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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625275
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

It is clear that something is very wrong, and she should run the first chance she gets.



Author's Response:

Be prepared. Its about to get a lot worse before it gets better

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153117
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Uhm...they are a Christian, doms and subs?  I usually like little S&M stories, but this was...I don't know.  Very controlling, but I like the story, it is very interesting.



Author's Response:

That is such a hard thing to address. DD is said to not be the same as S&M or BDSM but I think that they are sort of simular.

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

Poor Alice.  I'm sure she bought something for Bella



Author's Response:

I know but for real isn't $10,000 enough.   lol

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Did he say the same thing to his oyher wives?



Author's Response:

Each has there own thing that makes them special.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

He is so mean.  How is he even going to think he should protect her from someone?  Jasper needs a hobby. 



Author's Response:

haha hello new reader :) and I know my Edward is a bastard, however I promise that he gets a little nicer hehe :) and yes Jasper is rather strange :)

Thank you for the review and support xx

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

I bet he's going to drain them in front of her to prove he's a monster.  Wow, Carlisle is so mean.



Author's Response: oh you are good :) how did you guess :) and yes carlisle is also mean, however he gets nicer too, but much later on :) xx

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

Bastard!  She should never want him.



Author's Response:

well my Bella is a bit of a freak, she likes it rough :) Xx

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Guest

I am very interested to find out what happen to poor Esme.  I can't believe Carlisle hasn't arranged to have himself killed, unless...he wants revenge.  Who do these eyes belong to?  What is going on?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76145
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was the delivery to Alice?

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255005
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very good.  I can't believe it's your first fic.  I am so glad for the lack of wiredness between Jake and Bella.  I always thought he and Leah would make a good couple.



Author's Response:

I also thought so too. In fact in Breaking Dawn I thought that's what was going to happen. But I was wrong...lol Thanks for reading and welcome to my story....lml

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jacob is a damn fine big brother. 

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I see that she is very cautious at home.  I sense some foreshadowing.  I hope Seth will be good protection.  I don't think the doggie door is a good idea.  I couldn't sleep at night.  Also I shutter to think about the draft shooting in in the winter.  Burrr.



Author's Response:

the doors are insulated and they can slide up and down and Bella has a state of the art doggie door, not a plain run of the mill self-installed one, her's is high tech...lol

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad the family was there.  I was being to worry that he was a stalker. 

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This family doesn't keep secrets do they.



Author's Response:

no they don't, they are very open and very accepting ...thanks for the comment ...lml

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella pretends to be a coma patient's fiancee just to be able to keep seeing him. What happens when he wakes up from coma? What will she do when his brother begins to suspect she's lying? AH, AU, OOC, Cannon, E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52812 Read Count: 15309
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I feel so sorry for Bella all alone in the big city.  Does she have any friends?

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Fateful Day

Bella is a hero.  I wonder if he will remember her face.  I am really disappointed that my Edward couldn't defend himself. 

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Meeting The Family

Oh my goodness when she said crazy hair.  I thought it was Edward.  I have thrown my hands over my eyes.  I can't watch.