Reviews by bevey99
Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
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Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

Wow, fantastic chapter. This story is really amping up. Love it.  I have thought and maybe it's a stupid one, but I'm starting to be very suspicious of Rose.  Hummmm.

I think keeping Seth safe is a good idea, way to weird for your son to be repeating his injuries.

"Now I just  need to write myself meeting Rob and him falling madly in love with me and whisking me and my boys away to Califonia."   THIS is hysterical and I think you should.

As always, thank you for the update.

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Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

Agh damn, I was just getting into it.  Definitely going to be watching for an update on this one.  

Thanks for writing.

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Vultures

Ooo self-loving thinking of Bella, naughty Prezward.  Thanks for the update, I love this story.

 

Okay, so you need to take care of YOU and your family, and not feel obligated to us.  If we love your work (me) we will all still be here when you return. 

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Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Career Move

Great update, thanks.  These two are really a pair.  Still surpised she's not behind bars, at least as a lesson in knowing when to STFU.

OMG, your sweet little boy. So sorry.

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Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

you really can't talk to the President like that.

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Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

AGAIN w/ the CLIFFIE!  Damn!  Great update.  You just love realing us in, don't you?

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Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Date Night

Okay, so my very pervy mind kicked in when Bella said "Totally head to head, and you're going down."  Yep my mind went directly there.  Because that's where we all want Edward to be.

Love the date, and the update.  Thanks for writing.

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Daddy Time

Jeez, Mpov could be anyone with acces to inside the White House.  Like say VP Cheney.

You're the only one who knows.  I'll be here reading when the reveal comes.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

What a sweet guy. Coercion and blackmail.  Nice presidential behavior.

Too bad she can't slap the shit out of him.  And, she's already had one day off from work, he's going to make her lose her job.  Can you call the president a bastard and get away with it?

Great story.  Thanks for the update.

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Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

Damn short chapter, woman.  But yet another piece to the puzzle. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

Did ya write all night?  This wasn't up went I went to bed at 12:30.  Oh well, I like my/our morning gift.  You positively have me hooked w/ this one.   Poor baby does he have celiac disease?

The aupdate is MUCH appreciated.  Thanks for writing. Bev

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Emergency

Being redundent - I'm loving this story.  And two updates in two days, thank you thank you, thank you.

Thanks for writing.

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Schedules

You know I love your writing, however,  how can he rearrange his schedule on a moments notice, it's in place months ahead of time. (Yes, it's Fiction I know) He would have had to clear his schedule overnight, don't think that's possible.  Now a Saturday might be, but doubt that too.  I'm glad he got and earfull of her opionions of him,  sooo deserved it.

Thanks for the update.

 

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Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Nooooooo.... you DID NOT just leave us here.  The "b" word comes to mind.

Fantastic update!

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Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Arrangements

Back the fuck, Carlisle!

Thanks for updateing.

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Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella

A baby in the Oval Office, not since John-John.

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Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Diverting Disaster

There are way TOO many things/questions in the air for me to starting listing. That is a really good thing, as it means you have me and several hundred others (guestimate)  anxiously awaiting for the next update.

As always thanks for the update.

 

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Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Demands

Damn cliffie again.  All I can say is I love this story.   Needs me - sigh - I wish.    Thanks for the update.

And, Cougar Town really IS good, people.

If you rec it, I will read.  ;-) 

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Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections

Okay, this is where I say "Fuck me, you're ending the chapter here". Shit

Love the update. Love your writing. Prez is pompous & Cub is cute.

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Handling Things

Poor Prez, he has a "condition", and Bella will be the only one that will be able to "treat" it.  Yep said Rose was at the least a meddler, but probably more.  The end left a smile on my face. Kind of a first, because someone is always pissed at someone else.

Love the chapter and love the update. Thanks

Keep us posted on Cayden. xo

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Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

Chapter made me smile. And, it's..... Felix for the win , on answering the ringing phone of a toddler.  Smiles, Alice all coordinated w/ heels right out of bed.  My dogs look better in the morning than I do.

Thanks for the update.  Till next week, take of you and yours'.

