Reviews by Rayday
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171160
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your first chapter, though I'm a bit worried about all of the things that Bella had to endure having Renee as her mom.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm glad everyone attempted to put Rose in her place. She really needs to work on her foot-in-mouth disorder.

Edward was soooo cute w/ Bella. You can see his protective side come out when it comes to Bella.

I'm really worried about what exactly Renee did to Bella. I hope she finds someone she can confide in.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You are doing a wonderful job with this story...I am almost scared to find out what Bella went through. I just hope she can heal....

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so glad that Rosalie came in and rescued Bella.

This is a wonderful story.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no....don't tell me Phil's team is playing at the game they are all going to...I'm probably wrong but I just feel like it would have to be something like this.

Great Story!!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope they get to her in time...talk about suspense.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so glad that Charlie shot Phil and Edward got some good blows in on him too. I hope Bella will be okay after all of this.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay!!!! Hopefully she stays in prison for the full amount of time.

I'm excited to see how Edward and Jasper ask the dad's for permission to date their daughters. I can see that being quite funny.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was a wonderfully romantic date....Awesome!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You just gotta love Charlie...he's the perfect father for Bella to have, especially after having Renee as a mother. I hope she call call him Dad soon. Maybe even tell him, she loves him.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Me thinks the culprit is Vicky.....I hope we find out for sure soon.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Okay...I was completely and absolutely wrong about Vicky. I had almost forgotten about Tanya, but to get that little tidbit that she is the sister of Renee. Talk about WOW. I would never in a million years have even considered that to be a possibility, though now that I go back and look at her behavior and it's similarity to Renee, I probably should have seen it.

Great story!!!!! I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Something tells me that Renee tricked him. That she hid her real age from Charlie. I hope he doesn't get into trouble over that.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope that Bella will be okay, and that everything regarding Tanya and Renee come to an end. This family needs some peace. I can only imagine what Edward is going to think when he finds out who Tanya is....I'm anxiously awaiting for more.

GREAT STORY!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I loved the most recent chapter and am so glad that Bella seems to be doing better. I'm glad that Liz spoke to all three of them.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I can only imagine who the sex talk is going to go between Bella and Charlie. This shoudl be really interesting. I loved the gift Rosalie gave to Bella, and I'm very curious to know who the Mystery POV was.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow...I didn't see that one coming. I really liked this chapter and loved how Bella caught the biggest fish. I also found it hysterical how Emmett caught is one and only fish.

I look forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I liked how she was willing to try and protect her dad. I hope she can have a relationship w/ her Grandfather, Uncle/Aunt and Cousin/Sister. It would be good for her to know that there were some goodness on her mom's side of the family.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I really liked this chapter. The Mike Newton part was hysterical...the poor boy. I also really liked the part w/ Jasper and his car jack. It was good comic relief during a difficult time.

Great job.:)

Summary:

This is the story of Edward and Bella's night after their wedding. Lemon. ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1828 Read Count: 217
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story.

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter. I absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love that he is trying to workout w/ Bella and I hope his plans get made for Seattle. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it...I'm so glad that Edward found the confidence to defend Bella against Jacob Black.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  :-)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really liked your chapter and thought the moments with Charlie and Carlisle were hysterical. Who was in the library? And is Bella going to believe that it was not what Edward wanted?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  Glad you enjoyed the stuff with the Dads.  All will be revealed in the next chapter.  :-)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think it's a great idea that Edward is going to be doing the Peer Leadership Class down in LaPush.

Great chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  Glad you have faith in Edward. :-)  Thanks again!

 

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved the chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Very awesome chapter. I loved it...it's quite funny to read Edward's mind going a bit out of control at times. He needs to learn to relax a little more. Bella's not going to run away on him.

 



Author's Response:

LOL...blame Edward's mind going nuts on me...I don't know what was going on last chapter.  The references were out of control, LOL.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks again!  :-)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter. I absolutely loved the awkwardness/embarrassment with Edward and his dad. It was very cute.

