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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I guess she got to sub-space



Author's Response:

Yes !!! she did .. she has reached a point in her submission that allows her to completely loose herself...it's a step in the right direction...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

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Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

it was another lesson she needed to figure out for herself



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Yup ... and those are the best lessons...

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

still would like to know what Leahs problem is

Edward is sure a control freak beyond dom



Author's Response:

Do you think he is a control freak??? can I ask why? ...

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think it was Leah in the house, she's after something



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What would she be after??? ((Just wondering what you are thinking ))   Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

the pinky story was just gross and I could have lived without it

 

but I will still give you a 10 because I love this story

Merry Christmas, post soon!



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Thanks I'll take the ...10 ...even with the pinky mouse...lol....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

this was mostly fluff but I still love the story

Author's Response:

I like fluff,,,

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

for someone who wants her to gain and eat properly he does limit her eating and drinking



Author's Response:

mmmm...he doesn't want her to gain, just see to her proper nutritional needs. He's not limiting her, he's just choosing for her. It is all part of the task and fear not she will enjoy it...lol....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

loved the love loved the smut, you are awesome



Author's Response:

Thanks... glad I can brighten your day...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

 

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Your girl is fine, she is just very tired,” and I was physically and mentally exhausted, I had none enough fighting for one night. I had won the battle but something told me the war wasn’t over

that should have been I had done enough fighting

Anyway great chapter I thought Bella followed his rules well



Author's Response:

Thanks ... I guess M missed it ,,, I will fix it ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

geat chapter, thought he was going to take her to the restaurant on the leash



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nooo...at least not yet and not where others would be able to see it ....thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

you  make it worthwhile too and I am loving every minute



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Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. I have a teaser for you....lml

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

another awesome chapter, and I never doubt you



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence....Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

 

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

maybe she should have thought twice



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Be careful what you wish for ...lol....I have this weeks teaser for you...

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

cant wait for forks



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Forks should be interesting ...thanks for reading and I sent you a seperate e-mail as thank you for leaving a review ...lml

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

awesome



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glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

No, I think Leah is a jealous bitch and Paul is a trouble make, and Bella is right Leah should just bend over.



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Leah should bend over and take one for the team ...lol....

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

hopefully Edward, Jacob, Seth et al. will make James pay

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Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

CURIOUS ABOUT THE PACT WITH JACOB

AND MAGGIE CAN'T BE GOOD, SURE TO UPSET BELLA

 



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Thank you for reading i have a small teaser for you....

After Bethany got everyone’s order Sue leaned over to talk to the table “You all look tired, what time did you go to bed last night?”

“What time did we go to bed or what time did we go to sleep?” Leah asked smugly raising her eyes in my direction.

“You couldn’t sleep?” Sue was concerned but Kim couldn’t resist “No there was a lot of yelling going on”

“Lots of yelling and banging” Emery added.

Before the conversation with Maggie Kim and Leah were teasing me in the restroom about how loud Edward and I were. So that meant that everyone else must have heard us too, which should have been evident by the laughter at the table. My face heated up as I tried to control my embarrassment while Edward just winked at me. Charlie on the other hand had no idea what was so funny came to his own conclusion. “I guess the kids on the beach must have been putting up quite a raucous if you heard it all the way back at the house”  

Thank god Charlie is so oblivious

“Oh yeah it was a raucous alright, as a matter of fact there was two of them”

“Two?” Emery questioned looking at Kim “We must have missed the second one”

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

she was always so isolated it is not a surprise that a manipulator like James could romance her off her feet. I met my husbance on April 10 and married him on June 5th, only after did I learn that he had an abusive personality, but luckily I got out with only a couple ofbroken bones during our 5 years together

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Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I think maybe Jared did care about her but she was white and could not go further

I am glad Bella is gaining some strength and stood up to James but she needs more and Edward will help I am sure



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That is possible ...first love an all that....

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Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

He gives her what she needs so Iguess that is what is important. Edward will probably not be happy with her showing her beamers and she will probably not be happy with Jake

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Saw the movie, liked it, thought Rob played his part well and showed more acting capabilities than in previous movies, I did not feel the chemistry between him and Reese. I love her but ths was not a good role for her. No I have not read the book yet. I never like movies that I have read the book first because the rarely measure up. If I had read Twilight first the movie would have probably been a dissappointment. A movie  can't do justice to a well written book. Although I have enjoyed the other Twilight sequels I was dissappointed because in them since I had read them all once or maybe four times and so many important parts never made it into the movies.

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Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

I wonder if James is paying Officer Hawk?

I think it is sweet Edward has learned some Quillette words

Send the family away and focus



Author's Response:

Sorry it has taken so long to get back to yout review ...Paying officer Hawk to do what??? Just wondering what your thoughts are....Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml

 

“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”

 

Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”

 

“This one doesn’t know what you mean”

 

Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”

 

“She did what your girl said”

 

“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.

 

Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”

 

“What would my girl have her do?”

 

She answered without thinking “She don’t know”

 

That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct.  “Would you have Claire do something to you?”

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

a terrific chapter pnce again, what were they auctioning off...people?