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Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Sisterly Conversations

Still laughing at pouty Alice, jealous of her own shoes.

Great update, fast, thanks.

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Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 A New Home

Awe, so sweet. They both care.

Scary shit for Charlie. Now mystery man doesn't have a henchman.

 

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Press Conference

OMG, of course you would leave us right here. Meanie.   Loving this story, but then I've said that from the first.

Thank you for the update.

I would prefer 2 smaller chapters.

And, I can't wait for your Drabble.  Thanks for writing.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Outed

Awe.  They both said "I love you" simultaneously.  And, wow Rose 360 whip-lash.

Pass that test and get back to us.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Guess we all noticed the change of tone of the lemon. Well right it is sort of second to the story.  And, a Really good story it is.

Thanks for the update.  Hope you Aced your test.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

Again, with the whats and wills.  Too much to ponder.  Just letting you take me on the ride. But very curious about the "Myster POV".  I think it's a woman.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Spa Day

F..... No you F didn't.  The baby daddy.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Abducted

You just love leaving us at a Damn and Da Ham spot.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions

Oh but there's a reason he wants Seth now. Rose wants Seth.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Following Directions

Baby monitor?

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth

Rose --- check

Baby monitor  --  of sorts check

 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession

Nope didn't have a clue about the Bros.  Wednesday is a long way off.

 

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Life and Death

James Hunter, but she called him Royce. And Roslie's name was Victoria. Confusing.

Thanks for the update. GL w/final.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story

Still trying to make me cry aren't you.  You and another of my favorite authors' are leaving the fandom to be published.  You've really honed your writing skills here and I'm grateful that I was able to read your E & B stories.

As always thanks for updating. and writing.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Recovery

Yea Bella better.  And,the doubt and her mind has been cleared up.  Will miss this story, but I'll be missing you more.

Thanks for the update have fun w/your bud and kids on your trip.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

Lovely. Simply lovely.

Thanks for the update.

 

Have fun w/ the family

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1

Wonderful epilogue to a great story.  Loved it from the first Jimmy being hurled, hooked me right there.

I love all your stories and will hate to see you leave, but good luck on the Original.

xo Bev

Taboo by sirensong Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Taboo definition ta-boo -adjective 1.proscribed by society as improper or unacceptable. Things are not always what they seem.AH drabble warning:BDSM themes, possible lemons, and coarse language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1274 Read Count: 2822
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2012 Updated: 13 Mar 2013
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay bits are funny, but finding it hard to keep up.

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yes, yes, yes. I knew he had to touch her. 

Love these early updates.  Or at least sort of early in CDT.

Thank you.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Now the real excitement begins.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Penetrate      hahahaha

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Jasper, and Rosalie won't be thrilled w/ the Plan.  Esme is ever THE Mother she wants all the children she can get - human or otherwise. Carisle is alrady on board. Emmett & Alice hard to say. AU may be a twist.

Keep them coming. Was sad when this wasn't in my e-mail in box this morning. Was hoping for a nice B-day early read.  As always, thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I feel so bad that I forgot now! Happy birthday though! But, to make up for my faux pas, I'll give you this teaser of the next chapter...

 

“So if this girl’s father agrees, she’ll be moving in here?” Jasper asked, his eyes darting over to Edward as he let him hear his thoughts.

I’ll be on my best behavior and feed twice a day if this happens, to make you more comfortable.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Still one word review.  Damn. Now that can be taken several ways.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Fucking yea !  Bout time luv......

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

And we wait.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Fell better, babe.  Those 2 babes need you.

 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

? Huh okay?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Progress Yeah.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Yeah, but I think the shit is about to hit.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG, it's going to be like this every chapter.  You are the queen of mean w/maddening cliffies.  

Love it, thanks for updating. You rock.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Of course we're all hopeful that he'll be able to help.  Hear her? He has already. ;-]

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Still here.  You know I will be.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this.  Poor Charlie, he's suffering too, and w/ the added pressure of what will happen when the insurance company discontinues service.

Rec-ing all over the place.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Damn, damn,damn,  slow,slow, slow, short, short short.