I hope that Edward can make difference in his class down in La Push. Hopefully the bullying will stop.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297471
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

I've been reading this story on Twilighted and thought I would see if I could find this story on here as well. I was extremely happy to find it here and can't wait to keep reading the chapters you have posted. I love the story and absolutely loved the Jessica situation in this chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

It is so sad that Emily had ALS. That's an awful disease, I have known two people who haved died of that, but they had had a chance to live long, happy lives. To get it at such a young age is heartbreaking.

I was quite surprised by them seeing James....I found it funny that he referred to Bella as being the girl Edward always watched. Did he know how Edward really felt about her?



Author's Response:

Two people? I can't even imagine to go through that. It was hard enough with one..

Yes, James knew Edward had something for Bella.

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

I understand why Bella wants to tell him in  person, but I have to admit I feel bad for Edward. I loved the chapter and I love your story.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Jane???? As in Sam's, Jane? This should be really interesting. Love it, can't wait to read the next chapter, which I'm going to get started on right now!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?

Awesome chapter...I'm so glad they were finally able to move into their house. I'm nervous about Renee's reaction to Bella being pregnant. Also nervous about when Bella tells Rose and Alice about where the name Emily comes from, but excited about Charlie and Sue finding out the name of the baby.

I love your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

Will Edward ever find out about the special dinner Bella had made for him that night he went out with the boys?

I hope that Alice and Rosalie don't get mad at Bella for taking so long to tell them about the loss of her friend.

I'm excited to read more and can hardly wait for next Sunday's update.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful

I was shocked to find out the Emma was Jessica's daughter. That poor girl.

I'm glad Edward went to sleep w/ Bella. I find that rule of the bride & groom being a part the night before the wedding, especially when they are all ready married quite ridiculous. I can only guess that they will get caught and the rath of Alice will come down on them.

I loved the chapter and look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

I remember braxton hicks contractions...they weren't too bad, but I can understand that if you didn't know about them you could be surprised.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

Is she in labor? I'm excited to find out what happens in the next chapter.

I loved the wedding and am glad they were able to have this renewal of their vows w/ their friends and family there to see it.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

I'm curious what her actual eye color will be.

 

Great Chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own

Great chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy

Great chapter. I liked how Bella called him out during their little argument. I know it's just part of his personality, but Edward just needs to calm down and stop being so overbearing about what he thinks isn't safe. It's not good for any of them and will only cause him grief w/ Bella.

I'm excited to find out what has been bothering Alice so much. 

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time

Great chapter!!!

I'm so glad that Alice finally talked to Rose and Bella.

The date/night away b/t Edward and Bella was perfect.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day

Loved the chapter and am so glad that Masen is finally there.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

I absolutely loved the chapter. i felt bad for Jared, but found it hysterical at how Edward was acting. I'm glad they were finally able to have a third baby. They seem like a wonderful family.

Great chapter . I Loved the Story.

Summary:

 

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Edward suprises his ex with a vist on Christmas Eve. What will Bella think when Edward gets off the plane and not Alice? AH/AU *One shot, well, minific. LOL.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 629 Read Count: 1740
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this, I just wish it was longer.....  GREAT JOB!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42757
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken

Who is in the house? Are there really car lights coming towards the house? If so who could it be? Are they in danger? Is James going to make a move while they are out of town for Edward's surgery?

 



Author's Response:

the mystery house guest will be revealed soon.  yes, there really were car lights coming toward the house, but no i won't say who they belonged to.  and as for your last question... that's a very good thought.  :)  sorry i couldn't be more direct. plot twists, you know.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

Very good chapter...I think Bella may find herself in some trouble when it comes to Edward. I love the relationship between Emmett and Bella.



