Reviews by dearjae
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

Great chapter!  I had thought you had given up on this story, hope we don't have to wait too long to see how Edward saves poor Bella!

 

Well done!



Author's Response:

hey sorry for the late reply, thank you for the review and I would never give up on this story :) thank you so much xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god!  Nice long, beautiful chapter.  Dark, funny, sweet.  Love it!  Can't wait to keep reading!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you!  I love when someone new checks in on chapter one.  So much fun to come!  I hope you continue to like it!  Initialy was just going to be a one shot but the response was too amazing not to continue.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I've never watched Buffy, so this chapter was a little long....  But I could see why you wanted to introduce the alternatives, just way too much Buffy and Angel info.



Author's Response:

Hmmm well this is actually my favorite chapter but I suppose if you don't know what I'm talking about you'd be less interested.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter!  Love Edwards thoughts and love his conversations with Bella!



Author's Response:

Haha thanks, his mind is a fun place to play in.  He and Bella are moving right along :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter, wow, this has quickly become one of my favorites!



Author's Response:

Thank you, so glad you're liking it ;)  I love Smugward very much!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That Bella is fierce!  Good Chapter!



Author's Response:

Haha she's definitely not the biddable angel he imagined :)  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Again, way too much detail about a show that I don't watch, but other than that great chapter!



Author's Response:

Sorry, but you know, neither does he and that's why the detail is there.  His reaction to it is what makes it work, in my opinion, whether you watch or not.  But to each their own!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interview With The Vampire

very unique and interesting chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I like to think this story is a bit different :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, I like very much where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope you continue to do so.  I have a lot of fun with these two ;)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Past Outtake

Amazing chapter after amazing chapter!  Great interaction between Bella and Edward, great smut, and I love Edwards personality in this story!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  His personality is so much fun and I love writing him.  He and B are coming along very well and the sexy times are finally happening.  Thanks for reading and reviewing so much, love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

FS


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, great chapter.  Man, I love how good Jasper is for Bella!  He's so dreamy in your story!



Author's Response:

Giggle, for a while, I actually tried to make him not so perfect, but I just couldn't give him any major flaws!  I give up, it's a work of fiction, he can be the perfect man, lol!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Another amazing chapter!  Great action, great drama, great love!  This is so my favorite story and I can wait to read more!



Author's Response:

What a compliment!!  Thanks so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

another fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

aHHHHH, someone's prego!!  Can't wait till they find out!



Author's Response:

It could be something else, too! But we'll find out in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

Very nice chapter!  I'm so excited that they are having a baby!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Great story!  Can't wait to see where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I am really happy that people are starting to read it. :)  Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Very good chapter!  Good lemon and it was good to get the other perspectives.  



Author's Response:

Thank You, I'm glad you liked the lemon. I could see it in my minds eye, but getting it from there onto paper, I just can't seem to do that yet. Someday though, I think it will just click for me and I'll be able to write it a little more sexy. Thanks for taking the time to review this story for me. I have so many idea's for it and I am still searching for more. Have a good one, Diane.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

so I read chapter 11 on ff, excellent!  Very well written and I love the dynamics between her and Jasper, the constant power struggle, very good writing and I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank You so much. To be honest I enjoyed writing that chapter a little to much...lol. Thanks for the reading and reviewing for me. :) I hope to hear from you every chapter.

-Diane

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Great development!  I can't wait to see what happens...



Author's Response:

Thanks Dearjae, I'm trying to move it along a little faster so we can get to some interesting stuff. Thanks for reviewing for me, I really do appreciate it! Take Care, Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42787
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help

Wow, Great Story!!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!  i'm glad you're enjoying it!!  ;)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  i'm glad you liked it!  and you're my 100th reviewer on this site!!  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Volturri have departed and life goes on for the Cullens and the pack. Renesme is growing up and Jacob is growing deeper and deeper in love. Their love is magical, but how with the magical world respond to it. What happens when Nahuel returns to fight for his percieved destiny? And can the Volturi survive a betrayal and a parting that will ally some with the Cullens and make others forever their enemies?

 I have the best Beta- daring2believe...You rock girl!

Thank you Moonlit-Dreams for the amazing banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50993 Read Count: 2294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Sunshine Can Burn-Chapter 12

Great story!  Can't wait to see what happens!  Love the voice you gave Nessie and you did a great job of capturing the other's characters true to the original story.  Well written and can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It is my first attempt at fan fic and I am really glad people are responding favoribly.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Relationship advice-Chapter 15

More good story!  More, more, more!



Author's Response:

It will be coming soon, I promise.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Kisses and Committments-Chapter 16

Very yummy chapter!  Can't wait to see it play out some more!  Well done!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Where-so-ever I May Go-Chapter 17

Wow, what a good chapter!  I can't believe he got Ness, can't wait to see how/if they rescue her!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Heart Knows-Chapter 18

I like that Jane is softening... I can't wait for Jake to rescue her!  Well done!