As always, thanks for the update - you rock.  Friends I turned on to this are now reading Courgar Town. Yea.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Grrrrrrr, being cruel again.

Thanks for the update.

And, I reallly don't know what has happened at Fan Fiction, but I do know I can't log into Twighted. 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Don't know where I see this going. Is a HEA possbile if he doesn't turn her?

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Sad. just sad

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 14 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes of course you have me hooked.

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Just love the store, the whole package.  I know it's a drabblish, but ......... whining and wanting more. She heard him when he spoke, she responded to his voice.

Till tomorrow, thanks

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another day another great update. This is maddening. But still here. Thanks

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Slow torture, must be your mantra. ;-)  He has to get back to her. She'll respond to his voice I just know it.  Now he cold touch that will be ify.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

THE Cullen's WILL save the day.  And, no offence to anyone in insurance (I've worked in the business from the largest to the smallest agent) but screw all the insurance companies. It's a racket.  Can't live w/ them and can't live wo/ them.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Right choice, Charlie.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Of course he will be able to help her. Just has to, that's all.

Thanks for the update. Still rec-ing.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He won't stay down the hall.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy shit, that was chilling and a little creepy. 

Thanks for the update. 

RL got in my way until today. Got something new on Thursday, 13 stitches in my eyebrow.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'd say her heart stopped then started racing so fast Secretariat couldn't keep up.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Standing up clapping hard, and whistling REALLY loud. (I'm actually known for that.)

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Holy Shit woman, you are evil.  

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I still maintain that you are an evil cruel woman, and queen of the Cliffie.

Dammit

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I never received a notice on this for today????  Only to come and find this.

OMG!!!

 



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Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thank God, or Alice, or you. No all three. Jeez (walking away -mumbling)

"Thanks" for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

wow this was early, thanks.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow that's a load of What's and wills.  I have no idea at this point.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awe..  you are killing me/us.  Now we wait, till Monday.  Getting a bit depressed. 

Of well, thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Not confused at all, that was sort of beautiful.

Thanks for the update, till tomorrow. xo

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

If you promise.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Guess the only review I'm destined to give on this story is    Damn.

That's it.  Till next week.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Questions, questions about a mystery.

Till tomorrow.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

So now there's a Room of Requirement.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

OMG NO, your going to leave us.  Who will we read?  I've just rec'd you to several people.  It will be a sad for us when you move on, But good luck.

Love the update.    sniff sniff



Author's Response:

I'm still going to be around, reading, maybe writing oneshots or contest entries, but I can't do full length OF and FF at the same time, I tried. I'm not sure if you're on facebook and added me over there, but you can find me at facebook.com/smmiskimenff and I'll keep everyone updated there on my OF and I'll do a chapter update with info when it's going to be released. I'm so sad to be going as I have grown to love all of my readers, but especially you and a few others that have been there every update, every story, and have been pushing me forward this whole time. I am really going to miss you.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

:-{  it's always over TOO soon. Yes, I know the the nature of drabbish, but... sigh I always want more.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Maddening - this start to f w/ my head not just Bella's.

Thanks for the update.

 

Sorry about 4-legged baby.  You really have the luck don't you, and not in a good way. Four-legged baby care is REALLY damned expensive. We have four.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I would say SWATH bit was ironc.  I didn't see the movie so I have no idea what happened.

Thanks for the update, waiting for next week to have more.

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Y'all have tons of fun.  I'll wait for Edward today.  Never been to Memphis and I love Elvis.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Nice kiss.  I WOULDN'T COME BACK TO REALITY.

Have a great time in the mid-west.

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Still here.  Thanks for the updates.

Sorry the baby's mishap.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Just reading along.  I have no idea where this going.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yep the meadow is a good place to start.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Will not call you names, will not call you names................. but fuck, really?

 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

seriously 

thanks for the update

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

You don't want my comments.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

NOPE.  She's stuck without him

Thanks for the update/.  

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Huh?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Ok if you say so..  I wondered if they see her trying to throw up. 

 

Thanks for the update..

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Thanks for the update.

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Yeah your really are Edward. 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Thanks for the update.