Reviews by superstargirl818
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625400
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I love this story and i'm a big big fan. I started reading it on fanfiction then another website and now this! it's the only story i'd follow round all over the internet. Plz Plz update soon!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is going slower than I planned. Hopefully it will be ready soon

Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

did you get that following the story all over the internet from my review? cos if you did i want to reassure you i was not complaining. I was merely pointing out how special your story would have to be to have someone as lazy as me go on these sites to find it. Anyway i'm happy cos i've found a fab new fanfiction website out of it. :)

anyway great job no pressure or anything but if you don't update soon i may have to spontaneously combust and my poor mum would have to clean me up from the walls :))))))))))) xx

jk take your time :) 



Author's Response:

LOL! Believe me you weren't the only one who commented on the move.  Also, I know how lazy I am (and internet illiterate) so I feel the same way about moving around.  Hell, my husband and I are still in our first home after 24 years because I absolutely hate the idea of packing and moving. 

I'm just grateful to everyone who moved with me and didn't just give up on me or my story.

Summary:

Esme Platt was a brand new mother, happy and in love with her son. What would she do when tragedy struck? What did a kind stranger from her past, have to do with her future? Cannon Pre-Twilight O/S


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1484 Read Count: 77
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww thats such a sweet and sad story! I nearly cried, poor esme! Is this going to be one-shot? It would be interesting to see how Esme deals with becoming a vampire. anyway great job :-) 



Author's Response:

Thank you and I am glad that you were able to feel her emotions. It really was a sad time in her life. And yes I am only planning a one shot for this one. I don't want to take away form this moment of her story.

 

Thank you for the lovely review

Summary:

Oh god-

I miss him I miss him I miss him I miss him I miss him so much that I feel like nothing nothing nothing I feel like nothing and I need him to come in through my window and hold my hand, please, please, hold my hand, hold my hand and tell me he loves me-

((for birds and bees-- and any other insects or animals who feel distinctly left out i'm not especially bothered i invite the whole animal kingdom as long as they are literate))


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2521 Read Count: 257
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: my heart is burning ohholy-

That is so fantastically heartbreakingly brilliant. It was so heartbreaking and you wrote so fantastically detailed that i felt i was there watching them. I know i sound like a butt kisser lol but seriously that was such a great piece of writing. I hope this isn't a one-shot. Maybe you could do it through all the months with Bella also talking about Jacob and then maybe at the end you could have Bella doubting that Edward loves her but then finding his diary and realising he was going through the same as her. Sorry I know i'm rambling on but I wish I could write this good anyway great job xx



Author's Response:

Oh well thankyou very much. Do you not quite agree that the north of England is the best place to live in the whole world oh it's marvellous have another pie. x

Forgive by Fragile_wreck Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A missing moment between Edward and Renesmee.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Nessie (nonsexual)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1589 Read Count: 100
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2010
Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwww so sweet i love edward/nessie moments :)))))))) i know this is counted as a one-shot but it would be cool if you did a number of one-shots of Edward and Nessie moments all through her life as she grows up and gets married and has kids of her own. You obviously have the skill to do it :-) anyway great job well done xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if, during the early stages of their relationship, Edward lost some of his carefully-maintained control with Bella one night?  What if his urges were precipitated by a force mundanely human and unavoidable?

This story is complete!

Thanks so much to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20515 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2010
Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Monster and the Man

this was very interesting, a great story and i love the way you wrote about Edwards inner turmoil it was very good, great job xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  :)

Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reciprocation

you're right, thats why i love fanfiction so much. I love being able to do whatever i want (within reason) to my favourite characters. anyway great job again this is a great combination of angst, fluff and lemon :-) xx



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: superstargirl818 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mutual Satisfaction

well that was a great story short and sweet :-) well done and i might check out some of your other works, hope you get more reviews for this story soon, you deserve it xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, and I do hope you'll check out some of my other works when you get the chance.  ;)  Again, thank you very much!