Reviews by yankeerose
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

Damn Renee is dumb...first she's a whore and now that she has a 15 year old daughter...its welcome to the family.

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Wow, when you said this was going to be dark...you weren't kidding around.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Holy shit!

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Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

I wonder if Felix is going to want Bella to be his?

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

OMG!   Yep, when can I set up my appointment for counseling???

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

I wonder what kinda of resume Felix has? 

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Sorry your lonely sweetie, but since you are lonely, why not use the time to write more???  Only kidding of course.

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I GOT MY POST

 

At least the nutjob practices what he preaches...ewww and he plans on sleeping with his sons wife first???  Thats some crazy ass shit!

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Ouch, an animal brush against skin would literally tear it up!

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Edward has the hots for Bella ;)

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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

Edward is crazy/cool...love him!

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I'm wondering if Aro is actually shooting blanks!  Why would a healthy young girl need to be put on fertility drugs?

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Poor Esme.  Hopefully she will be able to keep Bella safe.

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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Oh God, I hope its not Aro!

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Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Happy Anniversary and wishes for many more!

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

I had a feeling Aro was going to change the rules of the game when it came to Bella/Elizabeth.

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Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Where's the story?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
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Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

I like a devious, older Edward...sounds like its gonna be a great summer!



Author's Response:

I think it turns out to be a pretty decent summer... but then again... I might be a little biased.  hehe

Thanks for the review!! :D

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Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

Waterfall, Picnic, Edward...what more could a girl ask for ?

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Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

Bella acted like a brat, but Edward handled Charlie perfectly.

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Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

Jacob and Billie should mind their own business.

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

I enjoyed your story from start to finish.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
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Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Awww...she wanted to marry him when she was little...thats so sweet.  Of course Carlisle will be ready to kill Edward when he finds out that he and Bella have made love and that she is only Edwards' princess.

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Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Maybe Bella being pregnant might stop Carlisle from his insane ideas.

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMG!  Carlisle is the worst prick in all of ff history!  And poor Bella, dealing with the old Edward again...

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Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Won't Carlisle want to see belt marks?  

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Is there the chapter with the secret garden?  I'm only seeing A/N notes and chapter end notes???

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

OMG!  Your killing me with this cliffy!

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Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OMG...soooo glad Carlisle is dead.

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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

May I respectfully say that I have loved this story from its very beginning to the final word.  It made me cry, cringe, laugh, want to physically harm fictional characters...truly wonderful!

I would love to see TPW in a novel.  Please keep us posted on this.

 

 

 

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

My evil little mind is screaming...bite her...bite her NOW!

Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
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Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 5

The story just keeps getting better.

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I agree that SMeyer should have addressed the period issue...I mean she was writing about a vampire/human love affair.

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i am loving this story

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Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Emmett may not be as big a dick as we thought.

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Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yum...Jasper shirtless and wet!

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Darn, now I want pizza too!

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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Undone by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bill loves Sookie, but can she trust him? Eric wants Sookie, but does he love her? Two determined vampires, one stubborn telepath, and a big decision to make. 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5011 Read Count: 540
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2010
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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Unwelcome Memories

Nothin's  better than a big, blond viking walking out your back door...YUM:)

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Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Avoiding the Inevitable

I can't believe this story doesn't have alot more reviews...its really good.

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dom Jasper...YUMMY!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
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Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving Edward and Em in your story.  So glad Em stood up to Rose.  Its actually the first story i've ever read that he did that.

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Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Tough love is the way to go with Rose.  She may become Bella's biggest allie in the end.



Author's Response:

Thank so much for the review :)

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Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am thrilled that your updating so fast.



Author's Response:

Thanks :0) I have 2 more chapters already written that I will be posting soon and I'm working on chapter 7.

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Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Renee must die!

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Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If Rose has changed suddenly, then obviously something has happened in her life to cause her to act differently.

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm dying to know what happened to Rose.

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Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no...I knew something would happen to burst Bella's happy little bubble.

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Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Renee gets raped with a broom handle in jail...the bitch!



Author's Response:

LMAO that is totally my favorite review! Thank you so much :0) For all the support and for making me laugh my tushy off with that last review!

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Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hopefully Em will get there in time.

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So glad Edward got a few punches in at Phil.

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Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What a perfect first date...mine was McDonald's, yep nothin like a kiddie playground as background for budding romance ;)

 

 

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yeah for Bella!

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Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Bella, hopefully her testamony will put Renee away for a long time.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can just imagine Jasper puking from stress!