Author's Response:

thank you very much!  bella and edward will be getting into some trouble later on.  thank you so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Hiding

You have done a very good job on your story so far and I'm excited to read what happens when Dr. Whitlock and his son come to town.



Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're enjoying my little story.  thank you so much for your reviews, and all kinds of fun stuff will happen when our new additions come to Forks!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

Is Riley w/ James? Are Edward, Jacob, Emmett or Jasper going to get to Bella before she is forced to leave? I hope you have the chance to update again soon.



Author's Response:

james always seems to be connected, doesn't he?  we'll find out what happened to bella next chapter.  i plan to update friday or saturday.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped

What is up with Aro? I don't trust him, and i think he may have ulterior motives with all of this.

I hope that Jake is okay and that they find out what happened to Riley and the driver. Was the driver, James?

Great story.



Author's Response:

ah, yes.  aro is starting to be a creepster, too.  the driver and fate of jake will be revealed next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!  ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information

I'm anxious to find out Edward's past so that all these questions about him that have been coming up in your story can be answered. I'm glad that Bella was finally able to tell somebody about everything that happened to her and Emmett. I hope this helps her heal.



Author's Response:

we will find out very shortly all about edward.  bella telling edward her past is huge for her recovery.  it definitely helps her healing process.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe

I have a lot of thoughts so please bare w/ me. (I know it's probably annoying).

I hope that Emmett is going to be okay

I am really relieved/happy that Sam was their to rescue them. Though we don't yet know if they are completely out of danger, they still need to worry about Aro.

I hope Alice will be okay from the trauma she experienced. I think Bella was coping w/ all of this better because she's been through it before, but that doesn't mean she won't have some form of PTSD to deal w/.

I can only imagine what Edward is going to think/feel when he finds out what happened.

Great chapter. I know it's long....sorry.



Author's Response:

never be afraid to write down all your thoughts!  i love hearing all of them.  the longer the better!  emmett will be fine with time, and we'll find out more about aro and his stinky ways next chapter.  everyone will be going through a little therapy after that.  it's been a rough ride and they definitely need someone to talk to.  we'll also find out what edward thinks about all this coming up next!  i'm so glad you liked the chapter, and i always love reading what you think!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

So absolutely cool!!! Well, in regards to who his doctors are, not the tumor. Definitely not the tumor. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response:

lol!  love the rambling!  yes, it is cool that the doctors are connected to everyone.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Complications

Oh no. Who was there? What is going to happen? Are they going to hurt Jacob and Alice, then take Bella and Emmett? I hope you have a chance to update again soon.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

you have very good questions that will be answered soon.  next chapter is in the works!  hang in there!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

Unbelievable....Bella can definitely think in an extremely dangerous situation. I'm so glad that she was able to get rid of James. I hope that it was the good guys who made it to the hotel room. I hope you have the chance to update again soon.



Author's Response:

bella has grown so much.  she really was able to keep a straight head during this situation, and it saved them.  help is on the way!  hang in there... i do hope to update soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

AU set in the New Moon time frame.

Edward has his reasons for leaving after the birthday incident.

He expects the family to start packing, but Alice stands up to him and says: NO.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15555 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I absolutely loved the voicemail message that Alice left and wish I could hear what Rosalie says......  I LOVED IT!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Rayday!

LOL...Edward had listened to the message from Alice and when he answer the phone when Rose called, all he gave her time for was to answer the question:  Is it true (about Victoria)...

When she said:  YES...

He then began his run toward Forks...and Bella...

Kathie

 

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have really enjoyed your story and can't wait to finds out next w/ Edward back.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rayday!  I appreciate that!

Kathie

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

I loved your story...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Rayday, I appreciate that!

Kathie

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

Banner made by Moonlit-Wishes

 

This Banner is for the out-take that is now posted here as the final chapter. 

Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55085
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: 43 Days and Counting

I don't know if it is just a prejudice towards the character James in Twilight and the ffics I have read, but I don't trust the guy and think he is going to be trouble for Bella.

