Please don't have Bella get stupid drunk They always fight when she gets like that. I can handle the fun and tipsy though. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity

Yep still love them! They seem so real as a family I feel like I just want to kiss and snuggle their kids. Great job!

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Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

The whole kickball game made me giggle. That was fun. Oh I haven't forgot about Rose wanting to tell Bella something. I wonder what it is? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

Ok I just have to say, I LOVED that he showed up to stake his claim. :0) I was glad Bella was telling her friends she was 'seeing somebody', but to have Edward show up like he did was waaaay better. Wonder how Roger will act now that he knows Bella is married and who she's married to. :0) Great chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

Lots of great stuff in this chapter. Love Edward with his kids. Those kids are the cutest! Seriously they crack me up and little Ant too. I'm so glad you aren't ending the story just yet. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Yikes when it rains it pours. I don't know how Bella didn't have a heart attack or anxiety attack or something like that. Not only did she have to worry about if Edward would forgive her she had to worry about what Alex is going to do about he baby and Carlisle and to top it off she had to deal with the worry about what would happen if Edward heard the lie Lou was going to tell. If Edward had heard that before he sent her away he would have killed Aro, maybe Bella too he doesn't seem to think clearly when he goes crazy like that. I sure hope they can forgive each other and work this out. They are giving me an ulcer. ha ha 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

funny that the girls were hoping for a stripper. ha ha

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

Edward talking with Alex about guys cheating was fun. I do love these light hearted times that Edward and Bella get to have together. Poor Carlisle he really tried to do the right thing with Alex. Wonder what will happen there. I think he's really truly looking for happiness and will make that change in himself to make it possible.  

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

For a moment there I thought Carlisle was going to kill Esme. I'm still kind of shocked he just let her go after telling her about how Edward and Aro were responsile for her father's death. Hope she takes this second chance and makes the most of it.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Well, sorry you didn't get the reviews you were hoping for on the last chapter. I did my part and reviewed. :0) I liked this chapter, looks like Carlisle may get his chance with Alex. maybe? I liked Edwards meeting with Bella's dad, that was sweet. Hope he's as good a guy as he seemed. Am I wrong or are there some adventures ahead for our guys? Love the story :0)

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Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

and a fun night out was had by all... till the end cause of course Bella got sick again

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Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

Oh wow! Great chapter. I gotta say I hope Aro doesn't die Edward either, but Edward's gunshot doesn't seem to be as critical so I'm not quite as worried about him. I know it's your story and you can write what you want and I'll still read. I just knew someone would be getting hurt. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

ok though I would never in a million years let my kids drink the wine. I mean that was way more than a few sips. That said it totally fits with Edwards character. I actually kind of love how open they seem to be with each other as a family. (except for Edward not being able to tell Sonny what he does but I understand the reasons for that) I'm glad he didn't just openly lie to Sonny but deferred him to a talk some other time. I think it's so cute how after all the years they've been married Edward still can't seem to keep his hands off Bella. I LOVE IT! You said this had a slow start... I don't mind. I've grown to love this family and it has kept me trying to guess what is going to happen because I know something bad is about to happen. Sometimes I even skim the chapter first to be sure it's safe to read. lol I'd read it anyway but sometimes when things get really stressful I save up a few chapters to read all at once. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

Yikes, Esme could really cause some problems. Carlisle seems pretty genuine in his feelings for Alex. If things did work out with them then Bella would have a friend on the inside. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One

I'm loving the sequel. There's just something about these characters that just makes me want to know more. I look forward to each and every update. Great job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Knee-Jerk Reaction

I think it's kind of funny Carlisle is messing around on Esme yet again. At least he's staying true to character. I actually like the jerk he can be at times. ha ha Wonder if Aro will find someone on the side also. I was kind of surpised Edward went to sleep on the couch. They've grown up a bit. Before a little squable like that would have turned into a yelling match and then in the end he would have gotten what he wanted. ha ha As always, I'm looking forward to reading more. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

I didn't think it was boring at all. I was worried how she'd handle what she did. I know she feels guilty but I'm glad they are working through it and that he's not mad at her. 

I laughed when you mentioned Thunder Cats. My son and husband like to watch that together. ha ha :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

Ha Ha I loved the part where Aro handed Sonny the 20 and said nice job then took it back when he said he loved Katie. lol That was great! You'd think Carlisle would learn wouldn't ya. Wonder what Bella will tell Esme? Looking forward to the next chapter. Love your stories, I will definitely be checking out your new one. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

Wow! What a Thanksgiving. I wanted Esme to know about Carlisle but now that she's mad a Bella about it I wish Bella wouldn't have told her. I'm sure Bella won't be telling her anything in the future. Carlisle and Edward fighting now that I think about it is kind of funny. I do like that they can be fighting but still be brothers. I know Carlisle is a jerk for being a cheater and all that but I still really want to like him. Nanny and Esme going for Aro was funny lol Most of all I love your Edward and Bella that they are still so in love with each other and happy and they have lots and lots of sex as Bella put it. lol Great job! 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

Great update! Once again I love Edward, Bella and their kids. That picture Dame drew cracked me up. I could totally see Edward hanging it in his office. I know they say they aren't the greatest parents but I think they're pretty great. There's no doubt they love their kids and that their kids love them. :0) As for the rest of the chapter though entertaining it has me biteing my nails. I was so afraid Aro called Esme.... I'm glad they didn't have sex. If they were caught wouldn't Edward have to kill Aro? I mean his loyalty is to his brother Carlisle right? What a tough spot to be in. And what's Esme doing? She knows how things are handled if she cares for Aro like she says I think she'd try to stay away just for his safety. I'll be looking forward to the next update. :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

hmmm wonder what made Carlisle change his mind about not wanting Esme killed. I honestly can't believe she's still alive. I'm glad Bella's happy now. Are they going to look up who her dad may really be? As always I love seeing Edward with his kids. ha ha