Reviews by MagdulkaCullen
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

Oh my... I feel so sorry for her... Good job with this chapter and whole story!

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Oh my God! Aro is a sick bastard and he's so disgusting!!! I would never thought that Edward is his son! I hope his much better person than his father. You had great idea! Thanks for updating ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Oh God!!! What kind of people are they?! It's so sick and disgusting!!! Poor Bella... I hope she'll understand that this place isn't right for her and she'll escape, hopefully with Edward ;) You had a very interesting idea with this story! Good job with this chapter! ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

I hope Edward will open his eyes and see what kind of creep Aro is. I hope he'll take Bella away from this hell before Aro would have a chance to take her virginity. YOU DID A GOOD JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER.

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

I feel so sorry for Carlisle. He's been through so much in his life. And now he has to deal with this sick bastard!

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

I hate Aro! I hope Edward and Bella would run away from this sick bastard!

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

I hate Aro so much! I hope that Edward will realise how fucked up this situation really is and that he'll run away with Bella.

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I'm glad that Bella has Esme and Carlisle who'll be there for her as much as possible. I hate Aro so much!!! I hope you'll update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

I'm glad Bella has Esme. I wish Aro would burn in hell. Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

I know I said it before, but I hate Aro with everything in me! I hope he'll be punished for all he did to those people! 

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I like Alice so much... Thanks for making her bigger part of this story. 

And who was watching them? Aro? Felix?

Please, update asap ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Why they are so naive and let Aro do this to them? Gosh... Even if he was absent in this chapter, I hate him even more!

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Oh my Gosh... This chapter left me speechless... You did an amazing job writing it! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! 

I have to say it (Like always): I hate Aro!!!

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

I don't know how do you do this, but you make me hate Aro even more with every chapter! Ugh... I hope Edward will protect Bella...

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

It's good to know that Felix is a better man that I thought. I wonder what he wrote on this note... Anyway, I really like your fanfic ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Is Edward going to see Charlie? Ugh.. The suspence is killing me ! 

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Oh God !!! Poor Bella... She won't be able to trust the Cullens now...

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

I hope Edward won't let Aro fool him again... And I'm begging you, let next chapter be Bella's POV! Please!!!

Please, update soon 'cause I love this story!!! ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

So Aro made Bella his personal prisoner? This sick f*cker!

I hope that next chapter will be Bella's POV because I would really love to find out what's happening to her...

Please, update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Aro is even worse that I thought! If he really loves Bella, why in the hell would he hurt her so bad?! But I guess he has no idea what love is...

I was thinking... It wasn't Aro that came into this room... So who? Edward? ;) Carlisle?

Please, update soon, because this story is getting better and better ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh God... I'm so curious about what's going to happen next that I'm literally shaking! 

Please, update soon...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515313
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh my God!!! You know how to make me even more curious about the next chapter! I can't believe James found them so fast! Edward, hurry up and save Bella!!! 

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

What the fuck?! I can't believe he was able to just kidnap Bella and Victoria! I hope Edward will find them in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Oh my God! Edward is so devastated! I hope kenxt chapter will be his point of view. Good job! ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Finally James startes getting what he deserves! Good job!

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I'm so glad that Bella and Victoria are finally safe! I hope that Aro will make James suffer for all he did to the girls! 

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I'm glad that James got what he deserved! I hope you'll update soon.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625413
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

What? What did she mean with this whole 'LEt me go" thing? I hope it was just some kind of stupid test. I'm glad that those bastards are bpoth dead. I hope you'll update very soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I was scared for a moment that Bella might date some other guy! I'm glad I was wrong ;) I hope you'll update soon ;)

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

It's over... It's tpp bad because I really enjoyed reading it... You had a really great idea! ;)