Reviews by felon12
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625251
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: felon12 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Love the story. But this chapter has made me nervous. He just gained her love and trust and now Carlisle is forcing him to destroy their new bond. At the end of this chapter I understand that all of Carlisle's machinations had him all out of sorts, but as a follower of this story I would hate for Edward to go back to being Carlisle's Edward with out explaining to Bella why it is necessary. They need to work together to fool Carlisle into a sense of complacancy were he shows his true colors. They have become partners they share almost everything, Bella is still holding out with what she knows of Carlisle's true intentions toward her, but for the most part they are both on the same page. I would hate to see them go back to square one and start all over again. Edward should seek counsel from his brothers on how to proceed from this point so as not to raise suspicion where Carlisle is concerned. Also with the knowledge that Embry was on Carlisle's payroll did he have anything to do with Renee and Phil's untimely demise? All in all the story is great and is one of my favorites.PLEASE UPDATE SOON THE SUSPENSE OF WHAT WILL HAPPEN IS KILLING ME ALREADY AND YOU JUST POSTED. GREAT STORY, KEEP UP THE GRAT WRITING! 

Reviewer: felon12 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! My pitchfork is down and the fire has been douced. The chapter update was wonderful. I was a little nervous at the beginning, but I pulled through. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WRITING!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22173
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: felon12 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Things are really heating  up! Can't wait for the next update. WHICH I HOPE WILL BE SOON!



Author's Response:

No later than next Wednesday.  I was impatient this week and broke my Wednesday posting schedule.

thanks for reviewing!