another Cliffy...arrghh

Thanks for the chapter & ? update. not sure if anythings really changed because probably Esme just shot & killed? Bella? Edward? and Angela is dead on the stretcher? 

Somehow I feel we've come back to square one, minus idiot Eric.

Hope you can update soon, Happy Easter to you too!

Thanks for the Spartan update, but I got to say our Spartan is not acting very warrior like. grrr  That is really sweet of E. to go speak with his real mom & to have Daddy C. reunited with her in death at their favorite spot of land.

How does Bella not figure out where he is and go to him? Although, I'd be pretty pissed if I were her right now. I wonder if she even realizes the extent to which she snubbed Edward by not going to him to check on him. That did seem rather unnatural, that she didn't immediately run to Edward & hold him & be thankful they still had each other.

Hope you update again soon. 

I'm really looking forward to your next update. 

I was glad for the update & for him to get over himself & for them to have their HEA. I'm glad they were both able to see the others side of things & care more about that than their hurt feelings. I don't know if I was Bella I could be as generous & understanding with Edward's rejection. You wrote it very lovely.

So, looking forward to more;D)

Thank you so much for writing! Great read!;-D)

Oh no, now I"m caught up.

I'm gonna be jonesn for an update, hope your in the mood to write:D)

Is this going to be a HEA? It seems like an impossible outcome with the foundation that's being layed for this stories reality, if E bites Bella he & she will be killed. I'm not following why he can't turn her into a vampire. Are vampires made differently in this story?

Thanks for wriitng, I'm enjoying reading this story.

Yah, a readers guide sounds good;-)

;-)

Well if Edward changes like Em, then he should be stronger than him again, I hope.

K

I'm looking forward to your next update, thanks for writing.

Awe, ILY's are always so sweet.

So, no vege Bella. She's embracing the true vampire nature.

That's a great coincidence. So if Peter absorbs people's powers was doesn't he use Bella's since it's so awesome & all?

Great chapter, again.

Sorry to read your story did not win in the competition. I think you are a great writer. Thanks for the awesome recs, I say awesome cause most I've read & agree are great but a couple I haven't so will check out.

Thanks so much for writing this.

Another great chapter. In my opinion SM's got nothing on you in writing romance.

Okay that Edward & Bella stuff had me bawling my eyes out. So sad to think of him or her giving up the other.

Unghh very good, haha

Nickey what a great story I loved reading it and that is a huge compliment considering I'm a die hard E/B fan but your Edward character just added some lovely heart wrenching that just deepened Carlisle & Bella's love story. 

Thank you so much for writing this & your recs, I'm going right now to add you to my fav's*-))

Yeah, for the proud new family. Makes me want to remind my oldest that he was the beginning of all of us being a family. Very special marker in life indeed.

Thanks for the update & writing that you do.

;D)

oopss!

Hello clueless. So is she suppose to be above average intelligence? Not showing there, but I guess if she just assumed this father didn't want anything to do with her she wouldn't bother trying to figure out who he was.

Great chapter to read, glad they were able to stand strong in spite of Carlisle's references to Bella possibly infidelity, which is Edward's big button. I'm so glad he stood up to Carlisle & defended Isabella's reputation & consequences.

So, Carlisle was just wanting E. to man up all along, huh? That's a relief.

Can't wait for new update;D)

Absolutely enjoyed the update.

So will they kiss and make up? How do you get back to where they were? I think the family owes them a huge apology. 

So, is she pregnant? I hope she's not sick.

Looking forward to next update;D)

Duh, this week!

Great chapter. He could probably be trying harder, I'm thinking a lot harder. I still can't believe he could be so stupid. It does make you wonder if you can trust him, what other stupid things might he be capable of. I thought what she said to him was perfect.

I'm so glad she's finally letting him back in her life.

Good luck with all your future writing.

SDN was fun to read, I'm glad to have read it and thank you for writing it.

No it doesn't suck, what sucks is they couldn't run over Carlisle as they were driving off the cliff. jk I liked the story, it staarted out naughty, then got down right twisted, no love loss for Bella;D)

This was a killer chapter to write and I’m dying to know what you think and whether you liked it!         Yes, I'm dead too. Loved that chapter to death;D) Damn you write some steamy scenes there.

