Reviews by debbieg
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

wow,I am glad that she finally told Edward about what Charlise want to do to her..  I hope he keeps her safe. They have come a long way for this to go bad.  I hope that nothing bad happens.   you did leave a good cliffhanger.. Please let me know when you up date.. I did not see an alert on this page. will you be emailing up to let us know..   I have been following this story since i found it on Twiilighted and the other networking ones you had it on..  I cant wait to read the next chapter..   thank you

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

This was a touchinng chapter for Bella and Esma..  The bound they share is lika a mother and daughter.. I am so glad that Esma is there for Bella and that she can share with her, her mom's feelings on everything as well.  I feel there bound will only grow stronger in time..  I just hope that Edward will let Bella let her do what she loves. Write..   I hope that he will not become the monster Charlisle is.  I want the to live happy ever after like a fairy tall..  I just hope that it will work.. Please up date as soon as you can..

 See I do review and have been following you since fan fiction.  I found you than on twitter and the blogspot. I just love this story and want to thank you for writting it.. Yes the first few chapters were sad, but with out them we would not read more of this story.  It tells you what is happening with eveyone and how they over comed the trails of Charlisle. I just hope that soon Esma can find a way out of this..  Thanks again..   Debbig 

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I cannt believe this Carlisle is gone.  I am so glad that no one got to rape Bella before the boys got there to save her..   I am glad that Esma is free of him and now she can really enjoy her ice cream and not have to hide it in the ice box.. So what did she do with his ashes?   are you going to tell us?  did she us it as fertilizer for her garden?   no wait that really might kill the flowers and plant.. He was just very diry and evil...  I just hope that Edward and Bella will work out there differance and find love again... agian thanks for your stroys I really enjoy reading them.  Cannt wait to read more of this story and your other one..  thanks

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

If you turn this in to a novel let me knnow.. I really liked this story and I would love to read new material on this story..  Your a great writier and I have followed your work...

I could nt beleive that Bella left with her Aunt.  Wow that was a shock. but I am glad that everyone is gettig help and that Edward and Bella work things out.  I hope that there love will live on..  

thanks for sharing your stroy.  

debbie grissom

Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.SEQUEL TO BRANDED.  Please read Branded before reading this story.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149939 Read Count: 18955
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Mar 2010
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mile High

This story is really good. I read the first one and the Road map is even better.. I am glad that Bella going to have a baby.. I just hope that she does nt have any more night mars of James  and how he hurt her.. She has come a long way since she moved to Forks and Edward has helped her.. I hope there is more to come.. Thanks for sharing your storys.. 



Author's Response:

There's lots more to come!  I just haven't had time to upload them. :)

Thanks, by the way.  I'm thrilled that you liked Branded and that you're loving Road Maps even more.  

Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 30: An Expensive Lemon

I started reading your stroy from the beginning and I just want to say  I really like this story.. it is amazing..  I am so glad that Bella has found Edward and that they are doing so well.. So what is the catch are we going to be seeing more of ED SR?

Will Jaz and Alice fininal have a baby of there own?  So many more questions. Please update soon..  I cant get enough of this love stroy of Bella and Edward and all that has come out of it..  They both  at one time or another had bad things happen to them but all and all they came out as a very happy loving couple. they found true love and that is a great feeling....   Thanks for shareing yoour story and keep up the great writing.. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Debbie.  I will be posting the rest of it probably tonight and tomorrow.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303550
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow I founnd your story and cant stop reading it.. This is very hot and sexy.  I cant beleive how lovely Esma is and how she could see right thru Bella and know there was something wrong.. She is a cool mom that everyone would want to have.. I am glad that she took all of them back to Forks to work things out with there parents.. Maybe Renee will come a long and for give Bella.. But than again she may be set in her ways..

Will I cant believe the sex sences with everyone.. so hot and steamy..  wow... thats all I can say.. Whats the thing with Kate and her husband?  he sure was cking out Bella.. They must be on the verge of a brake up or something that the feeling that I got.. He is a player.  Is there going to be more of them?   Willl I better get back to reading.. This is really great.. Thanks for shareing your story..      debbie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

ok when is the next chapter coming.. you left us with a total cliffhanger.. is this when they all go and have a sex party?  I know thats gross thinking of yoru partents doing that... let allone you and your friends.. I have nevered tryied that but cant say I thought about it with my girlfriends..  wow I cant beleive i just said that.... lol...   I am so happy that Renee came around and found her love again.. Charlott.   Who would have thought we have Esma to thank for getting all the family back together and Renee finding her ture love.. 

Please hurry with the next chapter..  This story is really good.  see I told you I could nt put it away..



Author's Response:

lol, no sex party but ......

