WOW! Poor Edward! Pride goeth before a fall, I believe. You've got some imagination!

Well! That was satisfying.  Worth the wait.  I sincerely hope the next chapter will be up faster since you are not on vacation any more.  I have about 20 stories I am following right now and you are at the top of my list so hopefully I will have something to read at least twice a month. 

Yeah! It was great! But, it has been 6 weeks and I am most anxious to see where we go from here.  It doesn't say "completed" so I figure you do plan to go forward with it.  I've never read anything quite like this. The characters are well fleshed out.  You show all the flaws as well as their pain.  Good Job!

I think Tanya & Esme are working together for their own agendas. Of course, each one believes they can attain their objective and still thwart the other in the end.  Evil knows no bounds. Be interesting to see how this pans out.

Well, that was satisfying.  I love a looooonnnng chapter. Just want to mention, however, that the word is not chocked. That rhymes with block! What you mean is choked; long "O" sound. You aren't the only one to do that, but it always stops me cold when reading. At least you don't use "shutter" when you mean "shudder". That one drives me nuts! I have also been known to "shudder".

Hi,

Well, I'm not really "Facebook literate" but I will try to navigate for David.  I will/am praying for his healing and full recovery.  May God keep him and his family "in the shadow of his wings".

I just found your update laaaate last night(early this AM). That was some chapter, let me tell you.  Don't want to sound ungrateful, but, does this early update for Joey's birth mean no update for today? Hate to appear greedy but I kept myself busy all week so I wouldn't haunt the web site(hence, no knowledge of the early update) I really need the next chapter today.  Oh, well, "It's life, Jim, But not as we know it".  I have to go get Mother up and ready for the beauty shop this morning.  My mother-in-law (age 85) has been doing her hair since 1960 I think. Go kiss Joey for me.  I had one, too, in 1972.  Precious Baby Mine!

I can't tell you how happy I am that I am still logged in at TWCS.  I have been unable to get the login to work on FF again.  It is so frustrating.  This is a great chapter and I am most anxious for chapter 23 but I have no idea when it is coming out or at which site.  I guess I will just have to play hop scotch until I find it.  I do hope one of them will have it Saturday at the latest.  I really start looking Friday just in case.  I love having two in one week.  But I know that won't last.  Nothing ever does, good or bad.  The "bad" just seems to last forever.  Hope everything is good where you are.  We have a bunch of birthdays coming up this month so things are starting to "hum" around here. Love this story!!

I am feeling much better now that Edward knows, however he is still the same old Edward who seems driven to shoot himself in the foot.   I don't know if I can stand the agony he is going to put Bella through with his craziness.  Can we at least get Jasper to slap him around a bit; knock some sense into him. Maybe just shake him til his teeth rattle!  I guess I will just have to wait until next Saturday to see how he manages this cluster-****!

I do love this story.  I can't write to you on FF because, as I think I told you before, I put in my e-mail and password and it tells me it is the wrong password.  No matter what I do, I can't seem to get thru their flappers.  So, I write from TWCS.  The best thing is TWCS is the first one to put up the new chapters.  WhooHoo!  The bad thing is if you write back to me, I don't know where to look for it unless it comes to my e-mail.  So, let me just say that I love what you're doing.  I just wish you were doing it twice a week.  (I'm soooo lonely!) just kidding.  See you next Saturday!