Reviews by Jilly
Changes and Surprises by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30287
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Jilly Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So I just finished reading the story and I loved it. Great and powerful chapters, especially the last one. I think it's normal for them to react like that at first, because it isn't also easy to accept and I really liked how you described the emotions in this chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep on going!

Jilly

Reviewer: Jilly Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my god. So much has happened since I last read the story. I am still getting my head around all that has happened. Bella sleeping with James, then getting kidnapped and abused by Mike, Bella getting pregnant and Charlie ignoring her for choosing Carlisle.

I kind of had the idea that something like this was happening to Rosalie from one of the earlier chapters and I hope this will bring the others closer together again (Charlie - Carlisle - Bella).

I do hope that Bella will keep the baby no matter what the testresults say.

Jilly



Author's Response:

Thanks for lettign me know what you thougth of the chapter.  I'm glad that you are enjoying!!

 

Lisa