Reviews by bullnala
Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the Tanya twist.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Accident

This is so sad.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

I love this story and eagerly await each chapter but I understand it is a long process to the translation. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comprehension and your patience :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by IllictWriter

 

The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

I love this!!  This would have to be one of the most creative ways to post a chapter i've ever seen.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324370
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Edward really has no idea about real life does he. Or how to put someone else first.

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

He is really starting to piss me off. He has absolutley no redeeming qualities at this point. I hope Bella bitch slaps him and tells him to fuck off.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm sorry but things like Kedergree are what give people the impression that English food is nasty. Maybe if you said you ate it for lunch it might be a smidge better, but how on earth do you stomach smoked fish in the morning?

I love, love, love Lauren by the way.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Drag it out for as long as you can. I love reading from Edwards POV so I would love to see the whole progression from his side. Phone calls included.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Nice!!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

I am loving Edwards POV.  It's hot as hell.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

I don't get any email updates for any stories. I've tried everything to get the alerts to work but I've given up so I just check in every couple of hours to check what has been updated (gotta love mobile internet).

 

I am loving this story and look forward to it every day.

Do you think Tanya would set herself on fire if he asked?



Author's Response:

LMAO... in this fic, I'd love to have him tell her to do that, but I can't, and he wouldn't. He wouldn't abuse his power. Though we've seen the last of Tanya for quite a while.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Isn't bigger always better?

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I can't read Serving Mistress Jane because all I can picture is the guy from the movies that played Harry and it kinda turns me right off. Sorry.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

You know I love it, (Illusions)

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

That was...hot!!!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Yay!!!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

LMAO! If I could find a pic of that I would.

 

The Rebellion by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This was one of those sad nights since she left. But we were tired, we were ready to fight for her, it was time for a rebellion


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2595 Read Count: 480
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Rebellion

That was awesome (once i got the hang of it - it's past midnight and my brain is a bit mushy)



Author's Response:

THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW EVEN IN THEMIDDLE OF THE NIGHT :)

Black Hole by addict_writer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

New attitude. New job. New friend with benefits. What started out as casual takes on a whole new meaning when things twist and turn and sink into the abyss of reality. One big mistake changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121478 Read Count: 119273
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

How bout every day?  Actually no, then it's over too quick. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

Twilight characters in the Dead Like Me Universe.

Isabella Swan thought she could get away from the life that was planned for her. What she got was a death that would be repeated far more than she ever wanted. Saddled to follow around the one that killed her in the first place, she does her darnedest to make the most of her afterlife.

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Categories: Dead Like Me, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Dead Like Me Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66749 Read Count: 6527
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2013 Updated: 17 May 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The Story of Margaret Saunders

Noooooooooo!  What about Edward?  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26240 Read Count: 13810
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2013 Updated: 09 May 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait for what you girls write next. Even if it is half as good as this it will be awesome. Love the future glimpse too. 



Author's Response:

We certainly have more in store for you, so keep an eye out!  Thrilled that you enjoyed this story so much, especially the future glimpse.  We thought that was just perfect! 

Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really need to learn not to read these stories at work. My heart is breaking for these two. 



Author's Response:

Aww.  Yeah, it's definitely a rough point for them.  So glad you are connecting with them like that though.  We'll get them together, just give them some time to figure out what they need to do to get there.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Outtake

Oh you fantastic woman!  I could read outtake after outtake of these two!!  I'm off to Facebook to pimp you you out again. 



Author's Response:

Aww, so glad you enjoyed this brief outtake.  And thanks for the pimping on FB and the review!

too quiet by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tq

 

 

Banners made by MinaRivera.

Summary: Edward left to give Bella a better life. A life full of beautiful noise. This is what she was really left with.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 49542
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2013 Updated: 16 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ooh. She could keep jake around just to fuck with Edward. I always think he got off far too easy in New Moon. He needs a full mind fuck as punishment I believe. And where is the abandoning 'mother' Esme. (I have no issues at allllll with the good Cullens lol). 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ewww jake and Bella. Just no. And head as a bowling ball would be awesome. Or maybe she could throw it at Em's clueless head. And isn't this whole story kinda a tease? Isn't that the point. Maybe I'm getting it wrong but I like the tease factor, it makes me want to come back for more each time. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!  The tits were served!  Does Emmett have moobs? I can see him having moobs lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She's breaking my heart...