Author's Response:

familial love will do that to you.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blood and Fear-Chapter 19

Great chapter!  More!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Another chapter will be up soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Preface: Renesmee Cullen is a typical junior in college visiting her grandfather Charlie Swan on Spring Break. At a Forks diner one night, she meets her mother's high school friend Jacob Black, owner of a local garage and the new Chief of the Quileute tribe. The events that follow soon thrust her into a world of the unknown—a world of danger, mystery, and ultimate tragedy as she and Jacob race to unearth secrets of the past before it's too late.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73300 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Oct 2010
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: It Happened One Night

Like the voice you gave Ness.  Jacob seems steamy still, thank goodness!  Action right of the gate!  Can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you like Ness, and I've always been one for action.  No stalling; let's get to the good stuff. :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Black Car

Love the interaction between Ness and Charlie.  Wow, great chemistry between her and Jake!  Good work, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Their connection is very strong, similar to Edward & Bella's. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Violent Ends

Wow, what a twist, can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

LOL, just to warn you, it's gets crazier! Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Say Goodnight

more good drama!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dreamcatcher

Oh my!  Poor Jacob!  Man, I would never break his heart!  Can't wait to see...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I wouldn't either. LOL Thanks for reading all the chapters and responding! I appreciate it so much. :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Need

Very good smut!  Love the way the story is progressing!  Can't wait to read more....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, dearjae! :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Afterglow

WOW!  I can't wait to see what happens!  Great story, excellent chemistry between Jacob and Ness.



Author's Response:

LOL, I know. Sorry for the cliffie. I should update in a couple of days. ;)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Revelations

Oh my goodness!  What now!!!!  Who is stalking them!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, dearjae! More to come soon. ;)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Only Fools Rush In

Wow, I love the story, love the smut, love the humor!  Great Job on this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, dearjae! I love hearing what you have to say. ;)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Storm and the Calm

OH MY GOODNESS!  What the heck happened?  I hope the next chapter will be posted soon!



Author's Response:

Someone's been very bad. LOL Thanks for reading! I love hearing your thoughts. Update tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Interrogations

Wow, good stuff!  Can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Should post again tomorrow. I have 2 more completed chapters, and then I'll have to get myself to writing! LOL Thanks!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Mea Culpa

Wow!  Great chapter!  You do a good job of keeping the story moving, but also keeping it suspensful.  Sometimes people dwell on something too long or they will brush over one suspense after another.  You find a good balance.  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliments! It's great to hear I find a good balance; I try my best. LOL Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: One Step Closer

Well, another great chapter!!  I love that you write nice, long chapters that have lots of "meat" to them.  Its so frustrating to read stories that you have to wait and wait for and then its just like 5 paragraphs.  Also, you are so good with the lemons!  But on top of that, it is a great story, well written, great characters!  Well done!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, dearjae! I really love hearing your thoughts. You are definitely making me blush here.  I appreciate you taking the time out to leave me a little love after each chapter. They mean a lot to me. :))

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Theories

Love the tender love scene, wish it had been a little longer, more detailed...

Great job progressing the story and I love Jacob and Nessie's relationship, can't wait to read more and can't wait to see who the mystery person is and what they want!



Author's Response:

Thanks, dearjae! Hope you got the outtake from the last chapter. :)  I'm glad you liked the love scene...I thought it would be more tender not to go into too much detail. We'll find out who the mystery person is soon! :)

Summary:

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"Boop! Bella's preggers!" Emmett said. "And guess whose the father?" Rosalie continued. "Edward Cullen!" Alice yelled. How could this day get any worse? Edward Cullen stalked toward us a harsh glare on his face.

Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan absolutely hate eachother. What will happen in this comedy? Can love find a way? What happens when the worst tears everything apart? Love is stronger than hate my friends but can it pull through the worst of life?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52328 Read Count: 15446
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Aug 2010
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The World Came Crashing Down

Poor Bella, hope he remembers soon!  Great Job!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: That's Worth Fighting For

Yeah! He's gonna love her again!  I can feel it in my bones!  Emmett is so funny.  Another great chapter!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chivalry In Retirement

Good, good, good!  More!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Light at the end of the Tunnel

Great chapter, glad he's finally starting to come around!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Remember Me

Awww, poor Edward.  I know this is hard on Bella, but he's doing so good, she needs to cut him a little slack!  

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Drastic Measures

What a cute chapter!  I loved him trying to climb in her window!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Friends

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  They were making progress!  No space!  No time!  They just need each other!  You're killing me, but great story, great twist.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: A New Beginning

very good chapter, but I hate that they can't seem to get on the same page.  Poor guys, this must be hard for them!

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Author's Note (Sequel Name in Note!!!!)

I really enjoyed this story, but kind of disappointed that it is ending like this.  Very anti-clamatic.  I will read the sequel I guess, and see what happens.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Really really like this!  Good smut, but also a really good story so far!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I will continue to merge the two (smut and a story) I have it planned so it will be a happy medium. I hope you continue to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Very nice!  Love it and can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so glad you love it! Next chapter is almost done. Please feel free to tell me you thoughts.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Great chapter!  I love how Edward is so obsessed with Bella.  He may be the dom, and she may not know it, but she is really in control!



Author's Response:

Thank you! If you love obsessiveward than you are going to love possessiveward, I have always felt a submissive had all the control. they are the ones who can stop a scene with just one word. a subissives needs must always be meet and cared for first. If there were no submissives there would be no Doms. I am so happy you saw what i was trying to convey. I hope you continue to follow our adventure to their self discovery. Thank you!