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Congrats on your new little angel!

I'm so happy for Bella.  I'm dying to know what was going on with Rose.

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I feel really bad for Vicky...when a guy says another chicks name while your blowing him...its time to say goodbye!

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Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

No story showing, just AN and end chapter notes.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know, it's a site glitch a few other stories are like that right now. I'm waiting to see if I have to repost everything or if it's somthing the site will fix.

 

Livvie

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Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That poor girl never geta a break!

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Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

More people to love Bella and for her to love....

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153111
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
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Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

I would have no trouble with polygamy...if a woman could also have more than one husband.  But because it isn't allowed, there is no other way to see it other than womanizing/adultery and using religion as the cover. 

I do like your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

 

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Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

I would have no trouble with polygamy...if a woman could also have more than one husband.  But because it isn't allowed, there is no other way to see it other than womanizing/adultery and using religion as the cover. 

I do like your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  I have done quite a bit of research on the topic of Polygamy and believe it or not there are countries where the women are the onces that have more then one husband. 

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Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Oooo...spanking from Edward, I could get into that!



Author's Response:

That is just awesome!

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

Will Bella ask Edward if either Rose or Alice would be able to add a man to their family?  Thats "THE " big question.  If Edward says no, then it is only about control and sex.  How could he refuse to add someone to their family that would make his wives complete, just as he feels Bella completes him?  Also since Edward and his family are bible based christians, how does he explain God only creating Adam and Eve and not Adam, Eve and Jane?

I also studied world religions in college...to be honest, most of the crap I studied concerning religion, was only the bare minimum of facts.  Alot of religions are extremely secretive when it comes to their true doctrinal practices.  

I guess what I'm saying is that God is real, but religions are manmade, by men to oppress the weak and to demoralize women.   

Love your story.



Author's Response:

No I don't have plans for any other men to enter the story. But I haven't gotten that far in the story yet so it is all in the air. they are following Christian Polygamy and that is a traditional male dominated society. The story is as correct as I can make it. There are polygamist sects that have the women marring multi men (They are mostly in Africian societies.) But for this story it will be One man and many women. There are parts of the bible that people believe that some of the men had many wives, and Christian Polygamist believe that God allowed this.

I am Catholic and don't know a whole lot about it. I agree whole heartly that religions are secertive, and I can only go off what is written and by what other people have told me. I actually know a women that lead these lifestyles. So I just go off of what they have told me and what I have read. I don't even begin to think that I know anything about how they really work. I just thought it would make a interesting story, so I went with it...

I also can't disagree that religions are all male dominated practaces. I don't agree 100% with my own religion, but I believe the important facts and for me that is enough.

Thanks you for your honest opinions. I would love to know what you think in the future.

Denise 

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

I can't imagine what my DH would do if I spent that kind of cash in a week!!!



Author's Response:

I know it's unreal..... Oh yeah I guess that's why this is fiction.....lol

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Who spanks Edward when he fucks up? 



Author's Response:

It depends really. I would let it happen if he fucked up bad enough, there are a few things that would warrent it, but there will be more on that later on. Right now it's all about the girls.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Poor Rose.  The sad thing is, her story is more of the norm in true polygamus families...heartbreaking.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't say that it is the norm. It happens to girls of all different religions all over the world. It is just horrible that there are really men like Aro around.

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

BIG CONGRATS on the new little one!

I'm taking it that the "session" will be of a D/s type?



Author's Response:

Sort of yes sort of no

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

All I could think of ...of course he wants what his father has...wife approved mistresses.  What guy wouldn't want that?

I feel so bad for Rose...being sexually abused is so life altering.



Author's Response:

Sexual abuse is life altering and sometimes you can never get over it.

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Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Edward can't handle the two wives he has now.  Just the way he left Rose speaks volumnes. Alices needs were just selfish, where Roses stem from deep abuse.  Shame on Edward for how he left Rose.

Alice is manipulative and I find her quite deceitful.  She is fully aware that Rose's issues are major and require alot of attention from Edward, yet she wants to bring Bella into the fold.  Its apparent that Alice is not the loving sister-wife that Edward thinks she is. 

Rose is my hero.  I hope she finds the happiness she deserves.  Its obvious that Edward loves and feels responsible for Rose, but its not the husbandly type love that she needs.  Rose deserves so much better than Edward and Alice.

 

 



Author's Response:

Just keep an open mind. You don't know what Alice's life was like before she meet Edward and Rose. And like real "sisters" they will fight, but that doesn't mean they don't love each other.