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh my fucking god lol. Edward is such a dumbass!  He may not have laid the hurt on him, but now I ope she runs likethe wind after she kicks him in the nads!  

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very cryptic. Very intriguing too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm dying to know who did it to her. I want to assume Victoria but there's that saying about assumptions....and if it was her, did she leave Charlie alive? Can't wait to read more, I'm a sucker for miserable Bella. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I say fuck em!  I will never understand why people feel the need to complain about a writing style. If its not for you move on. And if some people are saying its dragging then they have no idea about building a story or they don't like the thought of having to use their brain and actually think about a story instead of having it spoon fed to them. 

 

Cant wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really hope she can keep faith in Edward and Alice not knowing. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

New moon Edward was my fave too!!  His clothes in that were the best. And I'm not bored at all. I'm intrigued. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Where is she?????? I am dying to know where she is. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Your killing me!! But it's pleasant torture lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Sisters of the blonde persuasion? 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Jesus woman! The puzzle I was putting together just got flung off the board. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh man! I'd love to see Bella hand Rosalie her tits on a plate! 



Author's Response:

This made me laugh out loud. Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Is she going to get to pound anyone?  At the moment that's my focus lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay! Is Bella going to hand Rosalie her tits now? Please?  

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Woo hoo!!!   I'm doing the Carlton dance as we speak!  

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Tits are still intact I see lol. 



Author's Response:

Sorry, I know you wanted them removed, but we kind of still need them. Lol. ;)

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

People are weird. I've given up ever trying to understand them. You'll just hurt you're head trying to work out their motivation. Yeah the last chapter was a bit head hurting but as you said its not like they didn't have the last 25 chapters to get used to the style of the story. Sometimes I go back and re read a chap a few times because I feel like I've missed something and usually I have, not because of the way you've written it, but usually because I've not taken my time to read it properly because I'm so excited to have a new chapter. :)

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm here! But I have been slack and commenting on Facebook. So I will comment here today. Silly virginal boy. That's one thing I've never quite understood in the books. Vampires are supposed to be passionate and violently in love with their mates so he should have had her knickers round her ankles as soon as he realised he didn't want to eat her. Well her blood anyway lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

We don't have cherry flavoured Coke, a fact I am grateful for. 

Curve Ball is hands down one of the funniest stories I've ever read. 

And if a third category is available, the def humor should be added.

As usual, I'm loving this story too. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

It makes sense, perfect sense. They've all said empty sorrys that they think should earn them instant forgiveness. I've always thought Edward got off way to easy in New Moon but the rest of the family didn't even get an 'excuse me??' from Bella. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I like her thinking. But Alice is defective. Very very defective. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Why would anyone leave? And why did people hate Bella? I think she's been remarkably restrained lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Woo hoo!  Some tits are gunna fly. Burn those puppies one by one. Maybe Eddie can have one and Bella the other. And then you could make her a real fire crotch lol. 

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I love a snowball fight but my god Edward, bend a knee and ask!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Jake should go home. As much as he's been there for her, it's Edwards turn now. And jake can always visit. Emmett will need him so they can further their bromance. 

You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mine

 

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55655
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can't wait for an update to see what he does to Edward. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Some people have nothing better to do.  I'm loving this story, can't say I love Edward yet but that's a separate issue to liking a story. 

Summary:

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Summary: Jasper Whitlock left his home and everything he knew to reach for success. But can he find his way back to the top after losing everything he has worked for in one fell swoop? Sometimes, the road back leads to unexpected discoveries.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31116 Read Count: 2698
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2022 Updated: 28 Feb 2022
Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have a feeling Jasper is going to get his arse handed to him by Bella very soon. Snotty little shit. 



Author's Response:

Jasper will come down to earth soon. I promise. Thank you for taking the time to read The Road Back. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: bullnala Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He's still being a snot. I suppose that long living with Alice and her dads mindset might be hard to shake but he's still a twat. 



Author's Response:

Keep in mind he was with Alice for eight years. That'll permanently damage someone's mind. I think he'll be taught a very important lesson in humility soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes