Reviews by theway
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515055
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: theway Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

This a good chapter, where we can see the characters continue to grow.  I enjoy that you are make the characters more 3 dimensional.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: theway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chocolate coloured fantasy

This story has been one of the better written stories on this board - it flows well.  While I am impatient for the principle characters to engage other, I am enjoying the flashback scenes since it allows the reader to understand the chararter better. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm really glad you took time to reply! We will see a lot more Bella/Edward-action, I promise :-) It will probably be a few more chapters, then they will meet.

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: theway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thank you for an interesting story.  The plot is definately unique compared to the other stories that I have read on this site and on fanfiction.  In the early part of the story you showed the cruelty and depravity of human nature (through Royce, James and the guards), but you also showed the softer side, the compassionate side through Edward, Bella and the gang.  In these later chapters, you give the reader hope, which the human sentiment that keeps us human looking and moving forward.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much!  I tried to convey the cruelty and the unexpected ways it affected the slaves.  I am so glad that I was at least a little successful.  I truly appreciate your kind words; this is my first attempt at a story, and I am overwhelmed at the response I have received.  I hope you enjoy the remainder of my tale.

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: theway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: C1 Prologue

I enjoyed the beginning of this story - it's definately convinced me to follow this story.  I'm looking forward to the next episode.



Author's Response:

Thanx for reading and reviewing, hope u enjoy the rest of the story just as much, new chapter in about a weeks time, just fine tuning :)