Reviews by irishwitch
Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: irishwitch Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying the story...there is just one thing that is nagging me and it isn't even a big thing to the story. 

Is the setting MIT in Cambridge MA?  If so....you really should consider changing it to another university if only to hold to reality a bit.  MIT isn't a liberal arts university, they are scientific only...so engineering, chemistry etc.  Other choices could be Leslie, Boston University, Harvard, Simmons, Suffolk, Emmanuel, Northeastern...being from Boston, it was bugging me.  

The story is great.  Thanks for letting me point it out.



Author's Response:

Hello,

thank you very much for reviewing. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

About the MIT issue, I did do some research on MIT University before placing it in the story and there is an MIT school of Humanities, Arts & Social Sciences. There is an undergraduate course in Literature listed there the last time I checked on the MIT website.

 

Hope you're having a good day!

~

December LaStrange

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: irishwitch Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Merry Christmas and thanks for this great story...I love every chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

Reviewer: irishwitch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Louise,I wasn't sure if you knew that this story was bumped off FF.net. :-(  I hope that hasn't stopped your progress at all...and that we can continue toward the end of the mystery soon.  I'm glad I have you saved here as well...I don't want to miss what comes next. All my best to your and yours over the holidays.  Best. S.

Reviewer: irishwitch Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm hoping you're ok and I look forward to solving the mystery.

I don't have the address to the blog, but it is buried here in one of the reviews. But there are a couple of more chapters posted there

Reviewer: irishwitch Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes!  So good to hear from you and I'm looking forward to rereading this once complete.  be well and please post soon!