Reviews by cina24
Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39694
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh the poor thing.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yes go get him Bella.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Absolutely loved this sweet story.  

Summary:

All Tied up in Love

You never know where you might find that person who is everything you need or desire.  E/B.  HEA

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3488 Read Count: 4907
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2018 Updated: 01 Jul 2018
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. 

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29386
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Author's Note

Sending lots of love and prayers to Clo and her family. 

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10157
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a way to expose such an evil man. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fate is wonderful. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hockey Pucks and Library Luck

Meet Edward Cullen, aka The Great Eight. He's the Captain of the Washington Capitals. He's one of the highest paid hockey players in the NHL but he's a little lonely. He fell in love once and thought she was the one. Until she broke his heart and walked away. Since then he's concentrated on getting his franchise a Stanley Cup.

Then Bella happens. She's quiet, intelligent, funny and beautiful. She knows nothing about hockey, and could care less that Edward is famous. She invites him into her apartment for a dinner, and eventually that blossoms into a relationship. She has goals of her own. International travel, keeping her family members safe, and excelling at her job as a research librarian.

She's independent and doesn't like to be controlled. He's a superstar who likes to spoil the women he falls in love with.

This story is rate R for adult themes and graphic language.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49639 Read Count: 27427
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Thank you for writing such a special story.  I have been a bit envious of th Amish because of their simpler way of life.   I see them as such gentle souls that I was shocked how Bella’s father treated her and her sisters.  Glad they were able to start a new life thanks to some wonderful people.  Thank you Cina. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Movies and Popcorn

Sweet story.  I love Bella’s innocences. 

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65970
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

I knew they had to kill James or he would try to kill them. Never thought he was stupid enough to try for Bella at that moment. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three - Justice Finally Served

James is never going to let it go. So no it's not over.  Loved your story.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

Loved it.... I hope Bella and Alice can make peace.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Not so hidden

I'm very curious about the envelope.  Did Aro kill Bella's mom or is Aro her real father.  So many questions.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Who is Renee Dwyer?

I hope right by his side. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 24 May 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

I'm so glad he will be there.  Can't wait to see Bella's face (not see but read). 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Bella is Edward’ Favorite author.... interesting!  Hope he finds her before Aro does. Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

That is one beautiful ring.  I hope Alice comes to except Bella.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

Yes can't wait for Aro to go DOWN!!  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow what an amazing start. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Great update. Really like how you are building up this story. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my loving it.  Thank you. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

Loved loved loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

Wow....  that was great.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great info for Edward.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Alice is just very protective of her family.   Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Yes it's amazing....   love your story.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 July 18, 2017

I was sure hoping they could get past of what was bothering Alice.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

Oh that old nasty Bishop.  Glad Edward had something over him.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Love is in the Air

I'm not sure... but I wouldn't put it past him. Loved it. 

Summary:

Bella has everything. Perfect husband, perfect kids, perfect life. Until one day, her world changes, and the perfection she thought she had is shattered. Will she be able to pull her life together and survive on her own? AU, AH, Rated M for eventual lemon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44376 Read Count: 10216
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2019 Updated: 06 Jan 2019
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

I so loved your story.  Thank you. 

Man of Omerta by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

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Silence. Honor. Humility.  This was the world as I knew it. Isabella didn't change this for me, she made it clearer. She became a part of that oath as I spoke the words, because a man who couldn't protect his family, couldn't be trusted to protect the organization. “We settle things like men, amongst men, we don't run to cops like cowards.”

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52604 Read Count: 27435
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2020 Updated: 30 Apr 2021
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great update.   But Edward is just opening himself up to be blindsided by James.  

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 57011
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was so good... I kept hoping Charlie wouldn't show up and ruin Bella's cake.  Loved it.  Thank you. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

No I kinda thought she was the cake lady. Loved the end and glad Edward sees her in a better light. Still curious about how much she really knows about Jasper. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

They are all going to be so pissed off at Anthony/Edward when they find out.  Now that's what I was hoping for that Bella had no idea that Jasper was her brother.  

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm thinking Jasper is going to be so pissed.  Not only because Edward is with Bella but because noone told him how abusive Charlie is/was.  I hope Charlie doesn't show up on opening night or does anything to hurt the restaurant (like setting a fire).  I am just so worried about when everyone finds out Edward is Masen.  Hope Bella can forgive him. Great chapter. Stay healthy. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was thinking about you two the other day and was hoping you were going to post another story.  You are the best storytellers. I'm loving your first chapter and thankful you had Edward dump Tanya even before they got started. 

Summary:

Banner

 

***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76833
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

That was so mean of Carlisle to remove Bella. I guess Esme won't go against her husband even if it could be her grandchild. 



Author's Response:

It was awful of him.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 29 May 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

Oh my Mr Cullen was very harsh.  I'm not sure I trust Leah or her motive.  



Author's Response:

Carlisle is definitely not a nice person.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68238
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: cina24 Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Oh will Bella finally meet back up with Edward?  I'm dying to know.  Love your story.