Great chapter...Alice and Rose really have a way to force her to shop.



Author's Response:

James is one of the few characters that I do nto like from the Twilight series.  I wanted to make him be a creep but not the stalker it is too typical you know???  I like that fact that my story makes you think and gives you suspense.  Thanks for reading hope to hear more from you soon! I will more sometime soon!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting

Okay, I know it's going to drive me nuts not knowing who the stalker is. I keep trying to think of who it may be. Is it a new character? Or is it a character from the Twilight series? I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out.

Great story.



Author's Response:

It is for sure a character from the twilight series.  Thanks for the story love, another chapter will post soon!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting

Poor Bella...They must all be terified. I can only imagine what Charlie is going to do when he finds out.



Author's Response:

I love Charlie I think he is cool and kick ass too!  More to come soon, and thanks for the story love and reviews!  YAY!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: 40 Days and Counting

AWWW. I think Rose felt a connection....could it be love???



Author's Response:

All three girls fall hard and fast for their guys.  Just like in the book!  I love them they are all so cute together.  Thanks for the story love!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Moving Day

So what is Tyler's other identity???



Author's Response:

Maybe he is not really Tyler....??

When I started writing this story I was determinded to not give out to many clues, so I did not even decide who the stalker was for sure.  I had a few people in mind and kinda wrote it from there.  I did at a point decide that the one person was the stalker.  I chose him mainly because I really dislike his voice in one of the movies for twilight.  LOL  Thanks agai for the story love and I hope to hear from you more!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed

I hope they realize she's been taken before he gets too far from her. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you for the story love I am really greatful for the reviews too!  the story gets creepy for a couple of chapters then it will get better, he finally got his hands on her.  Spooky for sure.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Waking Up

Who is the stalker??? I'm going nuts trying to figure this out. Please update again really soon.



Author's Response:

I will update in the next few days and thank you for reading and really thanks for the review they mean a lot to me!!!  a whole lot.  You will find out the ID of the stalker soon, but there is much more story to unravel.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Find Me Please

Please let them get the signal from her bracelett...

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing and next update will be on or by wed.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Captured Man

For the life of me I can figure out who the stalker is... There are too many possibilities.

I'm glad that Edward is there for Bella. That should help with ther emotional healing.



Author's Response:

He is one of five but one of those five is dead for sure so one of four.  You will find out next chapter who that evil stalker is that creeps us all out!

 

Thanks for reading and for reviewing.

Kasi~

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy

Alec was a very busy boy, wasn't he? I hope he pays dearly for everything that he did. I can only imagine what Bella, Edward and Charlie were going through during the telling of Alec's story. Will we find out?

I'm excited to read your next update.



Author's Response:

Alec was a bad bad boy!  There is a lot more story to come, and you may or may not have heard the end of Alec anyway.  He does have a POV coming up in a later chapter.  right now I am writing chapter 30 so there is quite a bit to go yet.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Formal Night

I can't wait to find out what Bella's answer is going to be. Is Alec going to be making another appearance soon?



Author's Response:

both your questions will be answered with in a few chapters but you will have the answer to one soon and then I am sure more questions will end up following that.  I have 33 chapters written so we got a few to go yet.  I will not drag this into the ground though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

MFBR Banner

28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61816
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I completely understand how you can both love and hate facebook...all I do is waste time on it. Nothing productive, whatsoever.

I loved this chapter and am intrigued to find out how their relationship my develop.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really hope Jacob isn't too much of an annoyance. 

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the coffee date....so cute!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really nervous about what James did to Bella...I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is Sophie, Bella's daughter? Great chapter, I'm excited to read her friends reactions when they find out who it is...

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So sad...I really hope that Edward isn't too mad at her about keeping this from him. I would hate to think what that would do to her if he left.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all your reviews. I hope you're enjoying the story. xx

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm so glad that Edward reacted that way...so caring, so loving. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

My guess would be James, but I'm sure I'm wrong...

