Reviews by Sanecrist
Summary:

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When Bella, an experienced Domme, agrees to meet a wounded Sub, she doesn't know how much he'll change her life.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 187626 Read Count: 43033
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2021 Updated: 30 Jul 2022
Reviewer: Sanecrist Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Every chapter makes Bella less redeemable. She wants to waltz in, complain about every thing Charle has done for her and whine that Riley doesn't wear and eat what she finds acceptable? Every time Edward makes a true statement she can't handle, she calls him a brat and threatens to spank him. How's that going to work for Riley? You can't throw a small town kid that's enjoyed the bachelor lifestyle into a big city with a psycho loveless mother. If Bella wanted to help, she'd write a monthly check, fly in every other month, NOT uproot him and force him to live in the playhouse.