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Amazed by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 570]
Summary:

amazed

 

They come from two different backgrounds and lifestyles, one simple, one fabulous, yet both know what it means to suffer.

Can they face the future together and learn to let go of their demons?

Can they find what it is to be Amazed?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29805 Read Count: 206087
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Ali-Mae will be so excited to see Edward again.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Now this is a big step in the right direction for Edward.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Now Ali will have the opposite problem from being picked on. They will try and use her to get to the famous guy!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Great reunion scene!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Yes, time for the ground work to be laid out for a proper relationship to flurish.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

More than friends!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

He is getting ahead of himself. He better ask Bella before it caused a fight of epic proportions.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

The hate of parents is spread like locust to their children. Perpetuating the hate through rumors and misconception. Why does it have to be that way?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Oh Edward, the naked idea, really. At least it made her laugh!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Bring to the office and lay down some authority, Edward!
Cartoon characters, much better than naked. lol

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

That should make for Ali-Mae's life around this school interesting. I'll bet some of the teachers will cause her more problems than the students.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

I hope this goes the way he intends.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

We'll just have to wait and see if it work as be planned.
Charlie is good to have on your side.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Smooth little s**t. He'll get his way after all!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Wonder who the gossiping geese were?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

The family life us picking up steam.
Has anyone asked Bella what here dreams were before James shattered them?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Completely different! Accompanied by a whole set of other types of problems.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Intimacy conversations are soooooo awkward!
How well does Edward do with keeping her calm.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Good approach Edward. Friend to friend. Now how does he not let his physical reaction to her get un the way?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Much better plan; see Maria. The nature verses future talk fell short a bit.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

That doesn't sound like a good plan.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

She just seems to know what he needs to hear.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

The emotional connections are causing physical manifestations!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Ah oh, Edward needs to make an appearance to keep Bella grounded.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Did someone call him to come rescue Bella?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

So much was taken away from Bella. Why have we not learned what punishment James received for his actions against Bella?
Alice may be happy that Bella is there but She needs to groveling on her knees begging forgiveness for what she did to her by sending Edward away.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Another chance to prove they are growing up and not letting something or someone else decide for them.
A second kiss, Bella's getting brave!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Um, doesn't the actual woman if the house get a say in any if those matters listed by Alice?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

What is the family waiting for? Esme needs to lead by example and apologize to both E&B.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Bella's level of comfort and PDA's is a huge step in her leaving behind the tormented ideas of being with a man.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Great house warming gift for Ali-Mae. The fact that Charlie brought them to the new house makes it even better.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

The perfect romantic moment to learn how to savor the time you gave together.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

What does Edward have up his sleeve?
Maybe he should become a pianist? Write music?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

He's going to propose, isn't he.
Hope it is well received; whatever he decides to do.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Rock everybody's world Edward.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Not bad, Edward! Not bad at all.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

All I can think about is Alice's threat about handling his wedding! Lol.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

So many changes to deal with and not the usual issues.

Lucky Shot by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 314]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ls

 

"Have you ever imagined something so beautiful, so enchanting that it must be a dream or a mirage?"

Take a gaggle of small town gossips, the doctor's son, the mysterious new single mom, add in a lucky shot with a BB gun and watch what unfolds.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9986 Read Count: 120097
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooo, tasty small town gossip!
Drabble on please.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah, a little background on Edward through the eyes of nosey neighbors and his loving mother.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Here comes the family.
Chatter boxes like the rest.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This seems to be told from Esme's POV. interesting.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This sounds like a great way to meet the newest member of a small town community.
They are both still arguing, how bad can it be?

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it, BB gun wound in the ass!
Isabella appears to have the backing of the Cullen women so far.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Beautiful imagery!
Bella sounds like a gonner!
Now Edward's turn to gush.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She is so screwed, and not in the physical sense. Bummer for her!

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sounds like Aiden is more than a handful.
Why is Bella on her own?

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Are these two brainyacs twins?

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

How old is Edward?
Bella is hilarious in her reporting of how Edward is perceived by the female populous of this tiny community.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Perceptive children aren't they. Haha

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, six weeks of brushing him off. Now that's will power; or maybe just stupidity!
Cobwebs, lol!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Edward's outward appearances are a mask for the hurt he has experienced, but Bella has not put two and two together.
Maybe he will show her his mature side now that he understands her hesitation to let him in.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I knew she was fighting the pull of his charms but how could she not see his intent was in earnest.
Family night at the bar. Sounds interesting.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh my, kissing his ass gas so many connotations!
You will have to sing, Bella?