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Is Kate going to cause problems? Is Emmett going to be okay? Is James gone now or will he be back to torment? Good chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh great...I have a feeling that we are on our way to a very trying triangle. I just hope Edward stays true to his relationship w/ Bella. I would hate for her to get hurt, again.

I really like your story.:)

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope Edward really lets into Tanya....Did Kate know anything about Tanya's little game? I really hope not. 

Is Bella okay? Or is she just missing Edward? I hope nothing has happened or that she believed Tanya.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I really hope that Edward lets Tanya have it. That little stunt Tanya pulled is definitely not something Bella should have had to deal w/.

 

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't believe Tanya could actually be like that. Then to add to it that she knew all a long about some of the Lauren, James and Bella issue just makes it that much worse.

Great Chapter!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so glad he's finally home and w/ Bella. Great Chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can only imagine what Edward's reaction is going to be....I hope you have the chance to update again soon.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Will she say yes? I hope so. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh no!!! Who on earth is that?

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awesome chapter. I'm glad they didn't let Jacob ruin their evening.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh NO!!!!! I hope Bella and her students are safe. I hope nothing happens to her and Edward's baby.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I really hope they are all okay. I can only assume it's James and I hope something really vile happens to him.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Crap!!!! Was Jake killed? Did someone else come in to help? I hope Bella and Jake are okay.

Great Chapter. Oh, and I hope Edward strangles Tanya's crazy neck.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm glad Bella is okay and I'm hoping Jakes operation goes okay. Great chatper.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I'm glad the baby is okay, that Jake seems to be on the mend and that they may get married the next day. I'm anxious to find out what Edward does when he finds out everything that Tanya and James had planned. What will he say to ther family?

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

What's w/ Alice? Why is she calling Charlie about the wedding? Shouldn't she have let Bella take care of that herself. I really liked the chapter and can only imagine what Esme will say when she finds out about the wedding.

Summary:

wlahc

Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27215
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality

I'm glad there together...though I can't believe he kissed Tanya.

I hope you get to update again soon.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Life from a new perspective

I believe that Alice will get her way on the Halloween costume. If she does, I can only imagine the possiblities.

Great chapter...

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Party

That was a very good chapter. It makes me really curious to know why Bella is so uncomfortable around people and her fear of spending the night at someone's place. Did something happen? Also any other reason as to why Jake and Edward are always teasing her about sex? Is Jake going to have enough time to avoid an accident on the motorcycle?

I hope you have the chance to update again really soon.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Life as we knew it

I can see that Bella blames herself and Edward blames himself. I hope they will be able to work through their pain together.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Could it be any harder?

I feel so bad for Bella and Edward. How was did Edward feel when he saw Bella break down in the garage? Is that what provoked him to come to her room? Is he going to keep his promise to Jake.

I didn't recognize the quote...or if I did I was too absorbed in the story to notice...sorry.

Love the story, can't wait to find out with the shopping trip and discovering the new Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you. New Bella might appear in the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Girl

I can see little changes in Bella...I loved what she said to Lauren and I really do hope that she becomes friends w/ Alcie and Rosalie. She deserves to have friends.

Great Chapter...I look forward to next weeks update.



Author's Response:

We'll see if she can trust the girls enough. I know I would have problems with that ^^

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Catching snails

The end almost sounds like a variation on Dr. Seus; it made me think of green eggs and ham....sorry I got off track with my review there.

I love the bantering that they have and can only imagine that their supposedly dislike for each other is only because they refuse to be honest about their real feelings. I'm curious to know what Edward's reaction was when Bella got out of her jeans. And I can't wait to find out if Bella goes to Alice's planned Halloween Party at Edward's house.

I will anxiously await for the next update. Love it!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Black Angel

I loved the entire chapter...Great job. I'm curious what Edward will think when he wakes up and Bella isn't there.

I hope you have the chance to update again soon.