Reviews by cantsleep
Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Mike needs to pay, what an ass and how rude to do that in Bella's room, which is basically set aside for Edward's massages or those he deems have earnt it. That is so gross. Bella needs to be redeemed. Great chap, thanks for updating, can't wait for next.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255205
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Phew I need a fan to cool off! I get the feeling that he may have used something heavier than the crop on her, to start desensitising her fears? Anyway, great chapter, look forward to next.



Author's Response:

Edward will be telling his POV of what happened and he acsn explain it better then I can ,,,,thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I totally love this fic, and you have really spoilt us with your update schedule. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas or as you Americans say, holiday season.

As I said I love this fic, and this chapter is no exception.  Definately thought her punishment was fitting, Edward has every right to be really upset because what she was doing could ruin both their lives potentially and at least their relationship.  I am not saying that Edward is the kind to leave her if she was permanently injured, but she would make him leave or drive him away with the way she is (You know of what I speak...). So yes she does need to look after herself.

I think Leah is used to being the one in the good relationship and getting all the positive attention, and it doesn't sit well that Bella is getting treated better than her at the moment. I don't think she is vindictive or even really consious of what she is doing perhaps.

I hate Tanya. In all forms. She needs to have a meteor land on her accidently on purpose. Enough said.

Hanging out for next chapter.

Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I am still totally in love with this story, it is just wonderful.  I love the whole way it is developing, the submission and dominance growing, the mystery and intrigue eating away and the way each character spring to life (good and bad).  You have done such a wonderful job, and it really is something I look forward to when it updates.  Thankyou so much...



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

Totally addicted to this fic, just love they way you are writing it and was so excited to see the update today! I would love to see Edward and Bella fall in love, and for her to ask him to make love to her, at some point. Not sure if that is appropriate with your plot plans at all, but I do hope for a HEA for these two. I would so love to see vampire Bella kick Tanya's butt!

Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48041
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On

This is a great story, can't wait for it to become more than one chapter. Thankyou.



Author's Response:

I am almost done writign chapter 2 and I will send it off to my Beta right away.  So maybe another week at the most but I am hoping sooner.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend

I really loved this chapter. This is turning out to be a very good fic so far.  I like that what happens between them physically is not so much the obvious. I mean, even within such a structured relationship there must be give and take, and I was worried that Bella would turn him out of the house after giving him his fastasy.  I am glad she didn't, there is always different tones within every relationship.  I am hoping that love develops between these two, maybe a baby or two and lots of sexy lemons. I think that this is acheivable between two people in this situation. In fact I think more so  because the roles of each are so well defined and out of necessity the lines of communication are wide open.  Anyway enough of the longest review evah!  Look forward to next chapter. Thanks guys.



Author's Response:

I am very happy to hear from you on your feelings of this fan fic.  I have worked very hard on it, and if not for the great support system of my beta and my pre-readers I am not sure I woudl have enough confidence to put this out here.  I really have been doing a lot of research because the last thing I want is to put out a story that paints the bdsm lifestyle in a bad light. 

My goal for them is to have them in a relationship, it is an edward and bella story....with that said there will be factors they have to over come and yet I will not let Bella be a soft submissive in any way shape or form.  She will remain the domme that is one thing I am dead set on.  I really want that to be the one certain in the book over all.  I do nto have the ending in my head yet, nor do I have the middle for that part.  Right now I have a general Idea of what I woudl liek to do and I am shooting straight from the hip other then that.

Thank you for the story love and reading and reviewing it too.  Reviews mean the world to me and I hope to hear from you again after the next chapter has posted.

Thanks,

Kasi~

Reviewer: cantsleep Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene

I am really enjoying your story, it is really well written and the characters have depth to them. The plot will thicken I am sure as we go along, and I am really looking forward to the chapters to come (no pun intended lol)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the wonderful review.  I am grateful for your kind words!

Thanks for reading and reviewing nad the next chapter will be the background info we all have been waiting for.

Kasi~