I'm so happy their getting to know each other in a good way. It's good for the soul. This is the payoff for all the previous angst and boy did it off good.

Thanks for writing, this has been a great read. I really like your writing.

I think it was an awesome chapter. Great ILY's and hawtlawnchair sexcapades;-} 

Wow, I'm the one indebted to you for providing the pleasure of reading your writing. Thanks again for all you've created, it's been a joy to read.

Thanks 

Your fan

I loved the drop dead sexy killer look you gave Bella in this chapter. This just gets better:D)

Yeah, he's playing her good.

Wow, their playing with fire.

I try to hold my criticism, but it's hard not to correct a misspelling. I write a fair amount at my job & was for years spelling a certain word incorrectly and was mortified, well probably not that affected, that I was spelling it wrong and that no one had mentioned it. I was also grateful when I was corrected. The thing was no one would of said anything to me but I asked them about their incorrect spelling & they informed me of the correct spelling. Ha ha, I had no idea. So, for me I'm always grateful to learn the correct way to spell something, doesn't mean I'll always get it right but feel better off for knowing the difference.

I know a lot of writers are feeling vulnerable putting there writing out there and wonder if any criticism like spelling correction can detract from the positive criticque so don't even mention the typos or mis spells. What do you think?

I also think it's great there's knowledgeable people out there that offer to Beta.

Kudo's to you for writing not in your first language. English is tricky. By the way I'm thoroughly enjoying your story, hope you keep at it.

Great chapter, I like this tack that you took with the plot development. Seems very natural & I like where it's leading...

I can't wait to read more, though the angst is always pleasantly unpleasant, I'm dreading what Edward is going to do to her.

Awesome chapter, great to read. Edward is adorable, Bella quite a bit of a bitch, I hope he can lighten her up some more. She seems too serious for her own good. She seems to think that it's getting her far but I think it really takes her farther away from where she wants to be, happy.

This chapter was great, very funny Edward/Bella & Angela interaction. I also liked his repulsiveness to feet and the ref to Jacobs probable nasty feet. Great reading, and great build I can't wait for Edward to tell Bella he loves her!

Thank you for writing this adorable, fun, inteligent and action packed story, what a fun ride it was reading it.

This has been such a great read, I'm leaving here going directly to WtS, can't wait for mooore;-D))

Love this story, I forgot how hard a time they had communicating back in the beginning, lots of insecurities and now I bet she wishes she didn't know everything she knows. Maybe not, ?   Oh, and how it used to be between her and Aro. I'm feeling the need to go reread this story.

Thanks for writing can't wait to read the next chapter of RotS!:-) love the kids story, especially Dame.

Are you serious? I can't believe Carlisle is getting back in my good graces and even with the knowledge he's a baby killer. You are some kind of magic writer to make that happen, haha. I can't wait for Aro to kill Marcus. All Edward has to do is tell him Marcus is going to put a hit on Bella. I hope Marcus isn't aware how attached Aro & Bella are, if all the guys have talked about it then maybe Marcus is setting up Aro & E., as well as Bella & Carlisle. aghh

Can't wait to find out

Okay, all other fanfiction has died to me. All I need now is this story, I love it. There's this slight angst because they have such a volatile relationship but I don't feel beat up reading it, it's just joyful to read/feel the love they have growing for each other. And this story is completed, yeah. Thanks for writing.

I'm liking these characters more & more the more I read.

;ove reading this story

I feel giggly reading this, it's crayza adorable;~D)

Thanks for writing. I'm also totally thrilled that I'm reading a completed story, I keep telling myself that I'm going to swear off incompete or works in progress as so many are incompete & don't get completed. Never mind, thanks again, loving it.

great action & suspense

Great chapter. I hope Bella shares with Edward her fear's of becoming pregnant and a mother.

Your Bella character cracks me up straight & drunk. I hope she stays away from the soft, that would be really sad if she became addicted

I'm also glad Charlie is gone, can't kill anymore unborn babies, but I sure hope that he wasn't killed by Aro, so that Aro could make rank. I don't know if Bella could be okay with that if she ever found out & you know the cops would only love to tell her/acuse her family if they did have anything to do with it.

Great read

Caius seemed completely like a J shores boy. Glad he's dead