If I was Edward I would of left too. He was only going to leave after she fell asleep, but that wasn't enough for her. I mean Edward get up in the middle of the night to see to Rosalie's needs.

What is husbandly love anyway? and why do you say they don't have it? Neither one of them can see a life without the other. Edward would lay down his own life to keep her safe and she would do the same for him.

I Love how strong Rose is, in a way I wish I could of been a little more like her. But she does forget that other people have feelings too.

Thanks for reviewing...again

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

Every thing I see of Alice shows that she is only interested in getting what she wants. She knows how to "play" Edward and he is puddy in her hands.

Like I said, Edward loves Rose but it not a romantic love, its his duty.  Husbandly love is...waking up in the middle of the night to attend to your "true" wifes needs.  No matter how long it takes.  Roses issues are major and Edward KNEW that by hitting her, she was going to need him ALL night.  Yes, crybaby, manipulater had a temper tantrum and needed Edward to make it better.  Then maybe Edward should have manned-up with Rose and told her he had to babysit Alice that night and would be able to give Rose what she needed the next night.  So in essence he f**ked up Rose to run back to Alice.  The man does not need another wife.

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Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Consequences

Sure Edward didn't cheat, but what excuse does he have for not going after Bella for 4 years?

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares

OMG...did Jacob do it?  I think he's the one who pushed Bella down the flight of stairs that killed the baby.

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Nostalgic Nightmares

Oh no...now I think it was Emmett that is behind all this shit!

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux

When did Edward sleep with Tanya?  Was it before he met Bella or after she left?

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Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: You’ve Made Your Bed..

Edward is NUTS!  She lost the baby through no fault of her own.  I hope she kicks his ass to the curb for good this time.

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Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Taking Care of Business

Bella had to do it...but I still can't help feeling like Edward is the bastard in this situation.  He's a man with $$$ and power and couldn't find out what happened to his wife?  Sure he wrote, he even went to Italy...but after that he did NOTHING.

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted

Carpal Tunnel is a bitch.    A  chiropractor finally cured mine.

 

I loved this chapter.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Demetri is HOT, Edward is a poor imitation.

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Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

I just finished reading the first 16 chapters.  Great story, very unusual.  Can't wait for more.

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step

I think you should let Bella wait to see what Edward is going to do.

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21. The Twilight Zone

I can't wait to see how those weasels are going to get outa this one!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )

I hope Em sings like a canary!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24. The Confrontation

I hope Bella lands up with Demitri and Edward lands up alone.  Ok, I know thats not whats going to happen, but its fun to imagine.



Author's Response:

I love the way you think! Who know you might just get your wish!!   :)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

I think Edward is planning on making Bella jealous with his sluts...hopefully Bella will see right through it.

 

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished

Please...Please...Please let Edward see Bella having sex with Demitri, this way, he could hate Bella as much as she should hate him:)

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

I really want Bella with Demitri, he's cooler, sexier and just a better fit for her...so right now, I'm LOVING the writer :)  Edward is an arogant asshat, and got what he gave.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

If Bella was really Edwards mate, how was she able to be with Demetri?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback it's always appreciated. Without me sounding like a broken record if you look to chapter 36 reviews on May 25th another reader asked a similar question which answers yours as well. Please check it out.

Thanks again!  :) 

 

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37. Succubae?

Edward never really gave up the freshes club, now instead of humans, he's got vampires.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

Ewww...don't let him get nice...darkward is so much more fun!



Author's Response:

he wont be nice, but bella will adapt xx

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

I am loving your story...need more!



Author's Response:

more will be coming soon :)x

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

Edwards emotions are all over the place, he cares for Bella yet he needs to control her.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Bella  broke through some of his barriers...he belongs to her now :)



Author's Response:

hehe yup that was the idea :) xx

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

Looks like Jacob really wants Marie...Edward is gonna kick his wolf ass!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

Now its Bella's turn to play monster and give him a good case of blue balls!



Author's Response:

hehe wudnt tht be great hehe, its just a shame they're hard as rocks haha xx

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

Your Edward is yummy!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

Seems like the wolves are back...

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

Lets see that monster...

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

Damn...I want waffles now!

I hope Bella soon just asks Edward about this other woman.  It'll drive her crazy if she doesn't.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

Let the monster out...he'll get her to see reason!



Author's Response:

hehe :) dont worry edward can sort her out :) xx