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

they are getting closer

Rob dressed about the same as last year, he is not always the best dresser but he still his hot and we would all agree he would even look good in nothing

I would NOT want to see him slip Taylor the tongue! It was just another stunt to avoid kissing Kristen in public.



Author's Response:

No??? No male bonding in your fantasies?..lol...they could re-write the "fire and Ice chapter'...lol..Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...lml

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Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

A+ cute chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, they needed family time...lml

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

CAN'T WAIT... LOUISE!

Author's Response:

New chapter should be up in a few days... thanks louise

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Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

great

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Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

AWESOME

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Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

THE CHARLIE OT WOULD BE COOL

 

GOOD JOB THIS CHAPTER, CAN'T WAIT FOR PLAYROOM TIME

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Date: 15 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

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Date: 15 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think this is my third time reading I Loved it but sure wish you had finished

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Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

I think Karen blames Bella for not putting the ex away and left her subject to his abuse (something about a cage) I do think she is dangerous because he drove her quite mad, luckily Bella was strong anough to survive him without too much residual trauma to her mental stability although she has some  and Edward is helping her.

Jess is stupid she obviously loved being Edward's sub (who can blame her) not she is just looking for love in all the wrong ways...it is sad



Author's Response:

I think with Jess it comes  down to the simple differances between the sexes - Men can have meaningless sex and like any dog in heat, does his studding and moves on. A woman is differant, sex means something to them, And once they give themselves they expect something in return, even if that's only...loyality...and I think that is Jess's problem, she expected Edward to be loyal to her and dismiss what she did simply because he had 'carnial knowledge' of her...so i think his saying he was calling the police was a real shock to her...anyway that's just what I think...thanks for reading...until next time...louise

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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

pretty damn sticky

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Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

yes she is an he his the cum lord

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Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I would certainly think her lesson was learned and was not easy for him. She means so much more to him than just a cum slut but I don't think she really understood what she was saying.

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Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

if that is the extent of her pms then Edward is lucky



Author's Response:

LOL... i always prided my self on not having any irrational mood swings during my cycle...LOL...just ask my husband....LOL...oh that poor man, to think he has put up with me for over 30 years of homonal womanhood....Pregnant, nursing, PSM and then just when he goes an gets a vascetomy ...Menopause kicks in  ...LOL ....POOR MAN ....

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Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

That girl has earned the damn pebbles and he did say next time

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Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

she should be grounded, I don't blame him he already had a scare and imagined the worse. MY husband occasionally disappears (usually to his brothers, being a do-gooder etc) normally I can reach him by phone so I don't worry but occasionally phones dead, or left in the car and I find myself thinking the worse and then saying something better have happened or I am going to kill him myself. LOL

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Well, duh (rolling eyes) it is an amazing story and you deserve every bit of the praise.

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

the man lives to takeover, his sister is phycho is she pregnant again?



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LOL ... he does .. he's a take control kind of guy ...LOL

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

now Edward in a cowboy hat and chaps does get the imagination going. I am really enjoying this even though I am not much for westerns

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

of course she finds him attractive

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

aww poor Emmett

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

this town sure does have a peaking tom

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

An awesome story that I really enjoyed. I hope to read more of your work.

Cheryle

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Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

seems like a big gap between last chapter and this...what happened?

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Nanny is bound to cause problems for these two

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

hot Sexward

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

Jacob is a big dick with a little peen

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time

he's such a man but a good man too

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

Bella would have the summer off whether she loses or keeps her job. Cope should be reprimanded and Jessice needs her butt kicked

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

he should propose already

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

I think its sweet

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

I can't believe Edward let her go

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

hurry.....

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Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

I thik you are doing well, they had issues to resolve

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

great

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Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

great

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

great chapter, hurry back soon

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

I thought yoy handled it great and am very glad it won't affect their sex lives

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

GReat story

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora

not an uncommon reaction

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

why Jack?

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Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

LOL

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

can't wait fr the next chapter

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

still here and enjoying it

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

thats a  lot of money, Bella can't get too upset

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

life goes on and kids grow up and parents die, sad but true

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

excellent story and excellent ending

Summary: Past Featured Story

 dominated

 Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner

Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19759
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
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Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yes just a little

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Family

did you get there

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Little Insight

love doesn't make you soft

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12973
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

first time for me they do say opposites attract

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

sweet

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

awkward at first really means nothing

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

poor boy

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

HAHAHAHA



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I am always so happy to see your reviews.

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

poor guy

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

yay

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

:)

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

that was a little weird

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Diamond Extra's

surprised by some of her likes but she has come a long way



Author's Response:

Edward was surprised too...

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward

I bet thats how you feel but you did a good job, Edward (uh you?) makes me smile and cluckle and even smirk.



Author's Response:

lol .... i enjoyed writing this

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
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Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers

awesome

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Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends

great start

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Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

loved the story not really the ending though

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129699
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Off to a great start

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

an orphan poor Bella

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

gee I wonder who it is with the green eyes

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am liking it so far but too bad not one spell checked it or made grammar corrections

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

of course but there is a Tanya and that always means trouble

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

poor sad broken Bella

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

very quickly, and I don't think 1st times with 2 virgins usually go so well but hey it is fiction

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

A feisty Bella

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

strange for some random stranger

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

uhoh

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

whats up with the elevators?