Reviews by mw138
Summary:

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At the end of story Hostage, NYPD SWAT boys Edward and Jasper married. This is their Honeymoon.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17871 Read Count: 5380
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Awesome start! I can't wait to read more about Edward and Jasper's married life. :D



Author's Response:

Hi M

Glad ur enjoying the boys - they have an interesting discussion in the next chapter.

Take care

yvonne

xx

Summary:

Manipulative and b*tchy Bella hurts Jacob and then moves on to sweet innocent Edward. Can Jacob help Edward repair the damage Bella does during the time they are together and will Bella get what she deserves?

All human story rated for lemons and please note this is a SLASH story so don't read it if it's not your thing.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92381 Read Count: 6488
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mw138 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Knowing how spiteful Bella is, I hope she doesn't try to get revenge for what Jake did. She's not one who likes to lose at anything.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)  I think Bella will shortly be too concerned with her own problems to worry about Jake and Ed any more! :D

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww! What a great chapter! Edward's starting to come into his own and I'm so happy he and Jacob verbally and physically expressed their feelings for one another. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the update - this was my favourite chapter to write so far :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Edward. :(

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying this story. It looks like Jacob is the right guy to give Edward some of his confidence back. That bitch, Bella, really did a number on the poor guy. Great job! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I'm happy you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter! You managed to make me hate Bella even more than usual. LOL I'm really glad Jacob is there for Edward. Hopefully he'll help him gain some of his confidence back. I really, really hope karma bites Bella in ass for what she did to them.



Author's Response:

Haha, she's a bitch, isn't she? She'll get her just desserts eventually ;)  Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aww! Cute chapter! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ugh! That bitch! She has to constantly torment people. I hope she gets her comeuppance!



Author's Response:

She's evil, isn't she, I can't stand her! Nothing good will come of her, I promise!

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter! I'm so glad Edward was able to take such a big step with Jake. :) Jasper is going to have a field day when Edward returns home! lol



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed the latest :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww! I'm glad Edward had such a great birthday! I really love the love Edward and Jake share. It's so heartwarming! I'm also tickled that there could be something brewing between Jasper and Paul. Seeing them so shy and nervous around each other was adorable.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the update.  I wanted to give Jasper something to look forward to as well, since he's been fed up lately ;)

United We Fall by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary:

 

A bizarre twist of fate throws Jacob into a turmoil. Can he find a way for his life to be worthwhile, or is he doomed to misery and unfulfilment?

NB. If you like my awesome banner and would like one for yourself, it was kindly made for me by Mina Rivera, I know she would be happy to make you one too :)

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jacob (slash)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144329 Read Count: 11376
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2013
Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved how Edward stood up to Carlisle!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Poor Jake. :(



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will be ok again soon, Edward just needs to get his head straight (or NOT straight, haha).

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Aww! I'm so happy for them! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed the update :)

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Jacob and Edward are adorable! :) I'm glad Jake put Mike in his place. He's always so annoying and stupid.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I never liked Mike, haha :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor Jacob! I'm glad Edward is there for him. I also like how the Cullens are more and more accepting of Jacob, especially Carlisle and Emmett. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; Jacob is going to need Edward's comfort with his Dad so sick :(

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I feel so bad for Jake. :(



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He's really going to need Edward's comfort now :(

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Paul disgusts me. Does he secretly want to be friends with a vampire or something because his hatred, when the Cullens have proved to be nothing but friendly, is odd and extremely misplaced. The rest of the pack is fine, but Paul continues to spew his hatred.

I'm glad Jake will be able to live at the Cullens and receive the support he needs. Seth was so adorable when he thought Jake might leave the pack.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Paul just needs to get over himself and he will before too much longer. :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I loved this chapter! Jake and Edward's love is so heartwarming. The way Jacob tried to keep Edward calm while Carlisle removed the bullet brought a smile to my face.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed this one. They will get married in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: mw138 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

*swoon* That was perfect! :) Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed :)