Reviews by mnnlisa
Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119176
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

They better find "him" quick because he's getting closer and more brave.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Billy got what he deserved.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

A wonderful wedding!  Interesting that Bella still wants to work at EAC after learning who owns it.  

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I hope Esme really lays in to Leah and Tia.  Bella did well at the party.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Billy is going down.  Edward's and Bella's wedding will be perfect.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Billy is going to get his ass in to trouble.  Rose is liking Bella's ways.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Esme is all kinds of awesome.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

I hope Edward's security is worth it.  Billy has some "ins" others don't.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Good thing security is being amped up.  

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Communication is so important.  Good thing Bella told Edward about Billy.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Communication is so important.  Good thing Bella told Edward about Billy.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Edward's words about Bella moving in to his bedroom are so similar to the words he said in her nightmare.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Such a sweet HEA for these two.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Glad Edward to agreed to call her Bella during the non D/s times.  He has completely fallen for her.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

I believe Peter should have endured a bit more torture, but it was a good start.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Don't mess with Esme.  She's fierce!

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

The family is happy E and B are married.  Leah and Tia are plotting some sort of awful revenge.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

So he's close and now has Rose's bridesmaids helping him.  Bella is in trouble.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Edward had to be freaking out when Bella went for her run.  Glad he ddn't overreact.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Love the work around the NDA

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six

It had to be somebody close to the family.  Peter's days are numbered.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Esme and her grandchildren comments aren't going to stop until she has some grandkids.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I hope Leah and Tia get busted

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Edward setting a trap is exciting

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

I like Angela.  This isn't enough of what Peter deserves.