Reviews by Lostin Pa
Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26669
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

Christ, what a ride!  Loved every word.  They are all so screwed up in their own way!  Thanks for sharing this with us.  I am hoping that you find a way to bring them back and continue it for another chapter or three!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So glad you found a new home for your story! I was (am) really annoyed first with the shrew that reported it and then with FFn for pulling it. You are a great writer and this is a really interesting story with many twists and turns. Looking forward as you unfold them for us. Thanks for finding a new home so quickly when you could have just given up. Looking forward to your getting caught up with the story in it's new home and the the new chapters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi!

I think I thought I reviewed, but now I'm not so sure.  Anyway, at risk of repeating myself...thanks for the response to my review on FFn (I'm LostInPa there).  I really enjoyed the first chapter and am so happy that you are continuing the story.  Looking forward to seeing where you take us!

'Till July 1st then...bye for now,

Karen



Author's Response:

Thanks Karen. Here we go!

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Hello,

I get your updates.  I have as a favorite in both author and story.  But you dont need to add the author to favorites to get the story alerts.  Adding just author to favorites will only get you notification of the first chapter of a new story, to get story updates, you have to add story to favorites.  If you just want story alerts, you can just add story to favorites.  

Make sure folks know that on this site, after you hit the add story and/or author to favorites, they have to hit the "Submit" button under the white block.  If you don't do that, the request to add doesn't take effect.  Folks can check to make sure that the story was added under the My Account function.

Hope this helps.  Looking forward to next update!

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Poor Emmett!  I can't wait to hear R's reaction!  Love the story, look forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and the pic is great!  I was wondering which one you would use :-)

Bye for now!

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 221: Chapter 221

Wow Noc!  Another great chapter!  So awesome that he got into it so fast.  Does this mean that they are going to be switches now or will this just be a one off with just an occasional switch?  Oh!  And it was mentioned in the story that at one time Rosalie was a Domme, was Emmett ever a sub, other than possibly in training, or has he always been a Dom?  Thanks!  (and if that was answered in the story, I missed it and I apologize!)



Author's Response:

It wasnt answered in the story. I've been working on my prequel for Midnight Caller, which is the backstory of Emmett, Rosalie, Carlisle Esme and Alice and Jaser. Rose was a Domme. Emmett was always a Domme, but he's had Alice Domme him in the past remember? As for the future, Rose may Top him occasionally, but they are definitely going to keep their roles. The next chapter explains a bit more.

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

Ohmygod Noc!  That first gif?  Stunning, love it, love the where the story is going!

 

K

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

Another great chapter Noc!  It didn't even occur to me that the florist was someone E knew, it makes sense though.  Lucky escape for Billy huh, he was kicreed creepy.  Lilacs are my favorite flower, they are so pretty and fragrant, I could see in my mind as the tiny flowers showered down on her.  Looking forward to the next chapter!  

Bye for now,

K

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 260: Chapter 260

Rut-ro, who's in trouble now....no Christmas pudding for Bella!  Shoulda, woulda, coulda safe worded :)

Thanks for the update!

Karen



Author's Response:

well, it turns out Edward will be a bit distracted by the fact that she's not moving now to really care about a punishment :)

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Awwww, I love where you left them Noc!  Thanks for the ride, it was so much fun and I look forward to future offerings of MC!

Ttyl...karen

Summary:

A Domme picks up her submissive at the airport. Driven crazy with lust, the Domme has the driver pull over so she can enjoy her little girl.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2240 Read Count: 113284
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2012
Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it Noc!  Kitten is a lucky girl to have such a good Mummy!

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am loving the pics!

Reviewer: KarenD Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice!  The driver is recording so they can enjoy it later, not to mention being watched!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94273
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: Lostin Pa Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show

And holy hell, she would take it! <3