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonder if the kids caught any of this interaction. If so, mom will get a razing for sure. Lol.
He is smooth.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was awesome! Great banter between Alice and Bella.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chuckling, I adore this bold Bella.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Cackeling.....Alice Cooper!
Soooooo funny!
Little Caitlyn waving beauty products in the air, playing hide and seek. Great visual.
Wow, small town life.
I hope Bella realizes that she will now become the target of all the women of said small community.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella has a rather interesting past.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Why would Bella need protecting?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Did Emmett want her to puke all over him, lol?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

They are messing with her head!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Edward just offered up Emmett to Rose on a silver platter. Family is great.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

The vultures are making their move to feed off all the gossip.
It's funny how men have a false sense of how good their grilling expertise is.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Even I would have freaked out after being accosted by little old ladies, strangers non the less, tring to inform me of ways to improve my sex life on a non-first date with the towns most eligible male. Edward should be attempting to remedy this. Not cowering in fear.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Did some one encourage the kids to broach the subject of combining their families? Was it Emmett, trying to get back at Edward?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What is with these old ladies and their sexual appetite? Lol.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Poor Edward. What a scare. Kids gave no idea how wacked out parents can become when they take off on their own.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Such aggressive behavior Bella. At least it gave her a opportunity to touch him!
Baby watch, Haha.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That's right, make him work for it.
The chase has intensified.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

She knocked herself silly when she tripped.
Saved by the bell, or unfortunately interrupted?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Smart little whipper-snapper isn't she.
Poor Bella finally got a taste and had to give it up to corral her youngins.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Why would Edward try to put the breaks on?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

His brain is short curcuiting. Lol.
Mr. Winkey and Ms. Veronica.....LMAO!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Boudoir banter.....these two crack me up!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What no ribbed ticklers for protection? Hehe.
Ten years, wow. No wonder she had a tough time resisting his advances.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yeah, wondered when reality would set in.
Now the baby watch is really on!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Once and done....fertile myrtle!
Hope Aiden gets his brother.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I guess someone felt the need to make him pay for his transgressions. Lol
Will Bella change her mind about marriage?

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Home birth. Bella's lucky she had competent medical attention.
Laughed at Edward getting soaked by his new born son.
Name?
Carlisle can't help he's the delivering doctor and grandfather to the little guy.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Yea, she caved!
Alice is going to pout.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It's a second wedding for both. Simple and family only is perfect.
No honeymoon, Bella's being ridiculous. The pool is a nice touch though.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Skinny dipping, WooHoo!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Awe, happy little family.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chuckling, At least he can admit his stupidity.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Horney, I'll say! They have enough to film a remake of the Brady Bunch. One more (including parents) and they'd have a baseball team. Lol
Very endearing story. Thanks for sharing.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

Who could it be outside Edward's office and what do they want?
So Jasper confesses they set her up. Then what? Does he expect her to just forgive him and become exclusive?
I have this feeling that both Jasper and Bella will be needed to get Edward out of what ever mess his visitors are trying to pin on him. And they will participate willingly.
Somehow thus threesome is going to survive and become stronger in their need for each other.
They are incomplete without the other two-thirds.
Am I way off base?

Author's Response:

Well, you have some interesting ideas, but as Jasper and Edward are cousins, I've said from pretty early on that there will not be a HEA that has the 3 of them as a couple.  Next couple of chapters will have Edward meeting some people that will get him back on track.

Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

Maybe Edward should tell the Dean that he needs to ask Angela which other professors will need to leave the university?
Where will he go?

Author's Response:

Haha.. I love that, wish I'd thought of it.  His next stop will be taking him on the next step towards healing.  

 

Thanks for reading!

 

xoxo

tb

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

All three of them seem sexually broken. How sad that they had to resort tip physical gratification to feel something in life.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

What is in store for Edward?

Author's Response:

Some eye-opening changes...lol

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

Alec and Mary Alice all in the same greeting. Edward should be over-whelmed.
Will Alice find a way to separate Bella from Jasper?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407945
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awesome bathroom and bedroom combination!

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella is such a mind mess right now.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh Bella where is your progressively open mind?

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She already has plans for this one and maybe the non specific hole humper. Hahaha

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awe, Rose is already a permanent fixture.
Bella is really showing some class right now, not.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Emmett?
She should just pull her mace out and threaten him for scaring the balance right out from underneath her unsteady legs.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And she's off to fairyland. Haha
At least she be relaxed in her comfy clothes.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She is messing with her own sanity. Haha

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Infringing on Bella's private bean time, Ooooohhhhhh that's pushing her limits.