Reviews by live ember
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532851
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: live ember Signed
Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

Edward is jealous because Alex is taking away all his playmates? That's actually quite hilarious. Though I do not like her for falling for Carlisle, and she has a way of manipulating Bella. Carlisle.....leaving his young traumatized daughter to go after Alex just makes me loathe the both of them. It really makes me wish Edward puts a hit on her. 

And for Lauren and her new sister, for them to hit on Edward, well Bella needs a bat to take to their heads. What the hell did Lauren think she was doing propositioning Edward in front of Bella?!

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Loathing Carlisle and Alex together. She and Aro would have been so much better.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

And yet didn't he say he loved Esme in the first series?

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

I'm a little worried that Ronnie will try to make his new son in law the boss. Why else has Carlisle gone all cuckoo about Aro? Someone is putting ideas in his head. And why was the bridal shower held in Bella's house? Alex and her family are taking advantage of Bella way too much. I know you said Alex would never be evil, but Esme wasn't evil in the first series either. Carlisle drove her insane. 

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Bella's father seems nice, so if Bella contacts him she won't be disappointed. But Carlisle......I have never loathed a character so much in my life. All he thinks about is young pussy.  Why won't he try being a father and raising his motherless children instead of chasing tail. If Ronnie allows his daughter to be with a known womanizer than he should have stayed out of his daughter's affairs.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

I'm surprised and pleased that Bella is going to keep an eye on her brother in law.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

I keep getting a bad feeling from the package that a non Italian Elena left. Is it a bomb, drugs, a wiretap?

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

I love how Bella got the robber to strip to his undies.  Though I am sick of Carlisle and wish him death. He is always falling in "love" 

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Yes! Finally! Renee and Lauren got what they had coming. All that's left is Alex. That dumb bitch just rubs me the wrong way. Her and Carlisle. He is tossing Hanna out for a stupid doormat.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

I hate how history is being rewritten. Since when was Lexi a doting mother? When she was alive she pawned her daughter off on nannies, and that was when she was sober. Candace was not a sweetheart. She not only went after a married man, she disrespected Esme, and she wanted to get with Aro as well. I haven't forgotten when she and her friends tried to threaten Lauren.  And now all of a sudden Esme is a bad person? She is an excellent mother. The one time she wasn't , it was due to postpartum depression. 

Bella is right. Carlisle destroys women, and it just majorly sucks that he is constantly forgiven and will no doubt get his happily ever after, meanwhile Esme will be killed. What about when Carlisle was very close to raping Bella? That seems to have left Edward's mind.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

So Carlisle ruins another woman's life all in the sake of finding his happiness.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

Carlisle sickens me. He is going to kill Esme to steal his daughters' money. And what? Give it to his bastard? I really hope Hana finds out.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Alex and Carlisle get on my nerves.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

This is mostly Edward's fault. He is so needy but he has to understand that she was worried that their son might die.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

I love this series, but I truly loathe Carlisle. How can he say that Esme is evil?! After all the shit he did?! Or did he forget he killed another woman he claimed to "love", It pisses me off that he is putting his whore above Esme.  Candace  was no angel, she knew Carlisle was married and yet she still went after him, even after Esme was so nice to her, so I am giving her a pass. 

Esme did what she did because Carlisle drove her to the point of insanity with all his cheating.

 

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad you posted the note about Edward not wanting strippers, in this chapter it felt like he missed being with them, so I am relieved with the explanation. Though I want to smack the crap out of Carlisle. He ruined his marriage and is now encouraging Edward to let loose and have fun?! Did he forget when Bella stormed in with a gun ready to shoot Edward for cheating?

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

Those young boys are little pervs! Sonny with his tittle pic, and little Dam wanting to watch live porn. 

and Bella shouldn't worry about her weight if she is a size 8. Sophia Vergara, Charlize Theron and Scarlett Johannesburg are size eight and their bodies slamming, and so much better looking than the anorexic waifs in Hollywood 

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

Aro cannot be so stupid as to date someone who has an interest in Edward.

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Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

Aro cannot be so stupid as to date someone who has an interest in Edward.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806397
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: live ember Signed
Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

I adore Amelia, and  just loathe stalker Maggie, and Layla doesn't make me that happy. She has some type of hero worship towards Sonny.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

Maggie and Layla are just not cut out for the boys. I am surprised and disappointed that Bella is backing her bratty daughter in this plan. It can hurt a lot of people.

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Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

Maggie is a such a whore. She was stalking and writing love letters to one brother and automatically falls in love with the other brother when he just smiles at her. I hope her psycho stalker tendencies causes trouble for all of them. Though I am so pissed off at Bella for encouraging her old son to latch onto such a young girl.

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Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

I agree with Maggie's father.The girl is a whore. She was so sheltered that she fell for the first guy who made her orgasm, and when he ignored her, she fell for his brother, the second guy who made her come. And showing up and disrespecting the place where Katie lives? I hope Maggie gets clipped.

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Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

Is Bianca going to come out saying she is pregnant?

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Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

Maggie needs to go, she is coming between brothers, but Dame...damn he really needs to be put in a coma.

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Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

Seriously Maggie has to go. But how sad that Adams realizes now that he is acting out because of what Lauren did to him. It makes sense that he went after Alex. An older woman he can control, instead of an older woman taking advantage of him. And Maggie? He see's her as the female version of himself before he was raped. Maybe he just wanted to take her innocence thinking that it would return his?

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Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Finally! I hope Bella blows her brains out!