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

I found your story and I  am really enjoying it.. I feel there is a coum before the story ready to happen.. I hope that things stay the way they are for Bella and Edward.  Your a good writter.. I hope to read more from your if you write more..  Thanks for sharing your story..  debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for your compliments. As a writer it is always good to hear that our readers are enoying the story. I can't promise that is will be  sunshine and roses, for them but I can tell you that I am a sucker for a happy ending. So I hope that gets you through whatever they might have to endure.

I have another story that I am co-authoring with My Bella called Worth the Burn. It is pretty cool in my opinion. It is here and you can find it under my pen-name or hers. Then when The Game That Changed It all is complete I have a new story in the works and will have more on that later.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I look forward to hearing from you through the rest of the story.

 

Mary

 

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 It's Me!

that was a cool chapter.. I am a big nascar fan.. I like kacey kahne.. my husband is a big earnhardt fan.. Did you by chance go to the race and meet jimmie?   it sounds like you did.. i just had to ask..  :)  lol    Great chapter cant wait to read more.. thanks



Author's Response:

Big Nascar fan here too!! Love Dale Jr as well and Jimmie Johnson is one of myfavs as well. My beta Hope4More loves Kasey to death. LOL I have been to the race and to the track, but unfortunaltely did not get to meet Jimmie. That would have been awesome. But everything I described about the museum and track are real.

Thanks again for the great review. They continue to put huge smiles on my face which is always encouragement to keep writing.

 

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

he must be coming home cuz he cant stand to be away from her.  It kills him not holding her in his arms at night.    Slo what if they were married and they had kids.. i know it would kill him for her to be the one in a clinic by herself with one of there kids. I just hope that it is a happy ending to this next chapter and not a tearfull one.   I guess i better get going to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Those are some of the reasons he is coming home. The next chapter won't end easily, but that damn prologue had to find its way into the story at some point. Beleive me it was as hard to write as it will be for you to read.  Look at it this way, not that we are to that point things can only get better. Thanks for the awesome review!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is a cool story.. I cant wait to read more.. please up date soon.  I can seee him eattting the chocholet off her shirt and her doing the same.. oh sorry this is your stroy..  hope to read more. soon.  :)

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79458
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I found this story a few days ago and fall in love with it.  Thank you for sharing this story.  I love way they both found each other and are so happy.  Everyone was so happy and loving. I’m glad that Esma came around and seen how all her children were was happpy with their loved ones.   Great story. Thank you. 

Summary:

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

wow cant belive some one was one step ahead of them in taking Mr. C out. Iam hopeing Esma gets her HEA. I think she really deserves it. Scum says shit like that in her face. She must want a shot at him :)

Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

Where is Esma when Charlie is touching Bella and why does Esma  not see it?  I dont understand. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082126
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

That was so cool. Im so happy for the two of them. I just know its the coume befor the storm.  I just feel like something is missing.  Can't wait for the next chapter. Love you n ur awesome stories. 😘😉

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91259
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Please up date soon. I'm enjoying this story. Edward is bad ass in love with a 19 yr old Bella. I'm just wanting to know how the kid fits in the picture. I hope you continue with this story cuz its really good. I will b waiting for your update :)

Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loving this side of Edward. So sweet to the girls and the way he is friends with Mike. Please keep story going to end. I still want HEA with everyone.  Thanks for sharing your story.  :)

 

 

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Volturi, daughter of the famed mob boss Aro Volturi, decided to sneak out of the house and use a fake ID at a bar, she never dreamed she’d meet the man of her dreams. However, both of them have secrets that could ruin the other’s life.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32714 Read Count: 39476
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2014 Updated: 28 Mar 2015
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to hear more of this story and learn about Bella and Edwards secrets 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  The next update will be soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601807
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this story. Please let me know if you are going to continue it. I want to read so much more about this new world of Bella n her walk to BDSM.  This Mafia Edward sounds to hot. please up date soon. :) 

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35366
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please continue this story. I'm thinking Bella will stay but she has been thur so much with her brother using her for all her money. How can she return to a man who does not know her for her true self n her real dreams. Will this be away for them to get to know each other and will they be able to find true happiness. I can't wait for the next chapter

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22440
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cant wait to read more of this Mafia story. It might seem like sparks will fly or heads will butt between them two. 2 people like Edward n Bella at the head of a family is looking for more trouble. But will love to read mre.  I love the story line already. Please post more soon . can wat for chapter 3.  From a mafia reader whom needs more Debbieg/ Debbie Grissom 

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53532
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: debbieg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really hope you are going to continue this store. So far I like it. The shy collage girl with a dead bit droug out dad. How will she handle Edward.? When will he make his move on her again? I hope you up date soon. I can't wait to read more. 

Summary:

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Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84338
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: debbieg Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

What a great story can’t wait to read the next chapter in their life. So glad that her parents where able to get away n protect their daughter from that Evil scum.  I love your writing n can’t wait for 2020 to start reading the next chapter in there lifts.  Love the characters and keep up the writing. ❤️—